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Since the dawn of creation, it has widely been accepted as fact that all things were brought about by the will of the Dytenziextity. Although many kingdoms and regions practice their own religions and cultures, all of them reference the Dytenziextity was being the progenitor of those very same concepts and ideals.
It is said that the Dytenziextity is the mightiest of all gods, fabricating all of reality and much more. As such, all magic in the world is stated to be after thoughts, echoes, and even pieces of the Dytenziextity's supreme influence.
No kingdom recognizes this more so than the land of Crescentia. As one of the leading political powers in the world, Crescentia is a place where nobles bred for justice and equality thrive in their green lands and thriving towns. Out of the four neighboring nations that encompass the world as a whole, Crescentia is to be considered the largest and most vibrant, seeking to end injustice in the eyes of their rulers.
For years the kingdom of Crescentia has lived in relative peace with little strife, having seen little bloodshed since the Great Wars: a series of religious crusades to determine which nation was the true voice of the Dytenziextity. Indeed, the most unsettling news brought about to the people’s awareness is minor skirmishes and the like from neighboring countries.
However, there are stirrings that threaten to overthrow the regime of peace and stability.
There are reports of a rouge knight attacking the borders and causing wise spread skirmishes until the Princess of Crescentia themselves decides to take action. In short time, the mystery knight is thus captured and tossed in jail, having being revealed of two things: a plan to assassinate the Princess and the promise of war soon coming to the kingdom.
Ordinarily, the punishment of such deeds would be carried out by public execution; however, the noble Princess tries a much different, more controversial method.
One day, in visiting the prisoner knight, the Princess offers to be both their friend and their mentor. At first hesitant and bitter, the knight soon finds comfort in the royal's actions, explaining that a conquering warlord not only vanquished their own kingdom, but also sent them to kill the Princess of Crescentia as well.
As time passes, the knight finds themselves opening up more and more to the Prince/Princess, even to the point of fondly having affections for the royal. Although they know it would be against all laws of the mortal world to do so, they soon yearn for the Prince/Princess and soon swear loyalty only to them.
Meanwhile, dark forces gather at the edge of Crescentia and news of the approaching warlord spread rampant like wild fire.
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Let me know if I need to change anything at all. I tried to make her flaws as pronounced as I could so she didn't come off as Mary Sue-ish (because she's definitely not in my head), but I'm not sure if they're all that clear. Anyway, here it is:
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She doesn't seem like a Mary Sue to me. Also, I kinda forgot to add the "Appearance" section when making the CS hider so I don't know if you wanna go out and look for an image for Alice. Should we have this start out before or after my character's capture?
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Added the appearance just now, with an image and a short description. I don't know. Whichever is easier for you is alright with me.
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I think it would be best to start after my character's capture then. Working on her and our Big Baddie right now.
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Alright. Awesome. In that case, I'll leave you to it and come back either later tonight or tomorrow afternoon (I live in the EST timezone, by the way).
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I'll start our first post tomorrow.
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I like the whole mental deterioration aspect in Melissa, and the mystery surrounding Yggdrasil. I'm excited to see where this goes. :)
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The first post is up!
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Awesome! My post looks kinda long but it's mostly dialogue. Haha whoops. XD
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Nah, it's fine. Dialogue builds character!
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Alright. Awesome.

So, full disclosure, I'm going to be travelling this Thursday, December 18th, so I will probably be unavailable on that day, and I may not be able to be very active until the fourth of January, though I am sure that I will have time at night most nights to post and I will have my laptop so it won't be too inconvenient to post. Just thought I'd let you know so you wouldn't get concerned if I couldn't post as often while I'm there.
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Alright then. Thanks for informing me.
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On a side note, Melissa is suddenly reminding me of Hamlet when he "acted" crazy in the play.
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Oh really? Now that you mention it, I can see that. That's cool. To be honest, if it was me in there with Melissa, I'd be scared out of my skin, magical influence or no.
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All she wants is her glowy bunny!
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And her glowy bunny she shall receive!
I made a short timeskip to make it easier for you to reply, because I didn't feel like making the two parts two separate parts would make much sense either. Anyway, consider Alice officially uneasy around Melissa (achievement unlocked!).
Footnote: Alice was so quick to get Melissa her bunny; I wonder how gullible she is...
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That's fine. The timeskip I mean. It's kinda funny actually, since Alice's demonstration with the knife and possibley more torture will spook Miranda a bit. Ironic seeing as they're both scared of each other but neither shows it.
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I think that could be interesting to follow - the struggle of each of them to conceal their fear of each other.
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