Pete said

Proser said
It's hurried out the door a little but there you go; I might go back and flesh bits out now and then but not change stuff too majorly. Sorry for holding up the thread, other posts will of course be faster.

Pete said
The Asian with white hair, painfully feminine in Carrie's opinion, was stashing his carry-on and sword under the bunk. She assumed it was a ceremonial weapon, of which the practice of carrying was regaining popularity in many Eastern militaries, but something about his demeanor and the way that he delicately slid the katana out of sight denoted a sincere personal attachment to the weapon, and she wondered if he expected to use it or not. More so, she wondered if he was worth a shit with it, in the sense of swinging it around in gimmicky, ritualistic training. The thought of using it in a fight seemed out of the question, bringing a sword to a gunfight was tantamount to suicide in a modern gunfight, but you could never really tell anymore with the Asian countries.

Darkraven said
Man... Is it because of the way I'm writing? I've always had the feeling that I'm inaccessible to roleplayers because I'm more used to writing conventionally...