Excuse me the triple post.
Commentary on Raiu:
- His speed is the maximum of his tier, which means he wouldn’t be allowed to have lightning powers on top of that. Lower it a little, maybe to 500 mph. (The speed of sound is 760 mph.)
- I’m always iffy about lightning, because it moves so fast that it’s for all intents and purposes instant. So his lightning attacks should be rather weak to make up for that. Unfortunately, I know very little of volts and amps, so maybe someone else here can give you a hand with that. Also, as LeeRoy already said, we need a maximum range on this.
- Keep in mind that, although he may have the reflexes to see a bullet coming, most bullets are still faster than him (mach 2 to mach 3), so he can’t dodge them at point blank range. Though he can duck out of the way of the barrel right before it fires, of course.
- Shock pulse: is the electrical charge harmful?
- If he charges an item magnetically, I assume it just starts attracting metal? Can he use it on organic targets? And how strong is the force it exudes? Say, if someone is holding a metal sword and Raiu magnetizes a nearby objects, how much strength would it take not to have the sword pulled from his hands? Also, keep in mind that not all metals respond to magnets. Primarily cobalt, iron and nickel do.
- Isn’t geisteel from Dark Souls? If it behaves different from normal steel (e.g. is stronger), please explain.
- Any sword made of metal can channel electricity. Is that what you meant or is there something more to his twinblade?
Commentary on Jin:
- I see you added the term “orbit” in the precision shot ability. Technically speaking, that’d mean his ship is at least 100 miles above the ground and that the bullet, in order to get from there to ground level in two seconds, moves 180000 mph. Uhh…
- a movement speed on the mech would be good.
- You mention how powerful the photon beam cannon is, but what about the photon beam lasers? I assume they’re weaker, but by how much?
- If the photon lasers and cannon are actual lasers, they move at the speed of light and are thus undodgeable. You should probably slow them down somehow or replace them with something equally cool that moves slower, like a plasma cannon.
- A heat number on the radium bullets would be useful. 2800 F is the temperature at which iron melts, if that’s what you’re going for.
- If one manages to sufficiently damage the X351 power axe, would it cause a nuclear explosion?
- Also, how hot is “super-heated”?
- I still insist that none of the droids individually can be considered tier 2. The betas have guns that can kill any tier 2 in seconds, and they aren’t even glass cannons to make up for it. And the alpha has an axe that can kill tier 2s just by touching them with it, doesn’t even have to be a proper swing. So either adjust the stated tier levels or remove the individual tiers altogether. The real question is what tier the four of them are together. I don’t have time to consider that right now as i gotta get to work, so I or Dinger will get back to you on that.
I'll get back to you too, Tharraleos.