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Hibiki No Echo said
My conclusion is actually that Chrys and Prince are very much equal, gaining new skills and such. In the end, they're even so Kiku decides to seemingly commit suicide, him expecting Primce to stop him takes this chance to attack but Prince traps him in a sea of ribbons and entraps him.Final Result: Kiku's undoing is underestimating his opponent allowing Prince to come along and steal the victory.


I suppose that's one advantage Prince has. He never underestimates someone. Always examining them. The fault is he chooses to trust just about anyone, despite knowing the repercussions. Only thing that's saved his ass from traps is his high perception xD

Course he had a rough start since he's lost a eye <.<
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I think if they had a fight, Chrys would try to land one hit. Think that's all he needs. He'll also use a few fake out ruses, petending to get hit and then taking the chance to attack. Example...

Chrys was so fast, every attack had missed, with his bullets sloely dwindling he had to do something. Crap, Chrys was in face, this wasn't good. With the sound of a gun reloading, Prince fired a shot, the sound of boom echoed. "Aaaaah!" Chrys's face was obviously in pain, his swords were in the air and his body was getting scloser to the ground. This was his chance! He charged with the intent of finishing this once and for all. Something about his movement wasn't right... "Oh no!" With thatPrince barely escaped the incoming attack, a vertical split kick shredded Prince's clothes. Dammit.
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I think if they had a fight, Chrys would try to land one hit. Think that's all he needs. He'll also use a few fake out ruses, petending to get hit and then taking the chance to attack. Example...Chrys was so fast, every attack had missed, with his bullets sloely dwindling he had to do something. Crap, Chrys was in face, this wasn't good. With the sound of a gun reloading, Prince fired a shot, the sound of boom echoed. "Aaaaah!" Chrys's face was obviously in pain, his swords were in the air and his body was getting scloser to the ground. This was his chance! He charged with the intent of finishing this once and for all. Something about his movement wasn't right... "Oh no!" With thatPrince barely escaped the incoming attack, a vertical split kick shredded Prince's clothes. Dammit.


But the thing is, Prince probably wouldn't fight him at all. Just avoid. That's mostly all he does xD he won't fight back with a actual person unless he absolutely has to. And right now I can only think of one trigger Prince would flip his shit and get down and nasty 0.0

Otherwise he'll just dodge and laugh xD
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Prolly. But I'll probably make ot so Prince has to fight him. Example him trying to Attack an innocent looking person who's really out kill everyome but they're so good they don't believe what Chrys says.
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Prolly. But I'll probably make ot so Prince has to fight him. Example him trying to Attack an innocent looking person who's really out kill everyome but they're so good they don't believe what Chrys says.


But even then it wouldn't be enough for Prince to actually attack. Just get in the way. So in essence he body block and basically force Chrys to either stop, or kill Prince.

It's very hard to get Prince to actually fight seriously xD unless you set off his trigger.
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Then he'll prolly shoot off bullets as a keepaway tactic then using ribbons or ropes to tie up Chrys to stop. It's basically how I see a battle between the two go.
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Pixie needs to hurry it up! *shakes*


I was browsing for an apt "sorry" gif of some kind, but came up as well and I think it encompasses what I have to say better.
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Then he'll prolly shoot off bullets as a keepaway tactic then using ribbons or ropes to tie up Chrys to stop. It's basically how I see a battle between the two go.


Doubtful. Waste of bullets and after some time getting to know him, Chrys probably would know he'd never actually get shot. Ropes probably. But he'd never actually attack even if it's false attacks. He's more likely to just start shooting himself instead XD

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I was browsing for an apt "sorry" gif of some kind, but came up as well and I think it encompasses what I have to say better.


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Hey Rainmaker, mind if Xris "falls" from his ledge and lands on Pyotr's head?
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Sure, go ahead!
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Hold up. Was Xris even accepted in the first place? I don't see him on the first post. Um... Ike?

Oh yeah, incoming collab post.
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He missed the CS when I posted it here, so I PMed it to him. He accepted it over a PM.
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Ebil, if you re-read my post it sorta signals the end of his performance. One example being on the first paragraph,

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Isaac continued to watch the Harlequin's performance with interest, his smile gradually growing as he began to forget the scenario he was in. It went on for a blissful 5 minutes, as laughter, cheering, and good moments were created. It was going great until he wondered if the Harlequin used to be a performer in real life...Isaac's smile faded. Yet he continued to watch, and when the Harlequin had finished, Isaac was the first to clap, and it was followed by cheers and other chatter from the crowd as they made comments about his performance. Isaac sighed, his gaze still on the Harlequin.


and at the beginning of the second paragraph

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Pyotr went on and on in his performance, going from an over the top heartbreaking monologue, trying his earnest to draw sympathy from the crowd, to a rousing speech and finally ending his encore performance with a few light-hearted jokes, trying to break up the dire situation some might find themselves in, and make them forget about their worries if just for a few minutes. He flounced and waved his hands, the smiles and cheers driving him on, till he finally called an end to it with a last joke to send the crowd on their way happy, thanking them profusely all the way


Also, I feel like you're not exploiting the potential of your posts. :P For instance, when you said you were performing. What was your performance? You also simply stated your character had chosen a spot. You could've been more descriptive on where that chosen spot was, or what it was near. Sort've like Pyotr and the bridge. Another thing is what your characters thought process is when he's performing. Does he enjoy doing what he does? Does his thoughts go back on the past while he does his performance? Maybe relating to a memory in real life or such?

Also, just one more thing. I really don't want to come off as rude, or arrogant like I probably have above. But there shouldn't have been a large crowd for Xris to notice. Pytor had thanked the crowd and sent them away before Isaac began to speak to him. You could say maybe Xris noticed Pytor's crowd as Xris performed, and waited for his performance to end by Xris performing himself before confronting Pyotr. Or something of that sort,

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He flounced and waved his hands, the smiles and cheers driving him on, till he finally called an end to it with a last joke to send the crowd on their way happy, thanking them profusely all the way. (then talking stuff with happens with Isaac yada yada)


I just don't think your post really connects or fits with the collaboration post. When did Xris decide to come into the conversation? Was this after Isaac and pyotr talked and began to go on their lil' quest to find people? :3 Cause when I read your post it makes me think you thought his performance was still going on, and you decided to interfere with it.

I don't know. I just want to clear some stuff up I might just be seeing things wrong here. :L Apologies
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No, it's fine. Tips to help my writing are always welcomed :D

I actually knew it was the end of the performance, and what made Xris notice the crowd below was the applause. If one has a crowd like the one Pyotr had, even if not everyone claps, the sound would still be noticeable for someone right above.

I was also thinking that Xris would land while Pyotr was having a conversation, interrupting it and getting in the midst of everything.

And about the "Spot", that is Xris's thoughts. One has to remember to stop the good story telling when it comes to talking and thinking. Say your character is a non-too-bright thug, he would be thinking something like, These five allies off of main street are my hunting grounds, and nobody, especially that smart-alack, red-headed twit, can do anything about it!
I'm not trying to be a mean know-it-all, I'm just trying to answer your questions ^^

However, you are right about the post. Now that I look back over it, I could have done much better. I have to go for now, but I'll brighten it up a tad when I get back :)
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Collab Post is up and I edited it to be very crappy then it once was. That's what I get for trying to make like one post. Dammit.
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Casually waiting for Ryu to march his ass back here because I think I was planning on having a conversation with his character since Isaac left with Pyotr and we're the only two really left there not doing much. << Xris seems to have gotten himself busy too. Purr.
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I'll brighten it up a tad when I get back :)


Okay okay, i'll wait with a response until you do that so there isn't any confusion.
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Okay, I upped the post :) Hope it's better now.
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Casually waiting for Ryu to march his ass back here because I think I was planning on having a conversation with his character since Isaac left with Pyotr and we're the only two really left there not doing much. << Xris seems to have gotten himself busy too. Purr.


I was waiting for you.
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Serious?
SEE, IT'S THIS KIND OF MISCOMMUNICATION THAT RUINS RELATIONSHIPS LIKE THESE, HAROLD.
Seeing as you're here, and everyone's getting up and at'em, might as well write my post now!
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