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Sorry to double post or pest you about this but can you check the Planeswalker ability for me and give me some notes if its too powerful?


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Your planeswalker card looks great. However some of your wording does not work mechanically. Small stuff I know. Also, if your are a tanky character I think you should start off with a higher loyalty. Like 6 or so.

If you take my rewording of your abilities starting from 6 loyalty.

+3 Put a 0/2 green treefolk creature token with the ability, "tap: you gain 1 life and prevent the next 1 damage dealt to target creature or player."

-2 Put a land token onto the battlefield with the ability, "tap: add 1 green mana to your mana pool. You gain 1 life and prevent the next 1 damage to target creature or player."

-12 Put 2 land tokens into onto the battlefield with the ability, "Tap: add 2 green to your mana pool." and "If a creature you control were to be destroyed, you may sacrifice this land instead. If you do, exile that creature and return it to the battlefield under your control."

Sorry just me being nitpicky. Nice unique design.
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@MarsAdept

Thanks for the critique, only had a 145 character limit for each ability so I had to chop some things lol xD
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Interesting... What card creator are you utilizing?
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MTG Cardsmith was the creator I was using, why? Was there another one you were using to make you?
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I use magic set editor. Real easy to use. http://magicseteditor.sourceforge.net

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Okay dokes, so after applying the changes everything shall be good yes? All im doing is adding cosmetics now xD
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@Pie Flavor Yes, your character is good.
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Attention everyone,

I will be absent for the next few days. Busy, busy me. I will not likely get back to a computer until Friday sometime. For the sake of the story, My character has planeswalked away to deal with other issues. She will return when she has completed her task. Which will probably be the same time that I return go figure. Obligations. Until then, godspeed to you all.
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Back, sorry for the absence, Finals are approaching so time for RP is dwindling.

Getting a post up now.
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@Tracyarmav I don't think the dragon has any inclination for trigonometry. Winged human, maybe, but not angles. :P
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>.< drat, ty.
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@Tracyarmav Got it right this time with the winged creatures.
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@Dragonite777 Lol, give me a few posts, I'll forget again.
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@Tracyarmav Doesn't matter. You got it once without being reminded, lol.
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@Tracyarmav I don't think the dragon has any inclination for trigonometry. Winged human, maybe, but not angles. :P


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@Dragonite777 Doesn't count, it came within an hour or two of having been reminded in the last post.
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Nothing? Not a single post? Is everyone just busy right now or have y'all lost interest? Sorry if this wasn't what y'all were hoping for. :/ I was hoping to get at least a few of us to the village to where we'd get our first clues as to who caused the disappearance of our home plane. I'm also interested to see where the ex-angel*dragon side plot runs.
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I'm waiting, cause I posted directly before you. And don't have anything more to post about until something happens

Also, there's finals approaching and people be studying.
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Been lacking inspiration of late. I'll make time to post tomorrow.
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