Spider-Man's identity is also something that is known by very few, and I don't think that you had Schradinger's permission to have your character know who he was.
You also spelled your own character's name wrong...every single time...
Spidey isn't my character, he's Asuu's. Mine is Cyclops.
But yeah, there's a lot wrong with that post as far as both writing courtesy and narrative consistency. You can't dictate another writer's character without their permission.
Eventually, he found it - the water currents were warmer around this area, and if one shoved their head underwater and looked down, ignoring the sting of sea-salt, they would see an incredibly large shadow farther in the water. Leaping dozens of feet into the air, off of his drift-wood, Peter flipped upside-down and formed a sharp stick with his lean figure - within seconds he pierced the ocean's surface like a high-caliber sniper round, feet kicking bubbles upwards as he began to use his full-speed under-water. He reached the hatch, lazily flipping through the water as a self-defense underwater-laser blasted from the hatch's handle and sent steam flying high. Clicking the hatch once, he allowed it to prick his finger and absorb some of his blood, before opening the now unlocked hatch and falling into the air-pocket, feeling the dry, crisp air of the submarine flash sudden heat across his form, instantly drying him.
Spider-Man is very protective and private about his identity. No one on this team should know or would be close enough to him to know. I'm assuming that the player is keeping up with that side of the character. What you did was metagaming. Also you forced yourself on his character by saying that you altered his music prior to this day.
It is. Thanks for being willing to correct the mistake. :)
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You're welcome. Most people would be rude and tell you to go Merde off.
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You know 'merde' means shit right?
Most people would tell him to shit off.
RP's like this tend to move at a slower pace than those in the free section, since there's a bit more thought and effort put into each post. Hopefully things will pick up after we get past the introductions stage and start writing smaller posts as a group, rather than longer ones on our own.
You're not impatient. We just can't do anything until the GMs move it along
