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Well, the only person that would be logically skilled enough to shield their mind would be Mika (She's probably the most skilled Telepath out of the three). She'd be able to shield her minds much better when she absorbs Kana's and/or Lucy's power.


Trust me she's not going to want Lucy's power. Mika is currently limited to one person at a time and is very specific and precise about her mind reading. Lucy on the other hand has a massive range comparatively and almost no control over what thoughts she's taking in. Mika uses her power like a laser pointer while Lucy is like a flood light.
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@Empour@DeadBeatWalking There's something missing from your sheets - review the rules to find out what!

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Trust me she's not going to want Lucy's power. Mika is currently limited to one person at a time and is very specific and precise about her mind reading. Lucy on the other hand has a massive range comparatively and almost no control over what thoughts she's taking in. Mika uses her power like a laser pointer while Lucy is like a flood light.


You don't really under - if Mika copies two similar powers, they'll combine together. So I assume that her current telepathic abilities will receive a boost.
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You don't really under - if Mika copies two similar powers, they'll combine together. So I assume that her current telepathic abilities will receive a boost.


Per my earlier statement I don't think Mika would want Lucy's powers. It would be like listening to headphones on low volume then suddenly you've got a boom box on max volume blasting in your ear.

I am more interested in what happens if two telepaths read each others minds at the same time.


I think there are two probable outcomes. Either two telepaths trying to read each others minds would hear absolutely nothing like two standing waves cancelling each other out or they would get everything with no coherent order or relevancy to what they were looking for, like a tidal wave.

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Ayo, so I will get a post up tomorrow. Sorry for being a bit behind, I need to catch up on the posts.
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@Empour@DeadBeatWalking There's something missing from your sheets - review the rules to find out what!


I don't know how I missed that the first 3 times. I added the thing, any other issues?

Edit: I sent you a skype contact request, Allen. I think it was to you. Is your avatar the fine African man in the sunglasses?
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When is the next opportunity for sheets so that I can foist my assets upon your tender bodies?
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My biggest concern is your idea of compounds that are known or unknown, but compounds still being bound to natural laws. My only grievance with that is, hell, you could do a lot with those unknown compounds. I'd like to see a bit more detail on that, please. On the second note, Allen and I would like to see at least one POWER related weakness to go along with the sheet. After that, Kayla looks pretty good.

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When is the next opportunity for sheets so that I can foist my assets upon your tender bodies?


When I get rid of some of these scrubs, senpai.
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The secret phrase is actually "git gud". Only after you git gud are you good.

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When I get rid of some of these scrubs, senpai.


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@Prince of Seraphs Well, I was in the middle of a Michelle post, but okay.
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My biggest concern is your idea of compounds that are known or unknown, but compounds still being bound to natural laws. My only grievance with that is, hell, you could do a lot with those unknown compounds. I'd like to see a bit more detail on that, please. On the second note, Allen and I would like to see at least one POWER related weakness to go along with the sheet. After that, Kayla looks pretty good.


Urban, I may not have been around for that long, but I'm not going to pull some BS like using "unknown compounds" to circumvent the ban on OP abilities. I'm just using it to get away with not having to take a college course in biochemistry in 2098 to have her make stuff like a potion that makes your eyes change color, or a potion that makes you heal faster. If either of those were known compounds, we'd have very different lives right now, I think. I'm not sure how to explain it other than that.

As for power-based weaknesses, I'll have to think a bit longer. Perhaps all of her compounds dissipate in water, or are highly flammable? There's a couple ways I could go with that.
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Urban, I may not have been around for that long, but I'm not going to pull some BS like using "unknown compounds" to circumvent the ban on OP abilities. I'm just using it to get away with not having to take a college course in biochemistry in 2098 to have her make stuff like a potion that makes your eyes change color, or a potion that makes you heal faster. If either of those were known compounds, we'd have very different lives right now, I think. I'm not sure how to explain it other than that.


In other words,



As for power-based weaknesses, I'll have to think a bit longer. Perhaps all of her compounds dissipate in water, or are highly flammable? There's a couple ways I could go with that.


Since her power isn't super dangerous, and there's easy ways to work around, i'm not going to be anal about her. So, those two weaknesses work.
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@Prince of Seraphs: I edited it. I feel like, in return, I should let you know that Beth is far shorter than a ten or twelve year old though. Lucy would be being very generous to guess that she was either of those ages. :3
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Edited in those two weaknesses and tweaked her weight a bit. The final opinion is?
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Edited in those two weaknesses and tweaked her weight a bit. The final opinion is?


I think her appearance section could use some more detail. You only said the basics and little else.
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@DeadBeatWalking Lenny is accepted, you may place him in the character deposit.
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@Prince of Seraphs: I edited it. I feel like, in return, I should let you know that Beth is far shorter than a ten or twelve year old though. Lucy would be being very generous to guess that she was either of those ages. :3


My apologies I really only skimmed her character sheet, I edited it on both posts for you.
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I edited the appearance section with a lot more detail, mostly centered on her face. Lemme know what you think.
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I think it is terrible and unfair that someone as filthy as you gets to occupy my rightful place in the roleplay.

Just kidding. What you've got on the appearance is a good start. We're in the casual section, so I figure it would normally be deemed appropriate. I prefer advanced, but that's just because of the standard I hold myself to. If you want to expand more upon the appearance, take into consideration: body type, weight, figure, curvature, her poise, the scars and otherwise minor details that you might normally not notice, but in reality would influence you unconsciously how you would perceive a person. Let's say I were to make an unkempt 16 year old boy. Obviously he isn't old enough to grow a beard or some respectable lower face stubble, but I could describe the patchy, unorganized strands of hair coming from his chin, or the untrimmed fuzz on the far sides of his upper lip. I could probably describe sweat stains on the armpits of his shirt from working in the garage, or the cuts and calluses on his fingers. How he comes across a few inches shorter than he really is because of how he slouches. His eyes are red with irritation from his constant rubbing because his contacts are a size too big. There's a small chip in his buck tooth because his older brother throws tools at him.

It is very possible to write stories just be writing details about your character's appearance. You seem to have a bit of that in your sheet right now; I can see that she was probably part of a mid-to-upper class family from her hygiene and capability of affording braces - but obviously, it is not just mid-to-upper class people who can afford braces and keep themselves clean. As it is right now, I think it would meet the qualifications of a casual roleplay. This is just my advice to you if you really want to improve. :-)
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