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Added Ash's interference in, let you guys decided whether Sandy fries or not, but somebody better help Cruor out as he going to get fried pretty bad otherwise.
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All right I'll get a post up later which will end the fight so get your licks in now on Sandy while you can.
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Okay I'm making a change to Akim, his movement ability is gonna be w bone dust dash.
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Okay I'm making a change to Akim, his movement ability is gonna be w bone dust dash.
Sounds better. The bone wings even if hollow wouldn't work to well if you think about it :P
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All right the fight is over and the Syndicate have made a move. Now where will everyone go, and who shall join who?
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Posted, and I hope Ash's reason's for not trying to take Scorn and Cruor out at the moment makes sense. He isn't the type to send back and let someone like her slip through his fingers, but i wanted to keep the story moving forward.
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Sure thing though only thing I would change probably would be Scorn's real name. Scorn's real name is hardly known by anyone. Only the officials of Curdon Cay knew before they were all released and Keira only knows threw her snooping and digging around to uncover information on her half sister. Other then that sure, besides it would be foolish to try and take Scorn on out in the open, just because she's on her own doesn't necessarily mean she is alone.
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Got it and the changes have been made. Also, what do you think of the logo I chose for the Vanguard?
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You still have a spare space in the roleplay? I'd love to join.
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You still have a spare space in the roleplay? I'd love to join.
Of course you can Noire, good to see you again.
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Thanks, good to be back. I took a loooong break from roleplaying, so it's good to finally be able to do so again. Is sound a viable power?
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It could be if you don't make it to OP, though I question how you would recharge yourself, do you like steal sound from the environment making it silent for the brief time you are recharging?
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I'd imagine that you'd only be able to steal power from loud environments; loud music, car honking, etc. etc. By doing that, you'd be probably making it quieter/silent.
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Hey Rajin, just to keep things moving at a steady pace you can powerplay Jacob to follow you. Just to eliminate the need for a one sentence 'I followed' post :P.
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I am working on a conduit but I am trying to figure out how one would recharge copper and silk. I thought assimilation but I feel kinda like that's a cop out. You guys have an opinion on the matter?
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Assimilation sunds to me, as I can't think of another way to absorb those kinds of materials.
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Name:
Dean Finnigan
Age:
16
Gender:
Male
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Neutral
Personality:
Dean’s personality is mostly a mishmash of all of his other sibling’s personalities. He inherited the sarcasm, the cynicism, and egotism of his brothers. He inherited his anger, his argumentativeness, and his temper from his sisters. He inherited his loyalty from his dogs. His entire persona is a very odd mix of clashing personalities. After his life seemed to have so heavily relied on his siblings, he seems to have modeled himself after their most abundant qualities. The unfortunate result is what his personality is. He enjoys mocking and insulting others, being sarcastic, and getting people mad at him.
Biography:
Dean Finnigan was a small, impressionable child. The young boy was born into a family of three mutts, two sisters, one mother, and six brothers. The household was an unadulterated maelstrom of whirling porcelain, ripped drawings, and harsh words. The unfortunate family of children lost their father to a conduit, and their mother was seemingly too depressed and drunk to function. However, lucky enough, the family managed to get through, just barely. The three eldest brothers, Timothy, John, and Logan, had jobs, and were the appointed “heads” of the house. They managed to pull the family out of the rut by scrimping on the necessities of life; water, food, electricity. So, naturally, the youngest were hardly educated. As a child, Dean Finnigan was generally looked over as useless. He lacked strength or resolve, and seemed to hardly be able to do anything by himself. He even required help to make a meal. So, the boy mostly sat back while his brothers and sisters worked hard trying to survive. The unfortunate family lived in a small apartment, designed to hold a family of four, not twelve. A couple had to nap in sleeping bags on the floor, or in a repurposed kitchen cabinet. At the age of twelve, Dean Finnigan’s powers began to emerge. The first show of power he demonstrated was voice manipulation, imitating his sister after she tossed a box of tissues at him. He discovered he could mimic anyone’s voice and timbre perfectly, as long as he’d heard it before. He used it regularly, insulting his brothers or sisters using another voice, and watching a fight break out. It was how he managed to survive and entertain himself during the long years at the household. Soon after, audio manipulation emerged, discovered during a shouting match with his mother. His voice had practically shuddered the house, causing bits of plaster to crumble off the walls. It was after that that his brother’s didn’t seem to argue with him as much. As more and more time passed, he discovered his other various powers through other situations with his family. If fine china got thrown at him, he’d shudder it with an echo blast and send It flying off course. When his brother blew an air horn in his ear, he threw a Sonar Grenade and nearly made his brother permanently deaf. It went on like this for a long while.
As time passed on, his powers seemed to gradually begin becoming more unstable, rather than more controllable. With little proper training for his power and no time spent in Curdon Cay, It seemed, unlocking his abilities’ full potential was a mere pipe dream. Unfortunately, the state of the homestead seemed to also rapidly deteriorate as he aged. His mother seemed be in a horrible state, barely getting by. His older brothers, Timothy, John, and Logan, had left the house, looking to find business ventures to support the family. The two dogs had died, lowering the morale even more. The family seemed to be falling apart. As time passed, more kids began leaving, looking to find money on the country just like the older brothers. The rent was beginning to rear its ugly head. It didn’t take long before the apartment of twelve became an apartment of four; his two sisters, his mother, and Dean. The boy, disheartened, didn’t take too long to come to a decision. He, too, would leave the house, and return to support them. While not a smart choice in hindsight, Dean could hardly stand living there. The mere sight of it was unbearable.
So, the boy packed his bags, ready to abandon his old homestead. He left in the night, not stopping to exchange teary farewells or long goodbyes to his sisters or mother. On the way out, Dean Finnigan didn’t look back. He’d return soon.
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Sound Manipulation
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Sonic Boom – He discharges a loud, compressed explosion of sound by his feet, propelling him forward. It can be used in rapid succession, allowing him to scale walls, travel streets, and launch himself at high velocity.
Echo Blast - He dispels a powerful, focused shot of sound, allowing him to disorient or pain an opponent. The blast severely affects the subject’s eardrums, resulting in almost immediately damaging and nauseating an enemy that comes into contact with it. The shot doesn’t do much physical damage.
Sonar Grenade – He unleashes a tight, compact explosion of sound. The sound grenade can explode with force, and momentarily deaf anyone within radius of the powerful explosion. The effect tends to last from a thirty seconds to a minute, plenty of time for him to escape.
Sound Wave – He releases a wide, large spread of sound, in the shape of a wave. It has a long range, and is particularly useful when he's surrounded. It can disorient enemies within range. It can vibrate powerfully, able to practically dismantle cars.
Audio Manipulation – He can adjust the audio of his voice, ranging from a mere, tiny whisper, only possibly heard by one, or make his voice deafening, and heard across the city. In combat, by magnifying his voice by tenfold, he can near deafen enemies by shouting.
Voice Manipulation – He can adjust the timbre, pitch, and tone of his or others voice with ease. He can imitate any accent or voice perfectly. While not being very useful in combat, it’s useful in mundane activities. Since mocking people is a personal favorite past time of his, he uses it whenever he's feeling sour and he needs to let loose on someone.
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Dean Finnigan is an excellent singer, due to ease of controlling and pitching voice. He tends to not use that particular talent, though.
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I have a few criticisms about your app, Noire, if you don't mind. First off I understand your age is probably so it works with the picture but with how his family seemed to care for him it doesn't sound right that they'd let him just go to New York for no real reason. Also these 'full power' things worry me a bit as well as sound (no pun intended) a bit OP. You control sound, and while sound can have force it's often force that causes sound, not the reverse like you have. Maybe explain the 'full power' potential a little better and tone things down a bit? Sound can take things apart, not break things; that's how vibrations (what sound is) works. sound can't shatter concrete and bones because they're solid. Sound could cause a car to fall apart by having it do just that: fall apart. The vibrations losen and seperate the pieces. Plaster on walls is flaky so it works different but the same idea is there. Hope I'm making sense, and I can explain more if I need to, but I felt I should clarify some of the stuff your power shouldn't be able to do.
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Yup, completely understandable. I haven't touched roleplaying/writing in four months, so it'll definitely need some work, yeah. I'm trying to get the rust shaken off through this. I'll get to it. EDIT: I hope no one looks at my browser history, or they'll notice a sudden spike of interest in weaponizing sound and sonic weapons. EDIT: Alright, I think I relatively fixed it. I made his powers more about disorienting and paining an opponent, than doing actual physical force or damage.
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Looks a lot better man :). I can't accept apps but I see no problems with yours ;). *whistles to self while waiting for Raijin*
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