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I dunno. Sounds like he just wants to make you laugh. Maybe you're misunderstanding the poor dear...


I fear it is you who is mistaken.

About a great, many, things.
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I fear it is you who is mistaken.About a great, many, things.


Your overconfidence is your weakness.
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Your overconfidence is your weakness.


and your faith in your friends is yours.
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I fear it is you who is mistaken.About a great, many, things.


*Pets my lightsaber*
You want this... dont you?
*wink-wink*
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*Pets my lightsaber*You want this... dont you?*wink-wink*


I've got two things Null wants, apparently.

Poor girl's hiding her feelings behind a veil of hateful ignorance :p
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I've got two things Null wants, apparently.Poor girl's hiding her feelings behind a veil of hateful ignorance :p


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I must have hit pretty close to the mark to get her all riled up like that, huh kid?
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how's this?Name: Zoltan ValkonSpecies: Zabrak Age: 32Gender: maleAppearance: Height: 6"1'Weight: 127 poundsApparel: white vest, brown pants that stop mid thigh. stealth matrix belt, combat boots, and modified mandalorian gauntletsWeaponry: ultra high voltage gauntlets, like a magmagaurd staff. Silenced DC-15A blaster rifle. DC 17 blaster pistol.Equipment: Plasma torch. Personality: he is very smart and slightly egotistical from his heritage. he views everyone as ether hindrances or target's and doesn't have much social skills to speak of, making it near impossible for anyone to get him out of his clamshell.Skills: stealth, robotics, ship hardware, hand to hand combat, torture, driven to kill.Bio: at the age of Five, his mother was killed in front of him by an assassin droid, a Besalisk, and a Roonan. then his father, a Jedi hunter, came and killed them in pure rage. his father, being a clone deserter, was constantly hunted by the empire and the new republic, when it was around. When Zol came out of the closet he was hiding in, he can recall that as being "the happiest moment in his father's life." he then saw his father work and, at the age of 14, became a bounty hunter with his fast ageing dad. he learned how to use a blaster, tamper with electronics, and how to fight by his father. at the age of 18 he went to Dathomir to receive his tattoo's, and was beaten down. he then isolated himself with that clan and eventually got his tattoo's. In the 2 years he spent there, his father died. he hunted out his grave, dug up his grave and took his stealth matrix and electric gauntlets. and donned the "family business" with pride. Now he works for the empire, almost religiously, for some of there most sensitive job's. he has recently been put on this team because he would be useful and you cant have enough ship engineers.


How is his father a clone deserter when clones are both sterile and humans cant mate with zabrak... not to be nitpicky.
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how's this?Name: Zoltan ValkonSpecies: Zabrak Age: 32Gender: maleAppearance: Height: 6"1'Weight: 127 poundsApparel: white vest, brown pants that stop mid thigh. stealth matrix belt, combat boots, and modified mandalorian gauntletsWeaponry: ultra high voltage gauntlets, like a magmagaurd staff. Silenced DC-15A blaster rifle. DC 17 blaster pistol.Equipment: Plasma torch. Personality: he is very smart and slightly egotistical from his heritage. he views everyone as ether hindrances or target's and doesn't have much social skills to speak of, making it near impossible for anyone to get him out of his clamshell.Skills: stealth, robotics, ship hardware, hand to hand combat, torture, driven to kill.Bio: at the age of Five, his mother was killed in front of him by an assassin droid, a Besalisk, and a Roonan. then his father, a Jedi hunter, came and killed them in pure rage. his father, being a clone deserter, was constantly hunted by the empire and the new republic, when it was around. When Zol came out of the closet he was hiding in, he can recall that as being "the happiest moment in his father's life." he then saw his father work and, at the age of 14, became a bounty hunter with his fast ageing dad. he learned how to use a blaster, tamper with electronics, and how to fight by his father. at the age of 18 he went to Dathomir to receive his tattoo's, and was beaten down. he then isolated himself with that clan and eventually got his tattoo's. In the 2 years he spent there, his father died. he hunted out his grave, dug up his grave and took his stealth matrix and electric gauntlets. and donned the "family business" with pride. Now he works for the empire, almost religiously, for some of there most sensitive job's. he has recently been put on this team because he would be useful and you cant have enough ship engineers.


Can I just point out Storm Troopers are not idiots. They are the Imperial Elite. Obi-Wan in ANH by "Weaker minds" basically translates to "those who are not trained against it". In terms of them not being able to hit anything, notice how they only always missed on the Death Star, when the Imperials were tracking the Millenium Falcon. If they killed everyone they wouldn't have been able to track them to the rebel base.

Invisibility Matrix is a "LolNope" if you want to class KOTOR as canon which some EU does(I personally don't due to all the in-controversies) then the crystals used for personal cloaking devices were largely destroyed throughout the years, the ones left require a big generator in order to cloak a vessel "No ship that small has a cloaking device" and the likes.

So no, you can't go invisible.

History I'm just going to say no over all, if you want me to point out things you can, or you can see what heat says in terms of your history.
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Stepfather technicly. But Zol sees him as his father.
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AngelNoire said
How is his father a clone deserter when clones are both sterile and humans cant mate with zabrak... not to be nitpicky.


Actually, a clone had children with a Twi'lek woman in The Clone Wars. Not sure about zabraks, but human x twi'lek is totally viable apparently.
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Can I just point out Storm Troopers are idiots. They are the Imperial Elite. Obi-Wan in ANH by "Weaker minds" basically translates to "those who are not trained against it". In terms of them not being able to hit anything, notice how they only always missed on the Death Star, when the Imperials were tracking the Millenium Falcon. If they killed everyone they wouldn't have been able to track them to the rebel base.Invisibility Matrix is a "LolNope" if you want to class KOTOR as canon which some EU does(I personally don't due to all the in-controversies) then the crystals used for personal cloaking devices were largely destroyed throughout the years, the ones left require a big generator in order to cloak a vessel "No ship that small has a cloaking device" and the likes.So no, you can't go invisible. History I'm just going to say no over all, if you want me to point out things you can, or you can see what heat says in terms of your history.


I know they arnt idiots, and the matrix was origonly taken from an assassin droid. But if you are that apossed to it. Its not a major thing.
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Stepfather technicly. But Zol sees him as his father.


All right I'll have a crack at it after reading it.

-Besalisk is a no. Those things aren't around right now, if they did appear the Empire would crack down on them pretty fast and pretty hard.
-New Republic isn't going to exist for a good... 10+ years.
-Saw his father work doing what? Also 4BBY, most clones were already long dead.
-Why did he go to Dathomir for tattoos? I'm sure the planet he was already on was bound to have some form of Tattoo parlour.
-So he loves his father >Digs up fathers grave to loot it.
-Soooooooooooo he works for the Empire who his father was hunted by and loves it religiously?

You know, if that was a long history these issues wouldn't seem like that much. I don't think I saw a single thing I liked in that history.
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Actually, a clone had children with a Twi'lek woman in The Clone Wars. Not sure about zabraks, but human x twi'lek is totally viable apparently.


IT was never stated he was their biological father. I'm not even sure Humans and Twi'leks can cross breed, they can perform the snoo snoo but I think that's about it.
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OK, there is a misinterpretation on my part timeline wise. How long has it been since the old republics death?
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OK, there is a misinterpretation on my part timeline wise. How long has it been since the old republics death?


15 years.
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15 years.


Ok, well clones are dead. Give me some time to fix this.
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Not all the clones are dead by 4BBY. The Clones of the 501st were almost entirely Clone Wars veterans and served as 'Vader's Fist' until his death and likely beyond. Many ARC troopers and Clone Commandos also escaped to Mandalore, where they lived into the ABY and eventually found a cure for their enhanced aging.
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Not all the clones are dead by 4BBY. The Clones of the 501st were almost entirely Clone Wars veterans and served as 'Vader's Fist' until his death and likely beyond. Many ARC troopers and Clone Commandos also escaped to Mandalore, where they lived into the ABY and eventually found a cure for their enhanced aging.


"Eventually" actually for many years they only found a stop gap while they continued to slowly die and a real cure was only found in 30-40ABY by Boba Fett who in being a clone was degenerating as he aged, while he missed out on the advanced ageing his body did begin to fail him.

In terms of Clones Vader had very few left years after the war actually.
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The Second Joker said
how's this?Name: Zoltan Valkon

Sep pretty much hit the issues on the head with the bio, change that up and remove the invisibility matrix.
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