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Okay, I've posted. A warning though, it's a effing wall of text. I haven't included a case file yet, lose steam :)) I'll add it tomorrow.

P.S. I would like some feedback if possible, thanks :D
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Shit son, that was a wall of text. Mostly good stuff though, I like that a lot of things are coming together, kind of. LOL at the church possibly being a porno ring, that is just golden! As for feedback, other than some minor grammar and spelling errors, everything seems fine. I also think you messed up the order of Cooper Harley's name once.
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Wow, you really ran with that church plot point. What I had in mind was far less dastardly (and less interesting :P)
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Hahahaha, I just want to make as much possibilities for the players to choose and explore :D I'm currently revising and writing up the case file. I believe things are about to get interesting.
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Wow, you really ran with that church plot point. What I had in mind was far less dastardly (and less interesting :P)
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Shit son, that was a wall of text. Mostly good stuff though, I like that a lot of things are coming together, kind of. LOL at the church possibly being a porno ring, that is just golden! As for feedback, other than some minor grammar and spelling errors, everything seems fine. I also think you messed up the order of Cooper Harley's name once.


To be fair, I have trouble keeping his name straight.
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The double posts! Lol, and I think its been pretty interesting thus far, but im intrigued to progress. I want poly to get back on so he can try to counter that bus Lillith threw him under. *thumpthump*
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That's what you get from naming him after two motor-work companies, Cooper Tire and Harley Davidson. Also his name has a ring to it.
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That's what you get for giving him two first names XD
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Rookery said
That's what you get from naming him after two motor-work companies, and . Also his name has a ring to it.


Well, about time somebody figured it out.

Silent Observer said
The double posts! Lol, and I think its been pretty interesting thus far, but im intrigued to progress. I want poly to get back on so he can try to counter that bus Lillith threw him under. *thumpthump*


I've been here pretty much the whole time.
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Oh, you just haven't posted in a while then.
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Wew, I just finish writing up the updated Case File. Things are moving along quite nicely imo. Anybody can posts, free-flowing post order :)

P.S. I haven't revised my posts yet, was too busy with the case file. Just go ahead and posts, my revision is just grammatical anyways.

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I kinda want my character to go explore the church plot point, but I cant come up with a good reason for her to go to the chruch or to know that the vic was connected to it. Any ideas?
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Try this: Lilith heard about a high class party up state. Things were getting a little tense in Uni, seeing that there was a recent murder and she was interview by the cops. Maybe a little party would set her nerves at easy. Since it's up state, she remembers that's where Maria used to live, curiosity took over and she just have to find out more. There is two ways you can connect Lilith to the church, either by talking to the parents or you overheard/heard/told by Maria that she's part of/used to be part of a church.

I hope I helped :)
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That sounds good, but Lillith doesn't like to party alone, any other characters looking to join her?
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Wew, finally done with the revision. I think I'll bump the other guys, I've been wondering where they've been.
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Ah, an interesting counter to Lillith's statement... the only problem being is that it was already stated that she lives in a single room in the dorms. I guess it could be like a townhouse-styled dorm that he could break into... but yeah, no house.
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Shit, my bad, I must have missed that. I'll edit that to something more appropriate.
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You guys know what this RP is beginning to remind me of? Twin Peaks.
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Looks like I have some catching up to do.

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