@book- accepted, also to let you know that Angelica do inherit wings they can use to help be evasive.

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BKburke said
@book- accepted, also to let you know that Angelica do inherit wings they can use to help be evasive.

Okay! Well then just image that character with white wings on her back because I'm in too much of a emotional break down to go search for a different photo. FREAKING FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST!!!

I'm just letting you know. You don't have to have a picture of someone with wings.

Name: Lilith

Age: 1,585

Race: Demon, Demon

Appearance:


Outpost: Absconditus- Working as a Rogue Demon

Skills/Abilities:
Lilith's Aura is so vast and so powerful, that simply moving can become an attack. By flexing and extending her muscles, she causes large arms of Aura to reach from her being. These "arms of pure destruction" are completely visible to the naked eye, thanks to the sheer amount of their power causing them to glow. They appear much like Lilith's arms, lithe and elongated...but outrageous strength hidden within. Though the ends form into hands, with fingers, there is no fine motor control. The fingers do not move, nor do they bend or squeeze. These behave more like an animal's' paw, in that, they digits are merely their for support or clawing. The size of the arms can vary, depending on the level of exertion Lilith uses. She can range the length of her arms from 1 single foot, all the way to 15 feet. The radius of the arms, which often take the very cylindrical form of her own anatomy, will vary from 1 foot to 5 feet. She can sling arms the size of people or buses, it all depends on her effort. What they lack in tactile function, they make up for with devastation. Whatever becomes struck by these limbs is hit with the full force of Lilith's strength. The arms themselves are as strong as Liliths strength is, meaning with effort they can push a car. Naturally if used together they're stronger, but still hold the strength of Lilith's punch in total (I.E She uses two arms to punch something, it will receive equal amount of her strength.) The arm is a conduit for her deceptively, horrifying physicality. Though they cannot grab or clutch their targets, they can pummel and pulverize them to nothing. Dodging them is quite difficult, as they move at as fast as a normal demon's reaction time would be. These arms can be cut, and they can even be severed by something that negates her ability for a short amount of time or if the user has something made of metal or other earth metals. These arms are an extension of Lilith, meaning when she is injured they're injured, weakening them. Metal or other earth bound properties can negate her ability, though it does not completely shut off her power. If a metal blade or object comes into contact with her arms, the arms burst into a mist and she has to wait another ten minutes to spawn that particular arm. Of course holy items also weaken her ability drastically, thought holy items will cause her ability to bareilly function if at all. (She can only use 4 arms at a time as of right now, as she gets stronger the arms will begin to grow in number. When the arms are cut, she must wait 4 minutes to use the set of arms or arm again. These arms are also like stated above, and extension of her, meaning it will take the same amount of strength to cut the arms as if they were trying to cut Lilith.)

Personality:
Lilith is a very quiet soul, almost rarely does she talk, She hates life and everything about it, the happiness, the joy of feeling the warmth of others, like she did when she was alive. She use to show compassion but now its just simply nothingness, no regret, no anger, no happiness, just a feeling deep down of sorrow. The sorrow of never being able to take back what she did so many many many years ago, the sorrow of leaving the loved ones long dead. Also allows herself to not be the center of attention which she does not favor when not fighting. She likes the quiet in general and nothing more, she will try to end a fight as quick as possible to return to silence. She does however have a much darker side to her that many others do not know about. Her demon side, though she can hide it extremely well, craves violence and the sight of death. She loves fighting no matter how much she tries to hate it, and this side appears on the battle field. What arises is something that little to anyone alive has seen, a second personality within Lilith, a true monster. She appears on the battlefield and this will be someone you wish not to meet, for blood lust resides in this version of her, a person that Lilith calls, Sis. She can be heard sometimes whispering to Sis, arguing with her.

Bio:
Lilith has seen the spoils of being a demon, and to her she can no longer stand by and witness a slaughter of others like this. There is however another side that also wanted her to become rogue. A second being if you will inside Lilith arose when Lilith started to change sides, becoming a rogue. Lilith only calls her Sis, but in truth it is the darker side of her soul, no longer craving to kill other kinds, but instead craving to kill other demons. It is not all blood lusting for all demons, Sis only wants to kill those who have done wrong to both the angels and humans, other rogue demons were always safe around her, but it didn't always seem like that. Now she helps the "good" side fight against other demons and get's to kill the other demons without raising alarms.

Other:
Theme Song

@Agent- those aura arms are kinda crazy. They have 30 meters of range (that's 90 feet in length.) they have no wear down(no physical fatigue) on Lilith. As far as them being removable, it has to be as fast as a bullet as well as something that negates the ability but it so not explained what can negate her ability. As far as their speed, you said they were as fast as her fox form but her fox form does not have a depicted speed. I also do not see a depicted number of arms as well as their set strength. It is stated that they can sling bus sized objects. It is stated that demons can toss cars but with effort. If the claws are a manifestation of your strength then this technically puts you above demon.

@slendy- your character can control aspects of earth, this I don't have much of a problem with how ever, there is no set limit to how much you can control as well as the fact you only need to see it to control it. This being said it is possible that you could control an entire mountain simply because you see it.

@Me Da Insane- accepted.

arowne97 said
Name: James HunterAge: 20Race: HumanAppearance: Outpost: none, but he recently ended up at Hell on Earth and is helping out with the fighting.Skills/Abilities: James has trained his body to the peak physical condition that he human body can get to, and is very skilled in multiple forms of fighting. He is especially good with his fists and feet, and is also skilled with ranged weaponry, even though he rarely uses it.Personality: James is usually silent, and doesn't like to speak unless he absolutely has to. He hates demons, and gladly helps with the fight against them, often time grinning when he actually kills one. Despite this attitude, though, he's actually a very caring, kind person towards his fellow humans, even though he's extremely hateful towards demons. He also has a really bad temper, and tends to get violent if truly angered. He also has an incredible amount of willpower, not giving into anything, especially anything the demons try on him.Bio: James was born to a family that was living in hiding, trying to stay away from the fighting. They were fairly successful, but on James's 12th birthday, a group of demons found his home, and while his parents distracted them, he managed to get away, but as he hid he was forced to watch them get killed right in front of him, their souls ripped out by a greater demon. From then on, he became determined to become stronger, so that he could finally protect somebody the next time that demons were attacking someone right in front of him, which is the reason for his hatred for demons, and for his extreme amount of willpower.Other:

Accepted but I think hand to hand combat will on work up to a lesser demon.

I'm wondering if I can edit Micah so they have a vague premonition - nothing overpowered like they're going to predict the opponent's every move, but something like that they have a general idea of the near future, and can see faces and know that person does something, but they might not know what?

So fragmented premonition?

Yeah, that would be a good way to describe it.

That's actually technically what it is. You know something bad will happen to someone but unsure of what or who is causing it.

Is that any better? or do i need to nerf it every more, also sorry about the meters thing, went into autopilot, typed meters but meant feet

I didn't know there was an easier way to describe it, that's helpful :> thanks!

@Agent- much better, the only thing left is to clarify the arms strength. Meaning how much can they lift by themselves and how much all together.

Sheeplon- fragmented premonition is fine, but note that you won't be able to tell who has harmful intentions, only know who will get hurt. Surroundings also in this premonitions will help tell location and time but they won't be clear as day to see.

Okay did that edit ^-^

AgentFallenSoul said
Name: LilithAge: 1,585Race: Demon, DemonAppearancetpost: Absconditus- Working as a Rogue DemonSkills/Abilities:Lilith's Aura is so vast and so powerful, that simply moving can become an attack. By flexing and extending her muscles, she causes large arms of Aura to reach from her being. These "arms of pure destruction" are completely visible to the naked eye, thanks to the sheer amount of their power causing them to glow. They appear much like Lilith's arms, lithe and elongated...but outrageous strength hidden within. Though the ends form into hands, with fingers, there is no fine motor control. The fingers do not move, nor do they bend or squeeze. These behave more like an animal's' paw, in that, they digits are merely their for support or clawing. The size of the arms can vary, depending on the level of exertion Lilith uses. She can range the length of her arms from 1 single foot, all the way to 15 feet. The radius of the arms, which often take the very cylindrical form of her own anatomy, will vary from 1 foot to 5 feet. She can sling arms the size of people or buses, it all depends on her effort. What they lack in tactile function, they make up for with devastation. Whatever becomes struck by these limbs is hit with the full force of Lilith's strength. The arms themselves are as strong as Liliths strength is, meaning with effort they can push a car. Naturally if used together they're stronger, but still hold the strength of Lilith's punch in total (I.E She uses two arms to punch something, it will receive equal amount of her strength.) The arm is a conduit for her deceptively, horrifying physicality. Though they cannot grab or clutch their targets, they can pummel and pulverize them to nothing. Dodging them is quite difficult, as they move at as fast as a normal demon's reaction time would be. These arms can be cut, and they can even be severed by something that negates her ability for a short amount of time or if the user has something made of metal or other earth metals. These arms are an extension of Lilith, meaning when she is injured they're injured, weakening them. Metal or other earth bound properties can negate her ability, though it does not completely shut off her power. If a metal blade or object comes into contact with her arms, the arms burst into a mist and she has to wait another ten minutes to spawn that particular arm. Of course holy items also weaken her ability drastically, thought holy items will cause her ability to bareilly function if at all. (She can only use 4 arms at a time as of right now, as she gets stronger the arms will begin to grow in number. When the arms are cut, she must wait 4 minutes to use the set of arms or arm again. These arms are also like stated above, and extension of her, meaning it will take the same amount of strength to cut the arms as if they were trying to cut Lilith.)Personality:Lilith is a very quiet soul, almost rarely does she talk, She hates life and everything about it, the happiness, the joy of feeling the warmth of others, like she did when she was alive. She use to show compassion but now its just simply nothingness, no regret, no anger, no happiness, just a feeling deep down of sorrow. The sorrow of never being able to take back what she did so many many many years ago, the sorrow of leaving the loved ones long dead. Also allows herself to not be the center of attention which she does not favor when not fighting. She likes the quiet in general and nothing more, she will try to end a fight as quick as possible to return to silence. She does however have a much darker side to her that many others do not know about. Her demon side, though she can hide it extremely well, craves violence and the sight of death. She loves fighting no matter how much she tries to hate it, and this side appears on the battle field. What arises is something that little to anyone alive has seen, a second personality within Lilith, a true monster. She appears on the battlefield and this will be someone you wish not to meet, for blood lust resides in this version of her, a person that Lilith calls, Sis. She can be heard sometimes whispering to Sis, arguing with her.Bio: Lilith has seen the spoils of being a demon, and to her she can no longer stand by and witness a slaughter of others like this. There is however another side that also wanted her to become rogue. A second being if you will inside Lilith arose when Lilith started to change sides, becoming a rogue. Lilith only calls her Sis, but in truth it is the darker side of her soul, no longer craving to kill other kinds, but instead craving to kill other demons. It is not all blood lusting for all demons, Sis only wants to kill those who have done wrong to both the angels and humans, other rogue demons were always safe around her, but it didn't always seem like that. Now she helps the "good" side fight against other demons and get's to kill the other demons without raising alarms.Other:

Looks good accepted

Make sense, thanks man

Hey I edited my post , if I need to change anything else can you tell me.

@slendy- it didn't save your edit. So try and just click edit and then submit again.

Ok. Did it.