Yeah better to go with a shorter in-character expo than forcing out a long ass intro post this far from the start of the RP

Yeah I can agree with that. Just waitin' on Art to post. Anyone have a specific way that they want Rowan to die in? Brutally? Quickly? Slowly?

hey Art just to let you know you put defiantly instead of definitely in your last post.

I'll be posting after I go sleep.

That moment when you're sitting around all day staring at a computer screen with nothing to do.

Sorry for the inactivity. Stuck on writer's block for a while.

it happens to everyone.

Hey Art by the way are you positive that you wanted Puru to run away now lol?

like she said you can practically read her mind. don't count out old Gabriel just yet. His opponent is just faster for a bit, I just have to play the dodge game until Trans-Am wears off then well Exia is done. Not exactly the best move to use your trump card at the start of a fight. Those suits go down to low performance once Trans-AM wears off

I know I'm just screwing with you bro. I'm fully aware that Gabriel is more than capable of handling most people in this roleplay with his amount of experience. Also to answer for Green that was the general idea that we came up with I just didn't expect Green to go Trans-AM off the bat.

lol ya Trans-AM is nice, but you should test your opponents first. Especially with Gabriel, he was raised fighting Newtypes, Cyber-Newtypes (which aren't much different then Innovators) The speed will be a bit to contend with, but with you basically leaving your mind open to read it will be a quick fight. And side note if you leave yourself open I am taking a limb (which would end Trans-Am on the spot) just fyi. Otherwise ill have fun dodging and taunting after this one. :)

Character's Name: Jack Jameson

Character's Age: 25

Character's Gundam/Mobile Suit:
1st mobile suit (Start of rp) being used: GAT-X102 Duel Gundam (With Assault Shroud)

2nd mobile suit (mid rp) being used: GAT-X1022 Blu Duel Gundam

3rd mobile suit (near end of rp) being used: LR-GAT-X102 Regen Duel Gundam


Universe your character is from: Mobile Suit Gundam SEED

Link to gundam site your getting your information from: Gundam Wiki

Appearance: Stands at 5' 11" with a lithe, muscular build

Genetic Type: First Generation Coordinator

Biography: Jack is considered to be the next step in human evolution by some, and inhuman by others. He was born to the couple of Phillip and Martha Jameson, after having the Coordinator procedure performed on him during the first trimester. As he grew up, he found he could perform better than other people, or Naturals as he had learned they were called, surpassing his fellow students in most sports and always having the highest grades in all his classes. Most frowned at his existance, calling him a Patchworker, a derogative name for Coordinators. His parents loved him all the same though, and he returned that love, even after war hit and ZAFT struck his home.

It happened while he was out late at school, wrapping up a science project with a couple friends and running final calculations to try and minimize the chances for an error and therefor improving chances for a good group grade. The project, a couple of electric toy cars powered by used cooking oil, had taken three weeks of building, testing, rebuilding and more testing before they felt it was ready, and they still did calculations. As they were running the final test, the wall behind James was destroyed and he was sent tumbling head over heels into his friends. Picking themselves up, they watched the ZAFT Ginns destroy their home, destroying the local defense forces and then razing the town. Jack, worried for his parents, raced home to make sure they were OK, but instead found his home a smoking wreckage with their bodies lying just outside.

With his parents dead, Jack grew determined to stop ZAFT and enlisted with the Earth Alliance military, making sure they were aware he was a Coordiantor. This was greeted with much distrust at first, but over the years and multiple tours of duty, he proved himself multiple times and he eventually reached the rank of Lieutenant and was assigned to a Gundam, the X102 Duel with the recommendations of many Natural officers he'd served under. The recommendations, along with the amount of skill he'd shown in the field, top brass decided he was the best choice to pilot the Duel. And no Natural pilot was willing to pilot something they weren't entirely sure they understood. His first tour with the Duel put him against the Zaft force that had destroyed his home and resulted in heavy enemy casualties that lead to their surrender. After the battle, he was assigned to patrol the space borders between the EA and the ZAFT, and he did this dutifully for two years before he was dispatched to investigate a strange signal in the middle of nowhere that had just popped up from nothing.

Alright, let's hope this is good. Can edit as required.

I'd recommend not having the Cs say 'in his universe' as it is meant to be about your character with any other history alt bits thrown in with it. And unless you want to add the details and what not in roleplay then I'd suggest making your bio bigger. Also your third gundam has it's name spaced out to let you know.

Arthanus I'd appreciate any commentary you could place in this.

I know it's spaced, but when I go in to edit it, there's no space. I can't figure out why though. I'll also make the changes to his back story.

EDIT: Found the space and fixed that. Working on the back story edit now.

Edits made.

I would say he needs more back story into what makes him him. Right now its a bit generic without much meat. Otherwise suits look fine and everything else checks out with me.

btw, I've been doing some thinking about my suits. Namely, that they're gonna wind up overlapping with Paul's Destiny and the entirety of the Exia and Sandrock series as melee monsters. I like my picks but I'd rather avoid having the same general area of specialization as two whole lines and a final suit, diversity is nice. I've noticed we have a heavy weapons guy and a guy with a fuckgiant cannon but no real sharpshooter, so would it be okay if I edit my bio to use the F91 Gundam? It's not quite a sharpshooting-focused MS but its VSBRs make it the best for the role as far as miniature MSes go, there's no dedicated sniper MS in late UC that I know of.

I'm gonna have to change some details around but nothing major really, still gonna be the same basic character. Since I only have one post of my character putzing around it'll be simple enough to edit it and change what little needs to be changed. I've figured out a way to keep a 3-suit progression so I don't complicate upgrade timings n shit, though I'm still taking the F91 Imagine for a final unit. It's still going to overlap with the Destiny in the afterimages department, but there's only so much I can do when the show's creators felt the need to pile on damn near every UC endgame gimmick into their suits at that point, the exception being the Infinite Justice.

Sound good?

Speaking of the F91 Imagine, if I might make a suggestion for GreenGoat? Have you considered using the Amazing Exia as a final unit and throwing in the Avalance Exia Dash as the middle one? It just feels like a more natural progress line to me, from outfitting the base Exia with a bunch of performance-enhancing equipment to reconstructing it from scratch as an even better Exia instead of doing a jump to an upgrade of the Exia's canon upgrade. If it's about performance, even with the 00 having the twin drives system the Exia Amazing is pretty damn powerful, pretty much all of the high quality customs from Build Fighters are and the Amazing Exia is easily one of the best. Just a thought.

HAIL THE BASED MAHZ! WE'RE ALIVE! Anyhow to put it short I would like for you to add why you specifically were picked to the duel's pilot if possible Zark. It is a rather big hole in the history to be fair.

Also to Zero I have no problems with that.

did a little edit, I found a way to have a 3-suit progression so as to not complicate matters, poked fun of Seed Destiny a little bit and threw in something for GreenGoat, because I can not keep my opinions to myself even when experience shows suggestions like that one tend to go over as well as a loud, wet fart in a funeral.

SEED sucks in general...I just hope I can turn Kira into a likeable character and Shinn is a support guy in this rp...his anger's going to get him wrecked hard.