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[Themes: Dark Fantasy, Alternate Universe (Avatar: The Last Airbender), Oppression, Rebellion]


Water. Earth. Fire. Air. Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them, but with her on their side, the world had only hope. A hundred years past and the former Avatar did with it. My brother and I founded the Rising, united a rebellion against the Fire Nation. And although our numbers are great, we have a lot to prove before we can save anyone. But I believe we can save the world.


Introduction

I want to create a roleplay in the Avatar world... without an Avatar. I want this world to be one were the heroes aren't born special and the rebels are the protagonists, where everyone has an equal chance to have a spotlight. I find this in contrast to a few other ideas I've seen, one remarkably similar, in that this roleplay is not centered around saving the Avatar or finding them. This roleplay is quite the opposite: it takes advantage of the time the world is without the Avatar and has no real way of discerning whom the new one is yet. In canon, Aang was not confirmed as the Avatar until the age of 12, so that should leave a solid decade before the Avatar truly becomes a factor.

With that said, I want characters and their bending styles to truly get back to their roots and cultural descent. Strong themes in this roleplay will be the oppression and abuse of almost every Nation aside from the Fire Nation itself. In this world, the Fire Nation will have won. Ozai will be the Pheonix King like his father before him. This world will not be about fighting a war or preventing mass destruction. That's already happened and in the past. This roleplay will be about rekindling resistance and starting a whole new war. This roleplay will be about bringing down a phoenix in hopes that it won't ever raise from the ashes.


Where this becomes an AU

This roleoplay is obviously an alternate universe, but from where does that start? What is the first and most fundamental difference? Well, it's rather simple:

Avatar Aang died in the storm as he left the Eastern Air Temple instead of being suspended.


Now the question is, how did this affect the world? Well, it did in quite a few ways. First and foremost, the dating system changed. In canon, the dating system is rooted in around epoch: the genocide of the Air Nation. In this world, that didn't exactly happen. The Air Nation, under intense pressure and with only a few thousand left of their nation, conceded to the Fire Nation and sent forth representatives to claim that the Avatar was dead. They willfully handed over all children that could have possibly been of age to be the Avatar, all of whom were executed simply to make sure the Avatar was, in fact, dead. With that said, what else happened in this world?

Well, the Fire Nation started with a brutal assault in the South, clearing through the Southern Water tribe with relative ease due to the superiority of their naval fleet, incredible tactical might of Fire Lord Sozin, and use of advanced technology such as coal engines. With the Southern Water Tribe locked down, the Fire Nation invaded Southern areas of the Earth Kingdom to set up small colonies, all while managing to keep their actions hidden from the rest of the world until Sozin could launch his assault on the Air Nation with the passing of Sozin's Comet. In canon, this would have marked the year 0 BG (before the genocide.) The Air Nation surrendered, having known that Avatar Aang had perished in the storm. Taken prisoner by the Fire Nation, held within the Southern Air Temple as if it were concentration camp, this intimately changed the course of history.

The Fire Nation began its campaign by pressing North. Fire Lord Sozin was in control of the East, West and South with the largest and most powerful navy in the world as well as the most prosperous Nation of the era. In a decade's time, the only Earth Kingdom City that had not fell was Ba Sing Se and the Fire Nation had yet to successfully assault any farther North due to an alliance between the Northern Water Tribe and Earth Kingdom that made the waterways and land North of Ba Sing Se almost untouchable. But, a stroke of luck fell onto the Fire Nation. Within the battered remnants of the Southern Water Tribe was born Kiareu, the Avatar of her generation. Three years into the stalemate, she was identified as the Avatar at the age of thirteen and taken by the Fire Nation.

Ordered by Sozin himself, the Avatar was not only trained in all four elements by masters acquired by deceit and manipulation, but she was brainwashed so thoroughly that she believed she was truly spreading prosperity to the world. In addition to that, Sozin was capable of using Chi Blocking to prevent Kiareu from entering the Avatar State, thus keeping her out of contact with her former selves. In short, Fire Lord Sozin procured the perfect weapon to conquer the rest of the world. Unfortunately, he did not live to see such a task. It was not until Avatar Kiareu was twenty-six, thirteen years after she was found, that she aided the Fire Nation in finally breaking through the Northern Water tribe. At that point, Fire Lord Sozin had died and his son, Fire Lord Azulon, had taken his place. It was at this time, what would have been 26 AG, that marked the new epoch: the birth of the Phoenix King.

Now this year was 0 APK (Age of the Pheonix King) and the Fire Nation effectively controlled all four nations. The home of the Phoenix King was made Ba Sing Se, the most impenetrable city in existence made even more so by leveling the ground to its Northeast so much that it could only be accessed by sea and expanding its borders to the mountains. Nearly a decade was put into creating the Fourth Outer Wall and the deep trench of seawater that surrounded it like a moat, but in the end, the Phoenix King succeeded in creating a Capitol more impregnable than the one before it. This would lead up into the world we know today. 84 APK with Phoenix King Roku inheriting the throne from Azulon in 79 APK and the death of Avatar Kiarue two years earlier at the age of 98. Her death was kept a secret from the world, but as the Phoenix Nation scoured the remnants of the Earth Kingdom for the next Avatar, the secret escaped. Now is the first time in eighty years that the nations of the world have had a real chance against the Fire Nation.


Corrected Timeline



13 BPK
- Fire Lord Sozin finds and commences the training of Avatar Kiareu, assuring she would not follow the same path as his former friend, Avatar Roku.


6 BPK
- Fire Lord Sozin dies at age 102; Fire Lord Azulon ascends the throne.


4 BPK
- Fire Lord Azulon forces a more reckless, time-pressed advance on the Earth Kingdom, including severing its ties with the Northern Water Tribe.
-Fire Lord Azulon successfully stops all import and export from Ba Sing Se and begins his march on other Earth Kingdom and territory (as well as Water Tribe camps.)
- Fire Lord Azulon and Avatar Kiareu successfully take over Ba Sing Se and execute the Earth King, ending the reign of the Earth Monarch.


0 BPK
- Fire Lord Azulon and Avatar Kiareu successfully breech the frozen walls of the Northern Water Tribe
- The Northern Water tribe agrees to surrender to the Fire Nation after the initial raids on their tribe.
- Pakku, considered the world's greatest Waterbender, is killed.
- The Fire Nation creates the Treaty of the Phoenix, signed by the Air Nation, Earth Kingdom General (former Head of the Dai Li), Southern Water Tribe and now Northern Water Tribe
- The Treaty of the Phoenix ushers in the Age of the Phoenix King


16 APK
- Phoenix King Azulon released the detained Airbenders from the Southern Air Temple and in an attempt to integrate them back into society (and somewhat as an apology for the forty-years of detainment creates new jobs and titles for the cooperative Airbenders.


34 APK
Arnook, future Chief of the Northern Water Tribe, is born. He is the first chief born during the Age of the Phoenix King.


69 APK
- Mai of the Fire Nation is born to a Fire Nation nobleman and his wife.
- Princess Azula is born to Prince Ozai and Princess Ursa.
- Ty Lee and her six identical sisters are born into a noble Fire Nation family.


78 APK
Princess Yue is born to Chief Arnook of the Northern Water Tribe and his wife. A sickly infant, Yue is healed by the Moon Spirit, Tui, by having some of its life spirit infused within her.


79 APK
- Princess Ursa conspires with Fire Lord Ozai to kill Phoenix King Azulon in order to save Zuko and make Ozai Phoenix King. With Azulon's passing at age ninety-five, Ozai succeeds him as Phoenix King and Ursa is banished from the Fire Nation.
- Prince Zuko becomes Heir to the throne of the Fire Nation with his uncle, Iroh, as Fire Lord regent


82 APK
- Avatar Kiareu dies at age 98. Her death is kept secret from the public by Phoenix King Ozai. Not even his brother or son know
- The new Avatar is born in the Earth Kingdom... somewhere..


84 APK
- Knowledge of the death of Avatar Kiareu is leaked to the Rising and the roleplay begins.


Notes
- Because Sozin essentially obliterated the Southern Water tribe in this universe, Azulon was never accredited as being an incredible tactician due to what would have been his chief accomplishment.
- Because Fire Lord Azulon is now accredited with the fall of Ba Sing Se as his chief accomplishment as a tactician, General Iroh was never considered the brilliant mind of his generation. Additionally, Lu Ten never died.
- Because Ozai ascended to the throne too early for Zuko to take the throne (or Azula), General Iroh was made Fire Lord regent. General Iroh has made dragon-hunting a sport with Lu Ten, as his history and persona are significantly different now and Sozin was too busy to encourage the hunt for Dragons in his era.
- Because Pakku, paternal grandfather of Katara and Sokka is killed, Chief Hakoda is never born and thus neither are Katara and Sokka. Kya and Kanna, however, remain the untouched.
- Because of the changes to the Earth Kingdom, Toph is never born.


The Nations

The Phoenix Kingdom
Leader: Phoenix King Ozai
Established by The Treaty of the Phoenix in 0 BPK, the Phoenix Kingdom spans the world over with representatives in every town as well as large embassies in every larger city. The Capitol of the Phoenix Kingdom is Ba Sing Se and is currently ran by Phoenix King Ozai. The Phoenix Kingdom has the only formal army in the world and it acts as a police force in every major city that assists in small towns as embassies see fit to help. The actual army of the Phoenix Kingdom is fairly small as most soldiers either become Agents of the Dai Li, which now take any bender to be trained by masters, that are the personal guard and secret police force of the Phoenix King, or part of the militant police force and set out to an embassy barrack to be used as they see fit. That said, the actual forces of the Phoenix Kingdom are spread relatively thin with a large concentration within Ba Sing Se and close ties with the Fire Nation, which itself holds and trains the sum of a purely fire bending army. This makes the Fire Nation often considered the actual enforcer of the Phoenix King as their army could be mobilized and used at any time outside the impregnable walls of Ba Sing Se.


The Air Nation
Leader: Monk Teyri-yhama
The Air Nation stands several thousand strong and is broken up into two groups. The fundamentalists that returned back to the Eastern Air Temple after their release and those that took advantage of the titles and advantages given to them throughout the world by the Fire Nation. Those in the Eastern Air Temple search through the remnants and ruins while they rebuilt their civilization and attempt to achieve enlightenment once more after the destruction of their culture. Although many Airbenders traveled the world, the second largest concentration of them is actually within the Fire Nation itself where they have been granted titles of nobility and work as secretaries of the Fire Lord. Iroh has provided them their own section of the city, known as the Little Air Temple, to practice their culture as they see fit, although most fundamentalists would call their practice a bastardization of their former nomadic culture. The third largest is in Ba Sing Se where they have received similar grants, but none to the degree of those in the original Fire Nation.


The Fire Nation
Leader: Fire Lord regent Iroh
While Fire Lord Zuko is being tutored by his uncle Iroh, now the Fire Lord regent, and being trained alongside his sister by their prodigious cousin, Lu Ten, the new Fire Nation has prospered greatly. With the assistance of the Airbenders, that were rewarded greatly by Fire Lord regent Iroh, the Fire Nation has become a peaceful, complacent place where an army of firebenders is constantly honed and improved using methods of enlightenment integrated from Airbender society. This new army is often considered far more effective and skilled than the one Sozin and Azulon used to take over the world, thus making the already-prosperous nation a huge player in the world as well as the cultural root of it due to the rule of the Phoenix Kingdom. Some say that the Fire Nation has gone soft in comparison to when Ozai led it, but the use of the Fire Nation Army to quell and uprisings has kept that word at bay for decades.


The Earth Kingdom
Leader: N/A
The Earth Kingdom and its social hierarchy was essentially dissolved by the Phoenix Kingdom, and was continually oppressed by such. As the Earth Kingdom is the single largest territory and Earthbenders technically outnumber all other benders, those of this land are often the ones that stand up and from time to time create small rebellions that are ultimately quelled by the Fire Nation Army. That said, the Earth Kingdom has no rulers or formal government. It is mostly a loose coalition of farmers and Earthbenders that make crude towns and settlements, while paying taxes and living under the harsh rule of the Phoenix Kingdom's militant police.


The Southern Water Tribe
Leader: Chief Kiroka
The Southern Water Tribe has not given birth to a waterbender since Avatar Kiareu as Fire Lord Sozin had wiped them out. The tribe now exists as the largest commercial fish distributor in the world, but aside frmo that has no real notable traits. Few waterbenders in recent decades have came down in search of talent and to extend former waterbending culture, but most efforts have been fruitless as the Southern Water Tribe shares the prosperity of the Air and Fire Nation. The boats and fishing techniques of the Southern Water Tribe are always evolving and becoming more finely tuned. Remarkable advancements in technology have been made in the Southern Water Tribe, and a direct line of trade have made industry from the Fire Nation easily accessible to assist in the mutual trade.


The Northern Water Tribe
Leader: Chief Arnook
The Northern Water Tribe was the last to fall and the nation that has managed to preserve its culture and animosity toward the Fire Nation to the most degree. Although Chief Arnook was born in the Age of the Phoenix King, he is not blind to the abuse of power and consolidation of wealth found by the Phoenix Kingdom. Additionally, while he has not seen first-hand, he believes that the Earth Kingdom lives in squalor while the Phoenix Kingdom resides behind ivory walls. He believes the Fire Nation exploits the depleted and debauch Southern Water Tribe. Because the Northern Water Tribe is the hardest Nation to reach, the embassy and militant police there is the largest, but least used. Most of the police act as guards for the embassy and the Phoenix King allows the Northern Water Tribe to essentially run itself with its own policing and preserve its culture without interference, aside from the taxes imposed on every Nation. The Northern Water Tribe, to this date, has not provided any more resistance to the Phoenix Kingdom, but many believe the Phoenix Kingdom and Fire Nation will inevitably be forced to bare down on them again.
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Reading right now but extremely interested. Plan to either earthbend or airbend
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Alright. When I get enough interest, I'll make an OOC and add more to this. Right now, this is just the 'meat'

I hate Interest checks that are barebone ideas. I just gave you damn-near everything up front.
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Yup lots of meat.
Lots of character potential in this, I really can't decide. A angry twisted airbender youth? Or a full of heart, optimistic earthbender?
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My personal character will be an Airbender. They've never been explored much. Very monotonous.
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If I make an airbender I want him to be so different from our normal airbenders. Make him angry, seeking revenge and justice. Perhaps a mental degradation as things go on, leading to a more sadistic and broken kid.
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Mine won't be along those lines, but he will be different.
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I want to join this really badly. Really, really, really badly. Dunno if I can, though, yet. Avatar is my favorite thing ever, and I have a tabletop game with an extremely similar setting: Aang died and the new Avatar is captured and raised to believe his duty is what he's is doing. In mine, they forced a Waterbender to twist his chi so he couldn't go Avatar State. The reason I might not be able to is because I have encyclopedic knowledge on Avatar and Korra and would feel the need to dispute everything I felt was wrong. >< So I will be watching and possibly joining in. If I do I have three game character ideas to throw at you Mr./Miss GM. Their fighting styles were created in my game so I have no idea if you'd agree with them or not. Regardless, I'll be enjoying this RP, in it or not. c:
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I absolutely love the amount of effort that went into this, it was a joy to read.

I'm very interested in joining, although I don't really have any ideas on what character I'd like to have.
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Wow this is very interesting. very cool take to the world... I don't know I'm thinking fire, a disenfranchised youth perhaps. OwO
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Just keep in mind the roleplay will be casual (because being Advanced means you most often get one high quality post a week and that's it), so you won't need to kill yourselves with elaborate posting. Actually, activity is what I'm looking for. I'd love for you guys that are interested to be able to just keep things going and have fun. We don't even need to push the rebellion quickly, if you'd rather just explore the setting for a bit. I'm sure either I or you could make a few subplots within this world.

Encyclopedic knowledge wouldn't hurt, albeit I have a very similar trait. For example, the use of waterbending to Chi Block is something you fabricated. There is, in no canon continuum, the use of waterbending resulted in blocking chi. It was only through a healing technique via waterbending. However, it would technically be possible to implement chi blocking and use bending, as chi blocking itself is non-genetic fighting style, but that would make the fact the character you mentioned being a water bender an irrelevant fact. In essence, anyone that has the prerequisite agility and training can be a chi blocker, but not just everyone can bend. :D Is that the type of dispute you would try to bring up? If so, I don't really care. The chi blocking in this continuum was actually done with acupuncture where instead of unblocking chi flow, the acupuncturist intentionally blocked it at the order of Phoenix King Azulon. I choose this method because although it is never noted in canon, actual acupuncturists believe that someone unskilled or ignorant that would try to dabble in the field might do more harm than good by blocking of damage chi paths. Using that logic and using hand-placed needles (not metalbending, as with Guo), it's not far-fetched to use this type of fabrication nor would it be unneeded material had I integrated it.

To anyone interested that didn't just boldly call themselves an expert with encyclopedic knowledge, I also welcome you, too. Your characters may come from any walk of life, but I remind you of this. This roleplay is an AU and is up to my interpretation. If you alter the core of a bending style and use it in a new, creative way, it may have unforeseen drawbacks and may actually dilute the bending style. I intend for Bending Masters, like Pakku (formerly), Ozai, Monk Teyri-yhama, Iroh, ect. to be the most powerful in their field using the traditional methods past down by those that originally learned bending from their predecessors, ie the Dragons and/or Air Bison. But, as we all know, you don't have to be the most powerful to be a complete badass and you don't have to be Avatar-level to influence the world. That is what this roleplay is about. That said, take these things into consideration. I'm going to be adding in some elements of my own, especially to Airbending as my personal character will be one. I will have the OOC up for all of you and include a CS shortly.

Thanks for your time.
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I too have a encyclopedic type knowledge about this more or less.
On another note, did they ever say if Amon in LoK took bending by chi blocking or did he use blood bending to alter the chill paths?
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Amon used a physical alteration to the body that resulted in a 'disrupted' chi path using blood bending. Unlike Chi Blocking, which is takes a while to wear off and can be undone with healing, this method was permanent unless undone by a) another blood bender making the path resume its regular flow or b) it being forced open via energybendnig. This was also noted in the fact that this technique required touching the victim's forehead, which is an opening of one of the eight gates as explained by Guru Pathik, thus a direct line of contact with the chi of an individual.

Essentially, it was the latter, but it does have limitations and implications.
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As I had originally assumed. Just wanted to be sure
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I hope it does not disappoint. Click here for the OOC.
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Is this still accepting?
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Yep. :P Just head over to the OOC for more info, bud!
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If we can get enough people, I could have an IC up within the next 48 hours for all those with characters made.
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Bam. Anyone else?
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Hold on, in this AU Lu Ten didn't die? But then Iroh would have been made the Fire Lord, not Ozai. The only reason Ozai overtook his older brother was through manipulation following his son's death.
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