How is Isa's kick going to reach David's back leg when she's still at the end of his right leg's extension? He's ten inches taller than she is with considerably longer legs.
You're doing a great job writing her reactions to the fight (better than me by far, Lol), but your attacks are lacking in detail and that makes it difficult to properly respond without taking liberties with your character's positioning. Things like which leg is used to kick, the direction of the kick if it isn't a simple front kick, which arm punched first in her earlier combo, stuff like that. Simply saying that she delivers a low kick toward his left leg still leaves several possibilities as to how that kick is performed, and I'm forced to pick one at random in order to respond, which could put our mental pictures of the fight at odds and make things more difficult later on.
You're doing a great job writing her reactions to the fight (better than me by far, Lol), but your attacks are lacking in detail and that makes it difficult to properly respond without taking liberties with your character's positioning. Things like which leg is used to kick, the direction of the kick if it isn't a simple front kick, which arm punched first in her earlier combo, stuff like that. Simply saying that she delivers a low kick toward his left leg still leaves several possibilities as to how that kick is performed, and I'm forced to pick one at random in order to respond, which could put our mental pictures of the fight at odds and make things more difficult later on.