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There we go, all paste in.
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greenhorn said
I did speak to Jed, but... I'll edit my post, since I didn't actually get the other GMs' votes. I'm super sorry!


Oh. Don't feel bad, hun! We all make mistakes ! I just wanted to check with everyone first so that we're on the same page due to limited spaces. c:

Sauron, I think we have to look over yours, but we'll get back to you ASAP.
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Oh. Don't feel bad, hun! We all make mistakes ! I just wanted to check with everyone first so that we're on the same page due to limited spaces. c: Sauron, I think we have to look over yours, but we'll get back to you ASAP.


Eh, Asuras put quite a bit of effort into the CS, and went into depth about his species. I'm ok with accepting him... Though, we'll wait until Grey and Lucius log on. Just finished one of today's tests... three more to go. *Sigh* May coffee save me.
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Take your time.
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Jedly said
Eh, Asuras put quite a bit of effort into the CS, and went into depth about his species. I'm ok with accepting him... Though, we'll wait until Grey and Lucius log on. Just finished one of today's tests... three more to go. *Sigh* May coffee save me.


I'm sure Grey and Lucius will agree with you two. I just want to make sure everyone is on board. Aww, poor Jed. It's Friday, hang in there.
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So, here's my character! :D Don't be afraid to throw some criticism my way, as long as it is constructive.
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Interesting choice, to name a snake thing after a spider thing...and a question.

How many special arrow things comes with her family bow? Cause that's always a problem with those things. Doubt normal arrows would do much against big bosses, especially when we have all these gunmen shitting bullets out of their asses. And out of curiousity, why does she have a bad sense of taste? I would have thought that snake-related beings would have a wonderful sense of taste.
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Chose that name because, well, I like it! xD And sounded Greek-ish, so I thought it'd be good, of course, not that her real surname is anything near Greek.

Also, as of now, she has no special arrows whatsoever, but I'd rather have her gain them along the RP because she comes from a Lamia society that trained hunters, so there wasn't really all that much of special resources to make things out of. (Should add that to the CS) And about her sense of taste, they say snakes, due to their carnivorous nature, don't perceive taste as we do. What it is for us a 1/50 is a 1/25 for snakes. I am not entirely sure of this info, but read it once in a manga with a Lamia, so I just took reference. ;P
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I'm going to have a anime/manga nerd out here;
It tends to swing 50/50, Either the semi-non humans have awful taste (as in food and fashion wise) compared to humans. due to growing up with no human contact. OR they have fantastic taste due to growing up with humans hand having much stronger senses, so they can balance spices, colours, smells etc much more finely. so its very much up to personal preference.
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Hebigami Shiho said
So, here's my character! :D Don't be afraid to throw some criticism my way, as long as it is constructive.


Here's a larger alternative image that doesn't have the HTTP across her boobs.



We have no objections towards the CS. That random enter on the second paragraph on your Bio made me confused, fix that, but no glaring errors. More of a back story would be nice but not necessary, at least not for me. Approved.
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Deadline's tomorrow.

Because of that, anyone who is still interested and does not want to rush to finish their character sheets, please PM me. I'll be willing to work it, but once again, do not send me one if you won't put effort or time into the character sheet (that match our standards, there's a difference between "effort" and meeting our standards, I suppose) or intend to dropout.

Otherwise, we'll be more than willing to accept your request.

Thanks.
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Lucius Cypher said
Here's a larger alternative image that doesn't have the HTTP across her boobs.We have no objections towards the CS. That random enter on the second paragraph on your Bio made me confused, fix that, but no glaring errors. More of a back story would be nice but not necessary, at least not for me. Approved.


Thanks for the heads up AND the new image. Was very lazy when searching for an image and when that one caught my eye I was like 'meh, this will do'. :) And well, I'd like to flesh out her backstory in IC, to be honest, but if you guys so want, I can add more to it.
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Hebigami Shiho said
Thanks for the heads up AND the new image. Was very lazy when searching for an image and when that one caught my eye I was like 'meh, this will do'. :) And well, I'd like to flesh out her backstory in IC, to be honest, but if you guys so want, I can add more to it.


If it means anything, I'm more than on-board for accepting your character sheet.
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Love the character! I can't wait for her to meet Alika, who's part bird. XD. I can already imagine the confusion Alika will have with Ari's fear since Alika was originally human before the enhancements.
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Cynder said
If it means anything, I'm more than on-board for accepting your character sheet.


Thankies! Then, I'll leave her like that and foreshadow a bit her backstory later. :D

Kilo6 said
@Hebi Love the character! I can't wait for her to meet Alika, who's part bird. XD. I can already imagine the confusion Alika will have with Ari's fear since Alika was originally human before the enhancements.


And I can't wait to meet her and be like, 'What's up with this girl and this....ferocious aura I feel from her.... (>-<) I'm gonna die. :'D'
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I'm curious as to what people will think of Leo. Normal guy, with a insanely demonic aura wondering round with a battleaxe and twin pistols.
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...meanwhile there's Varren, the energetic child-esque character, who'll be fanboying over everybody's armaments. Currently out at dinner, but I should be home around 10 est. *lurks on the chatzy*
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Fanboying over everybody's armaments?

So what, he'll be stroking and carressing Ier-Briar's armor?
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ERode said
Fanboying over everybody's armaments?So what, he'll be stroking and carressing Ier-Briar's armor?


He'll probably attempt to pick up Ier, unaware of his species, then fall into depression because he is unable to lift a six year old, >.>
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I hope this good i added more to the bio and explained his illusions a bit better. If there's anything else i should add let me know.

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