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You know that jutsu only works with puppets, right?
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They were capable of absorbing the chakra both by direct physical contact or from a distance. Malice showed capable of even doing this through a puppet.


The link.

The page makes me think that Malice did that specifically. As in he was "even capable" of doing this with a puppet while the rest of the clan typically did this without puppets. Although Malice's page does sorta foreshadow the opposite.

Are we interpreting the page differently though?
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That page says that the KG gives access to the Spirit Reflection technique.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Spirit_Reflection_Technique

... Which requires a puppet. The editing on the Wiki is awful.

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EDIT: I believe that the bit you mentioned referring to Malice means that he could actually absorb the chakra through the puppet rather than having to do it personally. I think the confusion lies therein.
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That could be it. I haven't seen the movie myself so I was relying on the page. It probably makes sense that the information on the page was wrote in a confusing way.

Prince, you want me to explain it as requiring a puppet then? It doesn't matter much to me because I chose the Rinha clan simply because they specialize in medical ninjustu and not the Kekkai Genkai.
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Name: Kirin Haranai
Nickname/Alias: N/A
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Age Appearance: 14 or 15
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization: Konohagakure, Kirugetsu Hozuki, Shisen Inuzaka

Clan/Bloodline: N/A

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Wind (later, Wind/Fire)

Appearance:

Personality: Kirin’s smirk is something most enemies are unhappy to see—when she smiles, it’s because she knows she can win. She is a swift, brutal fighter who is more than capable of victory in a one-on-one brawl. If she can corner someone, the battle is over. Brash, bold, and fierce, Kirin is a proud young woman with a temper. Despite her tendency to blow a fuse in social situations, her mind is uncannily sharp when necessary. She doesn’t like losing, but doesn’t dwell on it when it happens. She only looks forward to the next rematch.

She is generally sarcastic and flippant, particularly towards her sensei, but she actually respects him very much. Mature for her age and physically well-developed, Kirin is often mistaken for an older ninja by other genin. With her trademark half-smile and a heart of steel, she is prepared to fight for her home.

History: Born to a bumbling, well-meaning mother and a gentle, soft-hearted father, Kirin Haranai spent an uneventful childhood in a large home near the heart of Konohagakure. Kirin was largely unaware of the political strife tearing the land apart, spending her time as a companion to her deaf grandmother Akane while her parents and grandfather worked. Miho Haranai, her father Sanzo, and her husband Hiroyuki ran the local book shop, supplying the family with steady income as Sai’s empire flourished.

Akane Haranai had, at one time, been an exceptional kunoichi; she was a ferocious warrior whose blazing red hair and orange eyes had been a beacon during many times of strife. Even in her waning years, she retains remarkable abilities, passing her adeptness to Kirin through a series of ‘self-defense’ lessons. While she taught her granddaughter no jutsu, Akane was thorough in preparing her for life as a fighter. In the months since the death of Sai the Conquerer, Akane Haranai has returned to her position as a shinobi, coming out of retirement specifically to nurture a new generation of ninja. With her red hair streaked with white and orange eyes still gleaming with resolve, she encouraged Kirin to attend the newly reformed Konoha Academy.

The classes Kirin took as a student were an awakening for her—she had always known she was meant to be a warrior, but she had never had a chance to fight. Her grandmother had always been careful to keep her from discovered her abilities, in case Sai’s reign continued. In the wake of his demise, Kirin is now able to fight in the open, which has always been her dream. Unfortunately, her shinobi skills are not what they should be.

Kirin sweated for every grade she got, maintaining a steady but below average performance in her classes. All of her attention was devoted to genjutsu and ninjutsu, easily her weakest subjects. Her taijutsu is exceptional, her only saving grace, as her Transformation jutsu was so weak it almost prevented her from graduating. She can only create a single clone at a time, and it is an immense drain on her concentration; her Body Replacement is good, but nothing special. She is terrible with handseals and tends to avoid using them if she can.

Theme Song: Two Steps From Hell – Dragon Rider

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Weapons/Items[/u]: Red crystal pendant

Name of Weapon or Item: Tiger Eye

Description: A gift from her grandparents. Kirin wears it as a lucky charm.

Appearance: A small crimson prism on a thin black cord.

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[U]Special Traits

--High Stamina
--High Physical Strength

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Jutsu:

Canon Jutsu

Wind Style: Violent Wind Palm ***

Body Replacement Technique

Clone Technique

Custom Jutsu

Name of Technique: Wind Style: Burst Gale
Type of Jutsu: Offensive, Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Short
Nature Type: Wind
Handseals: None
Description: Kirin concentrates her chakra into her hands and slams them, palm down, into an opponent. A fierce wind shoves the assailant back, usually knocking them off their feet, if not into the air.
Weakness: It takes a couple of seconds for Kirin to gather her chakra, leaving her vulnerable to attack. She must stand still in order to prepare. ***

Name of Technique: Tigress Style
Type of Jutsu: Offensive, Taijutsu
Rank: Dependent upon Kirin's chakra level at the time of activation
Range: Short to medium
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger
Description: A technique created by her grandmother, Kirin activates it by releasing chakra stored in the pendant around her neck. A thin ‘skin’ of fiery orange chakra forms around Kirin’s body, greatly enhancing her physical strength and speed.
Weakness: Kirin’s chakra drains at a steady rate as long as she is using the technique. Furthermore, it could take weeks for the chakra reserves in her pendant to replenish. ~

~Kirin is unaware of the existence of this technique at present.
*** Neither one of these techniques have been mastered at present.
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As for my character, I'll be keeping the Magnet Release affinity. Although my character has an affinity for Lightning and Earth, by extension, he is not adept with Lightning or Earth techniques. His major focus is Fuinjutsu and sealing related [weapon] techniques. The only release that he will have will be the Magnet release. Whenever he tries to mold chakra in order to perform any type of technique, due to his bloodline, it will result in only a Magnet elemental chakra. It's natural and it's genetic. If that means that I will not have any elemental releases until he is a Jonin, and possesses the chakra control necessary, then so be it. Just as Haku instinctively utilized his Ice Release, I intend for that to be for my character as well. It will be a compelled element, not necessarily a purposely forged one. The initial release they will be able to utilize will be the Magnet release. So I don't actually want the character to have three elemental potentials [Lightning, Earth and Magnet] I just want him able to use just the Magnet. No other element.

I also discussed with you about his linage. I'd rather all that, as in his Cursed genetics, to come into play through the Rp and be completely dormant for the entire start. As such, he'd be unable to exploit any of that for any advantages at the very start. I kinda assume you had a plan for that anyway, if not I'm fine not starting off with any of those buffs or additions and developing them through a lot of character development.

If that is agreeable, then I'd have no problem posting in the CS list thread. I just wanted to talk that over beforehand for clarification!

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Edited:
- Reworked his history to fit his age
- Reworked his Jutsu list to fit his skill

I hope it's okay now, I'm really eager to be a part of this RP
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Marrow, Mirth, Durn and Tuuj, you're accepted.

Ria has one issue:

Fortunately the Kunoichi didn't live in the era of Sai the Conqueror hence everything was calm and peaceful for her but that didn't last long,


There is no way for her to be 14 and not live during the Reign of Sai.

Dystopia,

I'm not a large fan of that Kekkei Genkai all-together because it's a highly-specific and very broken one introduced to create a villain for a movie. I don't feel like it should be applied to the RP. I would allow you to... bend the Kekkei Genkai to create a different effect; instead of creating perfect clones, possibly recreating a jutsu that their chakra matches. In this iteration, it would be sort've liked Fūka, even granting every elemental release (which as a medical nin her high chakra control could sway this to believable, if she knew a small pool of elemental jutsu) with the different she doesn't have to paralyze or kiss her targets. Unless, y'know, she wants to.

Tuuj,

I do have to admit it is with slight reluctance (and knowledge someone is going to rage at me) to admit you. In such, I am allowing Shira in with this clause: Nulled Rhetoric. Every piece of flowery, creative language will be subject to interpretation by Moderation at any time and cannot be used as logical validation inside the roleplay. Additionally, all metaphors, similes, hyperbole and analogies will not be considered 'true'. In short, the Nulled Rhetoric Clause just makes it impossible for anyone (aaaaannnyyyyone) to abuse what has been wrote into their personality, descriptions or history and apply it as the base for an argument.
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That could work. I edited it that way.

And she definitely wouldn't kiss people. She's a medical ninjustu and knows all the gross germs that could be in someone's mouth. :3
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So I will just have to take away that one part and it's all done.
Edit: Done now.
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Question:

Did you edit the team composition lately...
Durn and I need to seriously edit our posts now...

Can you fully fill up the teams for everybody's sake?
for me personally its very confusing
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made Maruki one year younger to meet the ages of his team members (13 and 12... so he's still a bit older than the girls)
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I'll fill up all of the teams once all of the CS's are posted in their proper place.
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Now that the team serving under Kirugetsu is ironed out, we can do a collab.
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Is Kami okay now?
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YAY! for collabs but i first need to edit my intro post to leave Taiho out..
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Name: Agony, the Unending.
Age|Gender: His gender is unknown but he refers to himself with masculine pronouns. His age is around the mid thirties.
Alliance: Himself
Rank: Demon ninja
Clan: Originally a member of the village Kohona, he was trained as a leaf ninja, even though he did not have the correct heritage.
Kekkei Genkai: Rinnegan Eye
Traits: Rarely talks at tall. Tends to not even say anything. The negative part of a split mind.

Appearance: 6'5" and weighs 195 pounds. Thin yet muscular, and pale skin like old bones. His hair is shoulder-length and straight. This along with it being jet-black and how thick it is makes it look like his face is floating if he is low light. His face is also marred by scars. This is due to his reckless nature and his intentions. If not for these scars he would be a strange form of handsome. One of his eyes is replaced with the black part of a yin-yang. his other eye holds the Rinnegan Eye.

History: Agony looks at the man cowering from him, and sighs. This again?
'A boy stands in the middle of the road, abandoned and crying in the rain. A man kneels down and opens his eyes to say something, but then the memory changes like it was broken film. He is on the road, walking with the man and laughing. He was asked if he would like to travel with the man, he guessed anyway. Curse his broken mind.'
He shakes his head as the memories streamed through his mind. This gave the man some time to get away, and Agony let him. He growls in self-aimed anger. She must be getting close. He had to get away before they melded.
'This man was a well known merchant that traveled between clans selling and buying goods. He also brought with him rumors of the other clans and items from them.'
He was in the trees, looking at the path. A group of merchants passed, and then some travelers. Among them was a beautiful woman with pitch white eyes and one of them seemed to be covered with the white part of the yin-yang, but Agony knew better than this. She looks right at him, and then looks away. He feels a force tugging them together, and snarls to himself.
'He saw all the clans, but when he came to the leaf village, he liked it more than anything. It had a homely look to it and felt... right. The memory changes again.
He was looking on as his adoptive father was banished for accusing the ninja of unreasonable murdering. A grizzled old man with a eye patch and green eyes was smiling at him for some reason.'
He shakes his head again in frustration. He did not like these memories of a better life. They always happened when SHE was nearby.
'How would you like to live with me for a while? I'm guessing you have no place to stay after that incident. Besides, I could do with someone to care for. It's been a while since I had some company. The memory changes.
He was a teenager now, helping the now senile old man along in life. He had a respectable job and it gave enough for both to live in good health. But a strange man appeared in the village, and sense then he had mood swings. Horrible changes in personality. At times he said nothing and said things that would frighten the bravest man, and others he was the kindest person you ever met.'
He growls and climbs farther up on the tree to look around. Nothing but forest for a while. This was going to be a long walk.
'one day the boy who no one knew just disappeared. No sign of leaving in the night or anything. But a man and women were reported leaving the town, and were said to look nothing like the reporter had ever seen. They say the boy's obvious seperate minds turned into two different people. Who this could happen to, however, is unknown.'

Personality: Reckless and merciless. Stubborn and head-strong, he cannot be persuaded from his descisions. He is cold and cruel, having no regard for anyone's life.

Combat Style: Messy and unpredictable. You will never know what he might do next. A savage cunning that only a beast could have backs this technique.
Nature Release: Steel Release: Impenetrable armor
Jutsu List: Rinnegan Six Paths Technique. That's all.

Weaponry: A great amount of small throwing knives. No really, a whole arm-length supply on each arm.
A shortsword and katana.
A belt that has five explosive kunai on each side of it.

Miscellaneous: Talks with what sounds like a female and male voice combined and distorted to sound dark and demonic.
Also, this character is very powerful and I understand if he needs to be toned down.
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Name: Agony, the Unending.
Age|Gender: His gender is unknown but he refers to himself with masculine pronouns. His age is around the mid thirties.
Alliance: Himself
Rank: Demon ninja
Clan: Originally a member of the village Kohona, he was trained as a leaf ninja, even though he did not have the correct heritage.
Kekkei Genkai: Rinnegan Eye
Traits: Rarely talks at tall. Tends to not even say anything. The negative part of a split mind.

Appearance: 6'5" and weighs 195 pounds. Thin yet muscular, and pale skin like old bones. His hair is shoulder-length and straight. This along with it being jet-black and how thick it is makes it look like his face is floating if he is low light. His face is also marred by scars. This is due to his reckless nature and his intentions. If not for these scars he would be a strange form of handsome. One of his eyes is replaced with the black part of a yin-yang. his other eye holds the Rinnegan Eye.

History: Agony looks at the man cowering from him, and sighs. This again?
'A boy stands in the middle of the road, abandoned and crying in the rain. A man kneels down and opens his eyes to say something, but then the memory changes like it was broken film. He is on the road, walking with the man and laughing. He was asked if he would like to travel with the man, he guessed anyway. Curse his broken mind.'
He shakes his head as the memories streamed through his mind. This gave the man some time to get away, and Agony let him. He growls in self-aimed anger. She must be getting close. He had to get away before they melded.
'This man was a well known merchant that traveled between clans selling and buying goods. He also brought with him rumors of the other clans and items from them.'
He was in the trees, looking at the path. A group of merchants passed, and then some travelers. Among them was a beautiful woman with pitch white eyes and one of them seemed to be covered with the white part of the yin-yang, but Agony knew better than this. She looks right at him, and then looks away. He feels a force tugging them together, and snarls to himself.
'He saw all the clans, but when he came to the leaf village, he liked it more than anything. It had a homely look to it and felt... right. The memory changes again.
He was looking on as his adoptive father was banished for accusing the ninja of unreasonable murdering. A grizzled old man with a eye patch and green eyes was smiling at him for some reason.'
He shakes his head again in frustration. He did not like these memories of a better life. They always happened when SHE was nearby.
'How would you like to live with me for a while? I'm guessing you have no place to stay after that incident. Besides, I could do with someone to care for. It's been a while since I had some company. The memory changes.
He was a teenager now, helping the now senile old man along in life. He had a respectable job and it gave enough for both to live in good health. But a strange man appeared in the village, and sense then he had mood swings. Horrible changes in personality. At times he said nothing and said things that would frighten the bravest man, and others he was the kindest person you ever met.'
He growls and climbs farther up on the tree to look around. Nothing but forest for a while. This was going to be a long walk.
'one day the boy who no one knew just disappeared. No sign of leaving in the night or anything. But a man and women were reported leaving the town, and were said to look nothing like the reporter had ever seen. They say the boy's obvious seperate minds turned into two different people. Who this could happen to, however, is unknown.'

Personality: Reckless and merciless. Stubborn and head-strong, he cannot be persuaded from his descisions. He is cold and cruel, having no regard for anyone's life.

Combat Style: Messy and unpredictable. You will never know what he might do next. A savage cunning that only a beast could have backs this technique.
Nature Release: Steel Release: Impenetrable armor
Jutsu List: Rinnegan Six Paths Technique. That's all.

Weaponry: A great amount of small throwing knives. No really, a whole arm-length supply on each arm.
A shortsword and katana.
A belt that has five explosive kunai on each side of it.

Miscellaneous: Talks with what sounds like a female and male voice combined and distorted to sound dark and demonic.
Also, this character is very powerful and I understand if he needs to be toned down.
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