@Brimmlocke Wow you really did an amazing job! Totally worth the wait :D I have no doubt you'll be excellent at playing the prince.
There's just a few things I ask you to edit in your CS:
Firstly, In the part you speak about Edgar having a nightmare about his father's deal with the witch -
it wasn't Shi'larra, whom he made a deal with, it was Moriana, also known as the evil Witch of Eddor'had. Shi'larra is my Sorceress, and the one who sent Prince the message of his father's deal in a form of dreams, and who is now patiently waiting for all of you to appear at Kiring Taq (see IC).
Secondly, although I adore what you did with the gemstone related powers (there is a lot of them, and I don't even know what some of them mean :D), I want you to
restrict their usage on the person in front of you (only one at the time!). In other words, I don't want Edgar to be cabaple of long distance mind control and stuff. At least not yet, because if it were that easy, he could intrude Evil Witch's mind, and sent her over the cliff, making our problem easily solved :) Also, you don't have to list any more specific powers. You have more than enough of them, actually too many.
I would remove the following ones: Cosmic Awareness, Precognition, Psionic Equilibrium Distortion, Psionic Inundation, Psionic Shield, Psychic Constructs, Psychic Navigation, Psychic Shadow, Psychometry, Pushing. Some they seem just too powerfull to start with, and some would need further explanation, because I don't know what exactly they mean. You don't have to delete them, just cross them, and leave them for further reference. Thanks!
Anyway, can't wait to see Prince in the action, though!
Now, you're welcome to post in the IC, and join the party ;)