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Team Blue is in the lead! I guess it's time for us Red folks to put in work, yeah?
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I can work when I get home around 5:30 PM EST. I'll have to read up a lot.
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Hey Yandere, that's a great post . . . except, I'm so sorry, you've already been rescued!

Randold said When he felt it was right Randold leaped forward his arms stretched out, when he came into contact with a small body he instinctively held her close has he started to roll forward. With a grunt Randold landed on the other side of the hole, although with absolutely no idea how close they were to falling.

Mokley said With barely enough light to see Hania's silhouette, Randold had brought her safely to the ground -- at the expense of his ankle, which was now trapped in a knot of roots.


Before my latest mod post, Randold jumped up to Hania, grabbed her, and continued on to land them both safely on the other side. Hania is now on the ground next to Randold.

I really hate to ask you to try again, but I'm not sure how else to handle it. :(
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Excellent posts from Green team! I suspect LowKey may be away for a bit, so we'll go on with Thomas and Kituo for now.
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Mokley said
Hey Yandere, that's a great post . . . except, I'm so sorry, you've already been rescued!Before my latest mod post, Randold jumped up to Hania, grabbed her, and continued on to land them both safely on the other side. Hania is now on the ground next to Randold.I really hate to ask you to try again, but I'm not sure how else to handle it. :(


Wait- what? I thought the platform was a really big thing -.-
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Wait- what? I thought the platform was a really big thing -.-

Hmm, you raise a good point. The idea in my head was that the platform was not that big, but then again I don't think I specified that in the descriptions.

Ok, it is established that Randold took a running leap and grabbed Hania. He made the attempt, he succeeded. However, he did so just as the last light was fading. When he landed, it was in complete darkness. Therefore, it may not be completely clear whether he landed on the ground or on a net of roots, which may or may not intend to drag you both inside.

Does that help, maybe?
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Mokley said
Hmm, you raise a good point. The idea in my head was that the platform was not that big, but then again I don't think I specified that in the descriptions.Ok, it is established that Randold took a running leap and grabbed Hania. He made the attempt, he succeeded. However, he did so just as the last light was fading. When he landed, it was in complete darkness. Therefore, it may not be completely clear whether he landed on the ground or on a net of roots, which may or may not intend to drag you both inside.Does that help, maybe?


That helps a lot, yeah. Im rewriting the thing now -
Would it make sense that the forest lets us speak any language and have it be understood by everyone? Because we obviously don't have any language barrier established and we come from different places in the world - possibly even completely different worlds.
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That helps a lot, yeah. Im rewriting the thing now - Would it make sense that the forest lets us speak any language and have it be understood by everyone? Because we obviously don't have any language barrier established and we come from different places in the world - possibly even completely different worlds.

excellent point! I had the same thought when we started but didn't want to make things more complicated than they had to be. I would've assigned that ability to the lanterns. Assume you're still very much close enough to the lantern -- or a lantern -- to communicate freely.
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Alright, edit is up.
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Mokley said
point! I had the same thought when we started but didn't want to make things more complicated than they had to be. I would've assigned that ability to the lanterns. Assume you're still very much close enough to the lantern -- or a lantern -- to communicate freely.


Huh never thought about languages, to be honest I assumed we all came from the same region in the world since culturally everyone seems similar.

Edit: Also Mokley seems blue needs a tactical mod post.
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Huh never thought about languages, to be honest I assumed we all came from the same region in the world since culturally everyone seems similar.


Well, let's see if I can compose a master list of where everyone's from:

Hania and Anise are from the fictional kingdom of Riverforde.
Arin is from a (presumably) fictional town called Mayloom.
Annabel is from the (again, presumably) fictional town of Mayford.
Kituo is from somewhere in a desert.
Quin is from Madley, Herefordshire, England.

And the rest have either not listed it or buried it somewhere in the IC.

Edit: Can confirm the need for tactical mod post.
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Well, let's see if I can compose a master list of where everyone's from:Hania and Anise are from the fictional kingdom of Riverforde.Arin is from a (presumably) fictional town called Mayloom.Annabel is from the (again, presumably) fictional town of Mayford.Kituo is from somewhere in a desert.Quin is from .And the rest have either not listed it or buried it somewhere in the IC.Edit: Can confirm the need for tactical mod post.


Oh man this means we can get into some really deep multiverse stuff if we decide to, but... might be best to try not to get killed by a wolf in a evil forest for now.
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Weak princess to the rescue!
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Wah! I finished two hours of writing a post and posted to find people had done stuff in the meantime!

Okay guys, uhm uuhhhmmm! You'll have to pick whether you want your version or my version of events -- and one of us will have to edit accordingly. ^^;

Sorry, shoulda let you know I was writing.

Edit: I need two votes one way or another to decide what sticks: Princess saves Randold and Anise or they all get separated. I am willing to rewrite my post if the votes go to the princess.

Edit2: Nevermind, I just figured out what can go down, I'm editing now. Nobody move! Stay!
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Hmm well in terms of a coherent story my vote is on the princess saving them, mostly since we already written up to that point be odd where suddenly she's not there whacking away with her magic stick.

Edit: Ok, *sits down*
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Ok, done!!

Let me know if anything doesn't make sense. I literally just hacked apart the last post and glued it together to make something new, with some added sentences. I kinda like it, actually.

Sorry Anise and Randold, but Hania's the only one right now who can make things happen with a prayer. ;)

Edit: ANISE. Why do I keep writing Ania. Whyyyyyy.
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Eh, mostly was for comfort nothing like praying to your homeland's gods for peace of mind. Also saw it as a good chance to show some more of where Randold came from.
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Mokley said
Ok, done!!Let me know if anything doesn't make sense. I literally just hacked apart the last post and glued it together to make something new, with some added sentences. I kinda like it, actually.Sorry Anise and Randold, but Hania's the only one right now who can make things happen with a prayer. ;)Edit: ANISE. Why do I keep writing Ania. Whyyyyyy.


I wasn't expecting Anise to be able to have anything happen with her prayer... for her it's more of a it felt right kind of thing. And I can't help but laugh at the typo to Ania XD

I like how things are so far. I like the desperation. I like this RP! Wooooo!
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Damiann and drewccapp, then excellent for the prayer that brings you all together! Woot for character development! Yay for desperation!

And now: green team is up to bat!
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Aww poor Hania! :(

Hey red team, if you guys are having trouble responding I can still edit. I'm thinking of rearranging a few things in that post to make it more relevant to everyone, and to give you all more than one thing to respond to. I'll do that soon I think.

Edit: Ok, Red team! I've severely edited your last mod post in admission that I didn't do a very good job with it, and in attempt to give you something more substantial to work with: Clicky for convenience

Red_massa I believe your post is still relevant so no need to do anything with that unless you want to.

I'll also tweak green team's post, as I forgot to mention something.
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