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That's what I was thinking. I forgot it in my original character sheet so just had to know. I'll take another look at the difference between 2 & 3. Thanks Leonerdo
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I like Lenny. His power doesn't seem too bad, and he seems like an interesting character. He's accepted.

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Btw, could someone give me an honest power rating for my character's power please?


It depends on exactly what you mean by "He is very strong and agile, giving him great offensive capabilities". Otherwise, probably what Leo said. Newt's a six because she's shoulders above normal human beings physically.
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Well, I'm just about to edit my post with a revised version, and I've added a little more like you said. Hope I've corrected him enough.
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Can you provide a link to the sheet you are referring to?
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Right here:
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73371/posts/ooc?page=3#post-2283274
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Well, since I'm a co-GM and owner of an animalistic meta as it is, I think I'll be best equipped to show you what you need to have down.

Please, compare my character to yours.



He has tons of information, lots and lots of detail, huge power description, etc. You know what he's like. The sample post, while stupid (which I wrote up because Allen is a scrublord), still shows his power in use and displayed his abilities. Do you have to have THAT much detail? No. Do we like to see that much, yes. We do. From what you've displayed so far you don't meet the standard we're looking for in capability. Writing a character is the first step to writing a post and creating an interesting interaction dynamic. I'm sure you have the ability to do so, but from what you've shown us so far, you're causing me to have my doubts.
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Riiight, I get what you're saying... sort of. Unfortunately for me, this would be my very first advanced roleplay so I am having trouble as to coming up with what else I could add.
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GingerBoi123 said
Riiight, I get what you're saying... sort of. Unfortunately for me, this would be my very first advanced roleplay so I am having trouble as to coming up with what else I could add.


For appearance, describe his build, facial features, hair, skin tone, eyes, and so on.

For personality, tell how he acts around others, how he feels deep down, morality, quirks, views of the setting, how he acts by himself, and such and such.
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Deadbeat, I forgot to tell you, place Lenny's sheet in the character deposit (In a hider), please.
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So, I feel like I'm looking to add to personality really.
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Right, edited him again, adding more to the personality side and a little more here and there.
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73371/posts/ooc?page=3#post-2283274
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Also, Nick is a terrible example. Terrible. Terribad, even. Nick can't write. At all. And his character sucks. Go to hell, Nick. Douche.
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Leonerdo said
Also, Nick is a terrible example. Terrible. Terribad, even. Nick can't write. At all. And his character sucks. Go to hell, Nick. Douche.


Lets bang.
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GingerBoi123 said
Right, edited him again, adding more to the personality side and a little more here and there.http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73371/posts/ooc?page=3#post-2283274


Personality is better, but I still feel the appearance section is still lacking
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Lets bang.




EDIT: That coffee shop suddenly became really fucking popular.
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Okay, I've added a bit more to appearance but please keep in mind that other than the animal features, he just looks normal.
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So what do people think?
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73371/posts/ooc?page=3#post-2283274
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The sheet's better now, but I kinda want to know what you mean by "able to lift what would seem like average heavy objects with ease," mostly because the wording is a bit weird there. Also, to un 60 mph for more than a few seconds you would need incredible stamina.
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Most cheetahs can run that fast, of course Darren will not be running that fast ALL the time, that is his TOP speed. And for strength, 6Okg is not a big problem but he will struggle with heavier objects. I should write these in shouldn't I?

EDIT: I have now written this in.
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Alright, I'm going to give you a chance. Darren is accepted, just throw him in the character deposit in a hider.
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