Team Blue is in the lead! I guess it's time for us Red folks to put in work, yeah?
Randold said When he felt it was right Randold leaped forward his arms stretched out, when he came into contact with a small body he instinctively held her close has he started to roll forward. With a grunt Randold landed on the other side of the hole, although with absolutely no idea how close they were to falling.
Mokley said With barely enough light to see Hania's silhouette, Randold had brought her safely to the ground -- at the expense of his ankle, which was now trapped in a knot of roots.
Mokley said
Hey Yandere, that's a great post . . . except, I'm so sorry, you've already been rescued!Before my latest mod post, Randold jumped up to Hania, grabbed her, and continued on to land them both safely on the other side. Hania is now on the ground next to Randold.I really hate to ask you to try again, but I'm not sure how else to handle it. :(
YandereNoodle said
Wait- what? I thought the platform was a really big thing -.-
Mokley said
Hmm, you raise a good point. The idea in my head was that the platform was not that big, but then again I don't think I specified that in the descriptions.Ok, it is established that Randold took a running leap and grabbed Hania. He made the attempt, he succeeded. However, he did so just as the last light was fading. When he landed, it was in complete darkness. Therefore, it may not be completely clear whether he landed on the ground or on a net of roots, which may or may not intend to drag you both inside.Does that help, maybe?
YandereNoodle said
That helps a lot, yeah. Im rewriting the thing now - Would it make sense that the forest lets us speak any language and have it be understood by everyone? Because we obviously don't have any language barrier established and we come from different places in the world - possibly even completely different worlds.
Mokley said
point! I had the same thought when we started but didn't want to make things more complicated than they had to be. I would've assigned that ability to the lanterns. Assume you're still very much close enough to the lantern -- or a lantern -- to communicate freely.
Damiann47 said
Huh never thought about languages, to be honest I assumed we all came from the same region in the world since culturally everyone seems similar.
YandereNoodle said
Well, let's see if I can compose a master list of where everyone's from:Hania and Anise are from the fictional kingdom of Riverforde.Arin is from a (presumably) fictional town called Mayloom.Annabel is from the (again, presumably) fictional town of Mayford.Kituo is from somewhere in a desert.Quin is from .And the rest have either not listed it or buried it somewhere in the IC.Edit: Can confirm the need for tactical mod post.
Mokley said
Ok, done!!Let me know if anything doesn't make sense. I literally just hacked apart the last post and glued it together to make something new, with some added sentences. I kinda like it, actually.Sorry Anise and Randold, but Hania's the only one right now who can make things happen with a prayer. ;)Edit: ANISE. Why do I keep writing Ania. Whyyyyyy.