@Kangaroo
This is pretty much the part about which I am talking about, the entire extract isnt even one tenth of the complete post.
I appologise for my bad writing, kinda new at this :P
**beginning of extract**
Azazel calmly stepped towards the enemy emplacements. Only when they were really starting to focus her did she accelerate. She burst through a defensive wall with her shoulder and grabbed a Draconian by it's throat. Observing the new xeno she held in her hand for a while she eventually punched through his guy and ripped his intestines out. As the other Draconians saw what happened to their comrade they started to fire on her. Though the armour could take much, from this close even small arms were dangerous. She used to body of the Draconians as a shield and ran at the others, beating them to a pulp with her fists.
They are not a frail species but still no match for my strength. At this rate I wont even have to use my hammer.
Just as she thought that some Draconians in battlesuits appeared. A grin formed on Azazel's face, though it was covered by her helmet. Now this seemed like the real deal, the others were probably just some personel quickly armed or had no time to put their suits on. She activated her hammer and dashed at the newly arived troops. It resulted in a one sided carnage.
After securing the emplacement single handidly she checked in with her troops. The reports were far less victorious. Heavy enemy resistance on all sides. Though the Confederate troops were clearly better diciplined and had a slight edge in ranged combat the enemy was clearly much more proficient in closecombat. Their energy swords cutting through the soldiers like they were but butter.
Hmm, maybe this is going to be fun after all.
It apeared that one Draconian was still alive, he was trying to crawl away and was talking to someone. Azazel slowly closed in on him, her footsteps leaving small tremors each time she put them down. She then place one of her armoured boots on the head of the Draconian.
"I hope whoever is on the other end of that line will enjoy this sound, because they will be next"
She slowly squezes the head, the Draconian screaming in agony until finally his skull gives up and all that remains is a large bloodstain.
**end of extract**
That's basically it. Is it too much or is it allowed?