Fairy Queen? I will consider that as a compliment, but that is a new one. x3
I have also posted two collabs. I don't want to look like I am rushing my teams progress, but I had to post the start of another collab we are working on, cause else I had to make the second post look like a -double post- something. Which I find dull to see, thus prefer to solve it like this. Hope that the collabs are enjoyable as I love that I was part of such nice collabs. ^^
[img=http://i46.tinypic.com/xclv9d.png] Name: Ryuu Uchiha Nickname/Alias: (He doesn't have one yet) Gender: Male Age and date of birth: 14. 05/21/462 Age Appearance: 15-16 Sexuality: Straight
Parents: Hatsune and Takashi Uchiha Length and build: Ryuu is 6 Feet tall exactly, and is very lean. Not too many muscles but he is nowhere near fat or too skinny. Weight: 150 Lbs Favorite weather and Season: Stormy Weather, and Winter.
Personality: Ryuu is not a very social individual, he always tends to keep to himself and shut out others as a way of defense against his own insecurity. He always feels like he is inferior to those around him and worries about simply fading away as one of the average. He wants to stand out and be exceptional, as the boy has made it his mission to prove himself worthy of being an Uchiha in more than just name. Since his parents had decided to leave the Village for Amegakure when he was just a baby. Since then he has grown up with his parents constantly reminding him that he would never be accepted by the clan, or welcomed into their compound. That he would never be loved. Ryuu's parents had said these mean things as a way to put down the child they had never wanted, the boy who ruined their lives and made them move away so they wouldn't be forced to raise him and instead could leave the boy to his own devices. This treatment led to a very sad and lonely boy. Ryuu wants only three simple things in life; To be Loved by somebody, Having friends for the first time, and to be an Uchiha in more than just name. The boy is also very intelligent and extremely loyal to his comrades.
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History: When Ryuu was only 4 months old his parents left their home Village for Amegakure. They had done so because they had never wanted a child, yet Ryuu had been born. Both parents hated their son for everything he was and they refused to raise him. By leaving the Village and basically being shunned by their clan, Ryuu's parents found a way to ignore the child and pretend he wasn't there without being pestered by the clan. Throughout his life, Ryuu was constantly told by his parents that he would be a failure and that nobody loved him and nobody ever would. This only drove the boy to work harder at his training. So he could prove that he was worth something. Then, one day when he was 10 his father showed him how to do the Fireball Jutsu that the clan had held. As a way to spite the clan. Ensuring a Non-member of the clan could do the Jutsu. Then 2 years later at age 12, Ryuu unlocked his basic Sharingan. It was a this point his parents deemed him old enough and left. To who knows where. The boy was now more alone than ever and he had no friends to help. At the academy, Ryuu was considered to weird anti-social kid and was often made fun of. This cause him to distance himself from others and focus on one thing only, training.
Theme Song: Warrior by Disturbed
[img=http://i50.tinypic.com/2h5tkk2.png] Weapons/Items: [hider=Weapons or Items] Name of Weapon or Item: Demon Flame Shuriken Description: A Demon Wind Shuriken coated in fuel for a flame so it can be lit on fire while it airborne. Appearance: [img=http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/139/b/d/sasuke_s_demon_wind_shuriken__complete__by_sophiieesanity-d65u81n.jpg] But on Fire
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Name of Weapon or Item: Kunai and Basic Ninja Tools. Description:
Name of Technique: Demon Flame Shuriken Type of Jutsu: Fire Release Rank: C Range: Mid-Long Nature Type: Fire Handseals: Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger Description: Oil is created via Chakra in Ryuu's mouth and is then Sprayed onto the Demon Wind Shuriken. The Shuriken is then ignited after it is thrown. Allowing the weapon to be covered on flames and ignite an enemy even if it doesn't directly hit them, just passes by very close. Weakness:Any Water based Technique.
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Name of Technique: Type of Jutsu: Rank: Range: Nature Type: Handseals: Description: Weakness:
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Summons
Name: Species: Age: (If applicable) Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.) Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.) Jutsu: History: (Optional)
Nice application. I am running a bit short on time, so forgive me skipping the formalities and such. :(
1. Personality and history are good. 2. Weapons good. 3. Using a technique from a young age isn't a special trait. I would more likely put intelligence there. Skills are things that can be taught and improved on the way. Traits are more or less gained. Experience or become cold/more friendly as example. 4.
Your genin has above the two C ranked limit techniques ; - The Great Fireball technique, - The Flame Bullet, - The Demon Flame Shuriken. ( I am not sure about this, as there is no mentioning that he can spit oil in his skills or techniques. It made me think of the Toad Oil Bullet Technique, which is a C ranked technique/ability. I would like it more if there is a mentioning if he can spit oil as a skill or ability, but that would likely require this technique. I will let another GM further consider this as I am a bit unsure to either accept or deny it now.)
One of them needs to be removed or you need to tune down the Flame Shuriken to where it is more a D ranked technique.
Thus a small change and I will accept it. Let me know when you have edit the Cs. :)
Gero you suck at explaining the difference between skills and traits.
Basically, skills are the things you can learn. Taijutsu, ninjutsu and the like. Cooking if you want. As you train them their skill will increase. Traits are closer to personality traits. Traits include chakra levels, any kind of special sensing capabilities, your characters natural affinity if he or she has one, extra limbs. Things that your character is kind of born with. Of course, new traits can be gained in due time, but it is easier to improve a skill then gain a trait.
With that said, the rest that Gero said is right. Intelligence should go to the trait section and being capable of fire ball technique should be removed from it. Rest of the character looks good. I'm a bit unsure if Kami Shuriken works without Paper Release.... Any GM's who know this?
After some digging and searching, I found out that Paper techniques are a field of ninjutsu. Not a real elemental release, like an advanced release. However, due being it quite rare and versatile, I remember that we have always been very careful with it. My advice would be probably do something else. Not that I am against somebody having it, but seeing we treat it as a more hidden/rare form of ninjutsu, I think it might be better if it would go to non KG wielding characters. The Uchiha has already one eyed tomoe sharingan, so I kind of don't think that he will need paper ninjutsu. (Sharingan is already quite versatile anyways. ;) )
Accepted by me as well. Post him in the char bin and I will add him to Team 11 of Amegakure. Best would be to contact Fieryfly to get some information about your team or what you must post in order to meet up with the team.
@JasonHero Sorry, I know that both Gero and J8 have accepted you, but I believe they may have overlooked something. It's not something major, but as a rule starting genin are not allowed to have great chakra control as a skill. If you change it to good chakra control then it is perfectly acceptable :)
Cause it seems it is a thing, I too accept your CS. With this, I think you really have enough GM's accepting your Cs. x3 Please post him in the char bin so we can add him to a team in Amegakure.
Little Alice said
Cause it seems it is a thing, I too accept your CS. With this, I think you really have enough GM's accepting your Cs. x3Please post him in the char bin so we can add him to a team in Amegakure.
He has been posted! :D.
I am ready to RP. Whenever I get info about how to introduce him xD.
