And I can add pages,

Also, if you want to edit it, just make an account and I'll give you full access.

I use it for all of my RP's

Say Kalas, you seem to have a really good grasp of the Japanese names for your moves etc. Do you know Japanese? because mine were just peiced together from what I could find across the internet and would love them to be verified as I'm sure they are wrong (His Zanpakuto is a bit of a mouthful so a change wouldn't be too bad :P)

Everblight said
Say Kalas, you seem to have a really good grasp of the Japanese names for your moves etc. Do you know Japanese? because mine were just pieced together from what I could find across the internet and would love them to be verified as I'm sure they are wrong (His Zanpakuto is a bit of a mouthful so a change wouldn't be too bad :P)

Unfortunately, no, I don't know Japanese. I just use a range of different translator websites and cross-reference between each one. Google Translate is usually a good start but from there I double check that via romaji.me and then nihongo.j-talk.com. Most of the time I find the right Romaji and Kanji for my names but sometimes I have to fit things to the way I like them. :D

Oh my golly gosh!

Two hours crept by on me. It's already 2AM! :O

I need sleep.

Grimm, I have all of the headers up on the website and also have the home page, plot and character sheet pages sorted too. (Mostly)

I'll finish my characters tomorrow and hopefully the website too - I'll also make a little table on photoshop so we can have that on the front page.
Have good days/nights/mornings/afternoons/evenings everyone!

I'll be back later.

Cya Riddle.

Urgh, I'm so bad at History & Personality. I've written it up but it's not great. Hopefully it will suffice, he has a face now too after finding a picture. At some point I'll properly write up his Shinigami skills also.

@LostBrotherGrimm: Dangit, I wanted captain sooo bad! Guess I will have to settle for a lowly lieutenant then... *sigh* :P

@EverBlight: Looking forward to serving under Captain Genji - although he might be in for some troubles: my character might be the polar opposite of a 'perfect lieutenant' :P

I can't remember saying people couldn't be Captains either to be honest haha XD

But sure, should be fun Empath. And in the fullness of time I'm sure you can get promoted to Captain of another squad.

Well I put the idea forward in the Int check, evidently Grimm decided to go with it. Didn't think anything of it seeing as you guys didn't object. *shrugs*

Yeah I'm not objecting just completely missed it XD

Everblight said
I can't remember saying people couldn't be Captains either to be honest haha XD But sure, should be fun Empath. And in the fullness of time I'm sure you can get promoted to Captain of another squad.

I will hold you up on that in the future! ;D

I messed up? :P I thought that we all agreed on that. Botched it.

But yeah, Empath, there is a chance of getting promoted!

@Riddle - alrighty then, I'll make an account on there, so I can keep updating the table with time :D

Ehh? I kinda like the idea of not being a Captain straight off the bat. Gives me something to work towards/more time to work on my Bankai. :P

Kalas said
Ehh? I kinda like the idea of not being a Captain straight off the bat. Gives me something to work towards/more time to work on my Bankai. :P

That's kind of what we were going for :P

I'm only saying that I botched it in a way that I thought everyone wrote their agreements with it in the interest check ^.^'' although no harm is done.

LostBrotherGrimm said
That's kind of what we were going for :P I'm only saying that I botched it in a way that I thought everyone wrote their agreements with it in the interest check ^.^'' although no harm is done.

I know, I know, and I was simply agreeing with the idea. :)

Anyway, I've updated Jinzo's Shikai quite drastically. If you'd like to take a look and tell me what you think?

I like the changes a lot. Firstly it's not a scythe anymore which apart from being the tiniest bit Cliche would be difficult to wield for fast attacks. Secondly I really like that there is a stronger theme for the Shikai based around the chains. I really like the first ability using the chains as Whips and the second ability also in which you can throw links of chain as projectiles.
The third ability I have no problem with either but it is a contrast to his other abilities, which is fine and is probably what you were aiming for.

Now this is probably too forward of me, and feel completely free to ignore everything from this point on but I can't help but comment considering I love designing Zanpakuto. Firstly frot eh third abilitiy I think it would be hella cool if instead of the chains turning to Ooze and you being incased in Ooze you throw them out to the side and bring your arms in like your clapping and have them wrap around you so your encased by the chains.
I think the ability of shadow-stepping could be seperated from the main powers. For instance when the chains wrap around you, you start to turn black like a shadow and then drop into the floor and now you can shadow-step ect.
Finally I just think it would be cooler if instead of Oozing the chains/sword burns hot like it's being forged and starts to drip and then those drips form the chains/shadow underneath you.

I want to re-iterate there is no need for you to adopt any of this, I just wanted to give some construction added on. But I know what it's like for people to suggest things and then you never really feel like it's 'your' Zanpakuto so absolutely no worries if you choose to ignore all this :)

On the whole awesome edits in my opinion.

Thanks Ever, I'm glad you like them.

In regards to your suggestions, I love them. I'm all for working with other people's suggestions because, although it is my zanpakuto, I may not always have the best ideas for the concept I'm trying to put across. And there are people like you, who enjoy zanpakuto design, who can see my concept from a different angle and add something better. It's always a shame to pass stuff like that up. :D

So thanks again, your ideas are welcomed. I'm just having trouble understanding what you mean by "Finally I just think it would be cooler if instead of Oozing the chains/sword burns hot like it's being forged and starts to drip and then those drips form the chains/shadow underneath you." Do you mean this in regards to the shadow-stepping or how his chains grow when he grabs them?

Edit:

Also, I might have to see what ideas you'd have for a Bankai. I am currently thinking of cross between multiple chains and James Heller (Prototype 2) with an attack similar to his Devastator Attack. But I'm open to ideas.

Aha! so glad as I was hoping you would see it that way instead of intrusive.

How the chains grow. The super-heat (Obviously not affecting his body etc) and literally melt to molten metal and drip either onto the floor or something similar and then start to cool down revealing they are now chains. When I said shadow below you I was imagining when you use your shadow step ability the chains (after wrapping around you) melt again and drip onto the floor turning that black to, into a shadow into which you disappear.
The shadow-stepping I have no problem with, I assume it's like Koryaku's ability? but as you say you can't step into opponents shadows which is a limit I really like.

Finally I would never think the idea I put forward are better than your own, it's all down to a sense of personal style and I suggested what I would think would be really cool. I'm happy you like them, and if you choose to use them that will be awesome. But your style might be different to mine, which is completely fine and awesome. and far be it from me to push my ideas on others.

Edit:

I've never actually played Prototype but I see what you mean. I've suggested some ideas for you Shikai but I think it might be going to far to do the same for your Bankai, I'm willing to help just send me a PM or hit me up on Skype. But please don't think you have to ask my opinion on everything, your definitely capable of making up some cool shiz on your own, so only ask if you actually need help dude :D

Second Edit:

So I'm going to throw up what I'm thinking will be Nobunaga's Zanpakuto. It's only rough and it's not fully explained but it should give you all an idea of what he is capable of. Feel free to throw out suggestions and amendments to it, or if you had a completely different idea for his Zanpakuto please share :D

Okay, so I've added in the extra detail and made the Shadow-Stepping a sub-ability of the Become Darkness ability, which fits well I feel. Thanks again for your suggestions, I really like the ideas.

And I'm probably not gonna work on the Bankai until a later date, but I'll keep you in mind if I get stuck with anything :)

MysT3CH said
Well I put the idea forward in the Int check, evidently Grimm decided to go with it. Didn't think anything of it seeing as you guys didn't object. *shrugs*

Everblight said
Yeah I'm not objecting just completely missed it XD

Same haha

Kalas said
Okay, so I've added in the extra detail and made the Shadow-Stepping a sub-ability of the Become Darkness ability, which fits well I feel. Thanks again for your suggestions, I really like the ideas.And I'm probably not gonna work on the Bankai until a later date, but I'll keep you in mind if I get stuck with anything :)

Cool beans!

CaughtInTheRiddle said
Same

Woot, High*5!