[OOC] Uldor, Land of Glory. (High Fantasy) (Page 3)

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Boopity boopity the waitress wants your order.

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I was gonna to order, but I was gonna let the other members catch up first. I didn't think it was fair to be in constant movement when they haven't been on, but it's obvious they're just waiting to post.

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Yeah, it's just that things are going slow again because we have people who haven't responded in two days time and characters that aren't exactly doing anything.

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Apologies for the infrequent posts, im currently returning home and should be able to post with more frequency.

Also I believe I called the trio of young sailors "dumb kids" this is not meant to be personally mean, but merely the angry musings of a crotchety old elf. :P

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I wouldn't say that 'The Salted Chicken' is a 'run-down shack' because it's really not. It's a cobblestone brick building with wooden walls, floors, and tables on the inside. Its only distinction is that the prices are cheaper and the business is run by a family. Though, conditions on the inside aren't at their prime and aren't perfect, they're decent.

Edit: It'd also be a little more efficient to describe the process of walking to said business and why. I don't remember reading about Dameon arriving.

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Apologies for the infrequent posts, im currently returning home and should be able to post with more frequency.Also I believe I called the trio of young sailors "dumb kids" this is not meant to be personally mean, but merely the angry musings of a crotchety old elf. :P

Of course. :P They really are a bunch of dumb kids thought, except maybe Rarden. You have every right to call them dumb. Haha!

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I wouldn't say that 'The Salted Chicken' is a 'run-down shack' because it's really not. It's a cobblestone brick building with wooden walls, floors, and tables on the inside. Its only distinction is that the prices are cheaper and the business is run by a family. Though, conditions on the inside aren't at their prime and aren't perfect, they're decent.Edit: It'd also be a little more efficient to describe the process of walking to said business and why. I don't remember reading about Dameon arriving.

Ah, sincerest apologies, although it would be in Dameon's nature to call anything short of a palace a "shack", as he is a bit of an entitled prick who is in an unusually foul mood, much in the way he called "Wartgott" provincial.

As for his motives and journey to the Salted Chicken I was trying to be economical with my writing as im on mobile, but ill go back and edit for clarity.

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BlackCat, Louis didn't take all of Arisu's money, Louis took 3 pieces of copper from her pouch and put his pouch in his pocket. Cancel that, Sightles's post confused me with the use of 'other'.

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The post talks about what Louis would do with "the extra money" and where would that "extra money" come from if he didn't have enough to buy food?

Edit: Nevermind

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I put her pouch in my pocket. Louis did take her money. :P

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Sightles said I put her pouch in my pocket. Louis did take her money. :P

I know that now. If anybody hasn't noticed yet, I'm a very cognitive reader, but I like to skim things a lot. But I think mainly the use of the word 'other' instead of a personal pronoun really tripped me up, and I couldn't have gotten it without the context.