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The world...has ended.

Life no longer has meaning.

The lights in the sky are falling...

Winter has come.

Sir Terry Pratchett has taken Death's arm, and walked through the door into the land of eternal night.

It has ended.

RIP Sir Terry Pratchett. You had so much more to give...
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I doubt the world's neither going to explode nor implode, but it sure will kill jolly moods. I'll miss his books.

Srsly tho, why are all the famous people I'm following skyrocketing into the heavens? I sure hope their legacies will never be forgotten. :>

-screams internally-
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Here's what I have so far for Character #1

Name: N/A

Nickname: Grimm

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Powers: Grim is a Grim Reaper, or at least he will be in the future, which allows him to see, interact with, speak to, and control the spirits of the dead. He can also see peoples souls, able to glean what they're actively thinking about, their general mood, how they feel about certain people, and whether or not they are human. He also has a scythe as his main weapon, which help him channel and control his offensive abilities. Using the souls of the dead, which he traps with in special gems embedded in his scythe, he can gain a variety of abilities depending on how the person whose soul he is using died. He currently has access to:

Death by burning(Grants pyrokinetic abilities) Level of mastery: Intermediate, he can summon large fire balls and control them at will, as well as form them into basic constructs.

Death by drowning(Hydrokinesis)Level of mastery: Lower intermediate, he can freely control and shape water, but he can pressurize it properly, and any attempt to try usually ends up blowing up in his face.

Blown off a mountain(Aerokinesis) Level of mastery: Apprentice: He can use it to exert force in front of him, as well as re-direct winds slightly.

Exsanguination(Haemokinesis and Vampiric Traits) Level of mastery: Low apprentice He can control the blood in his body to make spikes come from his skin and his body becpme slighlty more durable.

Devoured by wolves(Partial Lycanthropy) Level of mastery: Intermediate He gains accelerated healing, advanced senses, improved physical capabilities, and Lupine Physical characteristics

Poisoned(Ability to create numerous poisons, toxins, and venoms) Level,of mastery: apprentice. Can make dissolveable shards that can be lengthened to use as weapins and projectiles. All poisons will be lavender-colored. available poisons are modrate paralysis, weak sleep poison, moderate numbing poison

Shot to Death(Extremely good at marksmanship and ability to create guns and viable ammunition) Level of mastery: Apprentice, can summon handguns and revolvers

He can only use one gem at a time, and switching between gems takes 15 secs.

Weakness:

What the hell are you?: Grim has never talk or been within a mile of a living female for a majority of his life. This makes him somewhat curious of them, and thus is why he'll talk to,a girl sooner than hell talk to a guy. However, his curiosity has been known to overstep a few bounds, and other times lead him into compromising situations. Naturally, these events make it so that he wants to be around the living even less, but his curiosity keeps him from fleeing to the local graveyard.

The Reapers Cost: A requirement for soul channeling, as Grimm's magic is known as, is that one must experience the death of the soul they channel everytime they channel it. Grim is the first Reaper to use this magic type in over 5 millenia, as the effects of experiencing death over and over again takes a toll on the mind rather quickly.

Immortality-intolerance: Grimm bears something akin to an allergy to Immortals, as when ever they are near he gets a headache, his nose starts to get stuffy, and he becomes very irritable.

Why can't the living be like the dead, Quiet: He doesn't interact well with having to talk to people, having spent most of his life around silent bones and corpses for company. This leads him to hardly ever initiate a conversation and made him kind of a ditz, as he likes to spemd his time off in his own little world.

Clueless: Grim, doesn't have much experience with people, or anything related to normal society, even some of the most basic things. Such things like personal space, manners, or how to use a T.V. This lack of knowledge is part if the reason he was sent to Orean Cause, so he can experience these things for himself amd forced to interact with people. It's easier to guide souls into the afterlife when you have good people skills.

Skills: Sports, Academics, Drawing, Painting, Fencing, Scythe fighting, Parkour, and Card Games

Hobbies: Dueling, Drawing, and Painting

Personality: Grim can be rather stoic at times, rarely showing emotions greater than a bit of dry sarcasm and wit. He's also a curious individual, tending to observe things that bear his interest, the main thing being the living. He feels that the best way to understand something is through observation of them in their natural setting. When applied to people, this can be misconstrued as stalking.

Bio: Grim has been sent to Orean Cause in order to take care of his social issues and to get him used to dealing with the living.

Likes: Dead people, his scythe, being by himself, quiet, peace

Dislikes: Immortals, the living, talking to energetic people, being in a crowd, being forced to interact with others

Clubs: Arts and Fencing Clubs

Dreams:To become a Grand Reaper, like his father
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Ironic, considering how one of my characters has a spirit that looks exactly like a Grim Reaper that has access to all kinds of magic.

First off, the powers section is actually organized, which is good to know. I recommend you to add in explanations on the extent of the powers, as we don't know whether he can spread gigantic seas of flames or simply launch moderately-sized fire projectiles. An interesting system, though I doubt the amount of powers will increase because... well, again, Orean Cause is not exactly a combat school.

Dead-Attractor sounds pretty annoying to those who have Ghost characters, considering how it basically limits the potential of interactions whenever this guy pops up. It seems more like a restriction-tool rather than a tool that could get him interacting with others. I recommend you to modify this a bit, or preferably, completely.

Another thing I'd like to point out is the Biography. Fill it in. You don't need to explain his entire past; the background's primary purpose is to explain why they're going to Orean Cause in the first place.

I won't say anything about originality, but something about his nickname rings the wrong bell to me. It's as if it... popped out of RWBY or something. or maybe even Billy and Mandy, if anyone still knows about that show

He seems like a character with potential, though. I like it :o
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we now have two Psychopomps and two ghosts....

Also people keep making dark aligned characters. Lisa's power is going to effect like, half the school
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Here's what I have so far for Character #1

Name: N/A

Nickname: Grimm

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Powers: Grim is a Grim Reaper, or at least he will be in the future, which allows him to see, interact with, speak to, and control the spirits of the dead. He can also see peoples souls, able to glean what they're actively thinking about, their general mood, how they feel about certain people, and whether or not they are human. He also has a scythe as his main weapon, which help him channel and control his offensive abilities. Using the souls of the dead, which he traps with in special gems embedded in his scythe, he can gain a variety of abilities depending on how the person whose soul he is using died. He currently has access to:
Death by burning(Grants pyrokinetic abilities)
Death by drowning(Hydrokinesis)
Blown off a mountain(Aerokinesis)
Exsanguination(Haemokinesis and Vampiric Traits)
Devoured by wolves(Partial Lycanthropy)
Poisoned(Ability to create numerous poisons, toxins, and venoms)
Shot to Death(Extremely good at marksmanship and ability to create guns and viable ammunition)

He can only use one gem at a time, and switching between gems takes 15 secs.

Weakness:

Immortality-intolerance: Grimm bears something akin to an allergy to Immortals, as when ever they are near he gets a headache, his nose starts to get stuffy, and he becomes very irritable.

Why can't the living be like the dead, Quiet: He doesn't interact well with having to talk to people, having spent most of his life around silent bones and corpses for company. This leads him to hardly ever initiate a conversation and made him kind of a ditz, as he likes to spemd his time off in his own little world.

Dead-attractor: Grim is like a magnet for ghost, as whereever he is, a spectre follows hoping to be sent to the afterlife. Since Grimm has yet to learn how to do that, he ends up being followed around by spirits in a daily basis, until he gets annoyed and chases them off with his scythe. This makes stealth rather hard for him, as the overwhelming presence of that many spirits in one place tends to be easily noticed by even the densest of people.

Skills: Sports, Academics, Drawing, paintingFencing, Scythe fighting, Parkour, and Card Games

Hobbies: Dueling, Drawing, and Painting

Personality:WIP, but I'd say sometime stoic, sometimes witty kind of guy that calks things as he sees it, tact and politness be dammed.

Bio:WIP

Likes: Dead people, his scythe, being by himself, quiet, peace

Dislikes: Immortals, the living, talking to energetic people, being in a crowd, being forced to interact with others

Clubs: Arts and Fencing Clubs

Dreams:To become a Grand Reaper, like his father


>> << *suspicious of this character and Evelyn meeting*
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@NarayanK Thanks, and yeah, I do the Bio last in these because they usually cime to mind after I toss the character around in my mind for a bit, And the powers work in a way were they have to be learned and practiced with. He's only been using his scythe for 5-6 years, so nothing is overly powerful. Will add skill levels when I add bio. As for dead attractor, I'll probably change it now that you've brought up that point.
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The basic ideas



Height and weight:
5,1ft 104 lb

May Horoka


Age:
17

Gender:
Female

Weakness:
Allergic to any kind of furry animal. Fear of dogs.

Skills:

Games, mostly speed related games, science, inventing, designing.

Hobbies:

Play games, Science, Work.

Personality:

May is generally really lazy and doesn't intend to spend her day outside in the sun, if she has nothing to do she just goes out to find the fun herself. She isn't really a friendly person to everybody and tends to talk in a monotone voice from time to time when she simply just doesn't care. But when she is fully hyped she is more active and talks a lot more to other people she doesn't know. She isn't shy to show people what she thinks of them or make a discussion. But when it all comes down to it she can be kind and friendly when it matters the most.

Background:

May was born in the hospital in Tokyo together with her twin sister Julie. May was first born of the two with her little sister quickly following up to her. They were just as healthy as every other baby and developed very fast over the past few years. It was rather impressive how they both developed so quickly with abilities just a little above that of most humans. They were living with their mom and dad in a rather big mansion. Their dad had a job that payed very well, making it possible to let them live a healthy and good life. But in exchange he was gone for long times and left the twins only together with their mom, making her very stressful from time to time. At the age of 6 their mother committed suicide because of depression. It didn't change the situation of their dad being gone for so long instead a nanny got hired to keep both of them occupied and healthy. She would leave at night after they slept and returned in the morning to bring them to school and pick them up again.

Over the time they started to take care of them self a bit more with May taking the big sister role on herself and keeping her little sister safe. At the age of 14 the nanny wasn't needed anymore that much since they could take care of them self pretty much. At middle school they both had excellent grades and didn't even take a sweat for passing the school years. Chemistry started to interest them a little more since they could discover things on their own a little more. However a little accident happened when Julie by accident knocked over one of the flasks. May could just react in time to push her sister away and get all the burning chemicals over herself. After they both graduated from middle school they decided to enter Orean cause.

Optionals:

She has a big burn mark across the entire side of her left body. From her chest to her knee is a big burn mark from chemical liquids.

Theme song:
Lucky star mush

On the Dawn's Horizon

Likes:
Gaming, Music, Fast Food, Spices.

Dislikes:
Animals

Dreams:
Go to space.




Height and weight:
5,1ft 110 lb

Julie Horoka


Age:
17

Gender:
Female

Weakness:
Allergic to dust, Allergic to milk.

Skills:

Speaks up to 10 different languages, Designing, Science, Cooking, Puzzle games.

Hobbies:

Play games, Science, Drawing, Cleaning, Cooking.

Personality:

Julie is very cheerful all the time, she always has a smile on her face when she does something. She likes to go outside sightseeing or shopping anything along those lines. Some may say she is a very mother like personality. When anything cute is thrown at her she immediately falls in love with that particular thing. Likely otherwise when something scary is thrown at her she will likely attempt to hide from it and cry.

Background:

Julie was born in the hospital in Tokyo together with her twin sister May. Julie was second born of the two with her older sister already waiting for her. They were just as healthy as every other baby and developed very fast over the past few years. It was rather impressive how they both developed so quickly with abilities just a little above that of most humans. They were living with their mom and dad in a rather big mansion. Their dad had a job that payed very well, making it possible to let them live a healthy and good life. But in exchange he was gone for long times and left the twins only together with their mom, making her very stressful from time to time. At the age of 6 their mother committed suicide because of depression. It didn't change the situation of their dad being gone for so long instead a nanny got hired to keep both of them occupied and healthy. She would leave at night after they slept and returned in the morning to bring them to school and pick them up again.

Over the time they started to take care of them self a bit more with Julie relying a lot on her older sister, her older sister made some mistakes at times but she meant well. At the age of 14 the nanny wasn't needed anymore that much since they could take care of them self pretty much. At middle school they both had excellent grades and didn't even take a sweat for passing the school years. Chemistry started to interest them a little more since they could discover things on their own a little more. After they both graduated from middle school they decided to enter Orean cause.

Optionals:


Theme song:
My truth

Platinum

Likes:
Cute animals, Drawing, Difficult puzzles, Sweets.

Dislikes:
Insects, Dirt, Dust, Scary stuff, Adults, Scary looking boys.

Dreams: Be a good wife.
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and here come Grace's new best friends
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and here come Rebecca's new best friends


Fixed that for you ;3
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Grace will chase her off with a gun that fires landmines.

You have that right Grace?

Grace: Hold on let me check. *digs through a giant box, throwing things like techno bear traps and power gloves over her shoulder* Nope, sorry, must have lent it to someone. I got a sword that lights people on fire though.
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gas swords

on another note, I made a GIF

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NK... XD wow thats cool

Life so they are not yet done?

Rai though I do have a thing for complete works I do wish for the background. but just like a simple he wanted to go there because he was curious is good enough and you can edit that later in the future after that he is accepted!
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Added a small history, could I also get a recap of what's happened so far?
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Oh just free time before party time starts at night. Studetns and teachers talking to one another getting to know new people also do you have a description or a pic on what Grimm looks like?
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Yeah, can't at the moment, as I'm on a mobile device and no access to a computer. I'd write a description, but the CS took up the entirety of my mobile's word count.
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ohhh okay.
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Is it okay for me to post in the IC
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I guess so ya ^^
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Still nwed to do the bio and im still adding some stuff
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