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thanatosDefiant said
Quick question: is it all right if we write our appearance instead of using a picture?


I don't think he would mind all that much if we used written appearances.
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Very sorry, please ignore the above. It was a duplicate post.
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Could have just edited the duplicate post and put that instead of making a third post you know lol.

Going for a youngin' eh? :p
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@Duthguy
The DF you get is the Hebi Hebi no Mi, Model: King Cobra.

@Diminuendo
Tell what DF you want to reserve.

@Dawnstar
The first thing I’d like to point out, please use the [Hider] code when make your CS. No one wants to see, at least I don’t, a wall of text filling up space.

Next would be the location of your character. This is party my fault, but I everyone’s gonna be starting at Lougetown. My bad.

Anyway, no problem in him having his own crew, but his self-control seems to be quite questionable. Just because he was going to take the blame for the entire murder, he lost his composure and killed an innocent man. That was somewhat dishonorable. I’m not saying that you have to edit your history, these are just my two cents regarding your character.

Not wanting to be mean, but just having Nitoryu or Two Sword Style is kind of plain. Don’t you want to assign a theme to your style or at least give it a name? Kumokenryu (Cloud Blade Style) or something. Anyway, the character sheet is good. Accepted man.

Cleaned it up. As for the bounty. Murder of that degree and since I doubt there'd be enough withnesses, is around 3,000,000 Beli


@Thanatos
You can, but I’d prefer an image.
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Oh jabber, sent you a PM regarding connections.
Wanted you approval before continuing.
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Character sheet is fine. Just need to fix certain parts.
Please elaborate on Party Tricks. Is he good at acrobatics? Can he breath fire? Can he pull a sword out of his mouth?
And Explosive Combat isn't really a technique; techniques are named moves that characters from One Piece usually shout out. (Ex. Gomu Gomu Pistol, Soru, Franky Radical Laser, et cetera)

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Jabber said
Anyway, no problem in him having his own crew, but his self-control seems to be quite questionable. Just because he was going to take the blame for the entire murder, he lost his composure and killed an innocent man. That was somewhat dishonorable. I’m not saying that you have to edit your history, these are just my two cents regarding your character.Not wanting to be mean, but just having Nitoryu or Two Sword Style is kind of plain. Don’t you want to assign a theme to your style or at least give it a name? Kumokenryu (Cloud Blade Style) or something.


I actually like the sound of Cloud Blade Style. It leaves room for more development in his moves. I might have to do a bit more work into developing moves for that though. I will keep the base three techniques I currently seeing as they are basic and I will let the cloud style develop later on. As for the murder, that was the part of my history I was unsure of. I've changed it now so that he committed the murder because he believed his death for a crime he didn't commit would dishonor him.
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@Dawnstar
That seems cool. Yeah, just go with that. That way, you'll stay consistent with your personality.
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@Everyone
I know I keep on telling you guys to use the [Hider] option and to make your character sheets more presentable by properly using Bold on some sections of the character sheet, but if that can't be followed, that's fine.

Anyway, I'll be making an Info Cache later on. All character sheets will be put there. I'll be the one who'll manage the character sheets that don't make use of [Hider] and Bold option.

@Daisuke
I dislike it when people choose logias as their primary stat since their semi-invincible unless their opponents have Haki or Seastone, but I like the fact that her mastery of her DF was quite poor.

History is okay.

As for abilities, please mention her current level of mastery of the fruit. And like Explosive Combat (See Thanatos' CS), Magma Combat is not a technique. Its more of a Fighting Style.

Rokushiki is a fighting style while Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai are techniques.

You mentioned that she can turn into magma. That doesn't need a technique, that's already a given. Well, unless she doesn't know how to due to lack of control of her fruit.
You also said that she could shoot magma out of her arms and make it rain magma by shooting magma into the air and letting it fall onto the earth below. That's a technique. Give it a name. Akainu had a similar technique.
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I-Am-X said
Could have just edited the duplicate post and put that instead of making a third post you know lol.Going for a youngin' eh? :p


Heh heh, to be honest it was more of a triplicate post. I edited the third one to apologize for the second one. I kind of hope a delete button gets added to the site.

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Better.
I'm seeing where you're going with this character. Pretty impressive.

I will revolutionize this forum. People will make character sheets that are neat and pretty to look at.
But one step at a time. I need to make this RP a thing first.

Will be starting this RP in a few hours.
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*Claps happily* I am glad to see that this is going somewhere. I am eager to put Vis into action.
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Oh yeah. To everyone who's joining, talk it out with the other RPers. You guys should establish or at least have an idea on how crews will be made. I won't be giving you guys NPC captains to choose from. I want crew decisions and compositions to be player-dependent.
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Jabber said
I know I keep on telling you guys to use the [Hider] option and to make your character sheets more presentable by properly using on some sections of the character sheet, but if that can't be followed, that's fine. Anyway, I'll be making an Info Cache later on. All character sheets will be put there.


Instead of making an Info cache, you can treat the first post of the OOC thread as the info cache, for example.
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/57799/posts/ooc?page=1

Just put all the characters in a spoiler and link their cs via permalink or whatever

Not really sure if this site has an area to post an info cache thread anyway. lol
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Compressing all character sheets along with NPCs, considering the coding system here, is going to be quite tedious.

And instead of just doing links, I want a sense of uniformity, so I'll be editing the format of all the character sheets. Well, unless you guys do it.
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Hmm, crews don't have to be all that big if you have people who happen to have a great deal of skill in battle. The straw hats are small compared to other crews but they are deadly. My current crew I would be looking at would be about ten to fifteen people who aren't that great in battle but will be npcs and then one or two other pcs. Of course, about five or six of the crew men would be working the mast which leaves about three more to work in the cargo deck and a few more to be kitchen workers and so on. I am not saying that the ship couldn't hold more but we have to consider that pcs will be more powerful then your average crewman.
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Jabber said
Compressing all character sheets along with NPCs, considering the coding system here, is going to be quite tedious.And instead of just doing links, I want a sense of uniformity, so I'll be editing the format of all the character sheets. Well, unless you guys do it.


Well, we could always set up a Sheet dump in the Character Sheet section of the forum. We could store all the Character Sheets there while having the OOC act as a info cache. I will probably get to fixing up my sheet later on.

Edit: Due to the fact that the post above decided to double this is a response to what happened before I posted the above.
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