Here’s my CS currently. Sorry for the lack of a history I’ll be working on that shortly but I’m posting the rest here to look for criticism or opinions on it if anyone has any!
(EDIT: Added a theme song for the character.)
Theme SongName: Tsubasa Orochi
Appearance: At a height of 6’2” and 165 lbs is a tall but slim man. Tsubasa wears the standard shihakusho, and wears a plain black pair of gloves on his hands with a black Kido Corps symbol on the back of each of them. Tsubasa has sharp teal eyes and a rather long reddish hair which he often leaves unkempt.
Age: 205 years old
Race: Shinigami
Rank: Deputy Kido Officer
Spiritual Pressure Color: Dark Magenta
Personality: Tsubasa is a rather enigmatic and secretive individual thus allowing him to fit in nicely with the Kido Corps as a whole. He often keeps to himself outside of combat and enjoys experimenting with new techniques in his spare time, always attempting to increase his repertoire of Kido abilities. In combat he holds a sadistic nature, often showing no mercy except for the mercy of a prolonged death when he understands that he has both the time and ability to extend it.
History: Shinigami Skills:Impressive Reiryoku (3/4)Impressive Reiatsu (3/4) Exceptional Kido Power (4/4)Zanjutsu (0/4)Average Offense (2/4)Poor Defense (1/4)Poor Physical Strength (0/4)Hakuda Expert (0/4)Poor Offense (0/4)Poor Defense (0/4)Poor Physical Strength (0/4)Kidō Master (4/4) - Tsubasa shows exceptional talent with Kido spells and spents much of his time improving upon them. Though he still lacks the talent to craft his own spells effectively he shows a skill for them that only a member of the Kido Corps could truly have.
Extensive Intellect (4/4)Extensive Knowledge (4/4)Average Hohō(2/4) - Though his speed is nothing exceptional he shows enough competency in combat to prevent himself from being overwhelmed by speedier opponents.
Excellent Mobility (3/4)
---Zanpakuto---Name: Achlys / The Mist of Death
Type:Kido
Sealed appearance: Achlys sealed appearance is that of a short sword.
Inner World: Tsubasa’s own inner world is a swamp often covered in mist. In the center of this swamps sits a house with a light in the window that stands out in the thick mist that surrounds it. Inside the house is where his Zanpakuto’s spirit can be found.
Spirit Appearance: Achlys is a half-serpent, half-woman entity that resides in the swamp. Her large eyes shining an emerald green and her immaculate skin a pale shade that does well to distract those away from her poisonous nature.
Shikai appearance: When in its Shikai form the blade of Achlys starts to glow a dark magenta shade and starts to resemble the appearance of a warped Japanese daito sword. The blade itself has holes throughout it, that seems to release an odourless and poisonous magenta gas, and splits in two at the tip. The two points of the blade bent outwards in a rake-like fashion. A gas mask covers his mouth and nose well a pair of goggles covers his eyes, helping to prevent him from suffering the effects of his own zanpakuto.
Shikai Command: Sekai o kabā, Achlys! (Cover The World, Achlys!)
Shikai Special Ability: Achlys, Rirīsu(Release)!Rirīsu is one of Achlys more defensive abilities. Rirīsu causes the gas releasing occasionally from the blade of the zanpakuto to pour out from the sword and create a poisonous smoke screen within a 5-10 feet diameter around Tsubasa. The poison cloud is of a low potency and exposure to the gas causes disorientation at the moment it starts to enter the victims lungs and irritation within the eyes. The cloud is a thick magenta which blocks all sight within it and prevents the ability to sense reiatsu of those within the cloud while also preventing them from sensing reiatsu at all. The length of time the cloud sits depends on wind, how open or controlled the environment is, and on average lasts between 5-10 minutes. The effects of the cloud effect both Tsubasa and others found within it.
Buraindo(Blind)Buraindo is an offensive ability that attacks the opponents eyesight. When used Achlys releases a momentary jet of gas from all of the holes in the swords blade simultaneously. The gas released is potent but also dissipates almost immediately after being released making Buraindo a close-range attack. Getting the gas in the mouth or nose can cause a coughing fit or choking sensation well the gas’s true damage is caused to the eyes should it come in contact with them. The gas eats away at the eyes for a short time, roughly 1-3 minutes, causing temporary blindness and irritability.
Hebi no kōshō(Bite of the snake)Hebi no kōshō is one of Achlys most deadly abilities. The twin-fang blade of Achlys in its Shikai form has a sinister attack. When the tip of the bent blades pierces its victim it releases gas from tiny holes around the tip that quickly enter the bloodstream and inject the Achlys venom into its victim. The longer the blade is stabbed into its victim the larger the gas bubbles that form within the users bloodstream allowing the effects of Achlys to range from simple vertigo, numbness, fatigue, and nausea to much more extreme effects like paralysis, convulsions, unconsciousness, and even death.
Bankai: Not Yet Achieved
