Done. Give it to me straight Lugu, how bad is it?
By no means is it bad, but I will level with you: it is not fantastic. Given the freedom that you have, it is very passable, but comes off very much as a cautious first attempt. Go wild! Make up the name of the towns your characters dwell in; give cultures and legends and life to the setting. Please do not scrap this idea or give up, but keep it to continue gnawing on, and use it as a springboard to do something really innovative! We have plenty of time to realize this vision.
Here's one I did a while ago when I was sick and bored.
Name: Virgil Marowit
Sex: Male
Age: 24
Race: Parili
Affinity: Telum
Personality: Through gruff and by no means outgoing, Virgil is nevertheless an outstanding friend. He treasures close relationships and socializing with them, generally pursuing quality over quantity in terms of compatriots. He is tough and somewhat impulsive, and while of no more than average intelligence, he has a certain charm and common sense that make up for his lack of genius. He doesn't mince words and tends to speak exactly what is on his mind, and he can be scornful of those who lack integrity and basic fortitude. He has a strong honest streak, but has no real semblance of a hero.
Fighting Style: When fighting for himself, Virgil adopts a highly defensive style capable of dishing out damage while minimizing self-harm. Virgil carries a shotgun conduit implanted with a multi-missile projectile Ignus spell, which launches a spread of blazing bullets whenever fired. It is so reliable and quintessential to him that he has named it Thaksin, which means 'right hand'.
He is a specialist in a not-so-unique combination of Permutatio and Telum magic, Virgil is capable of transforming himself into one of two weapons. The first is a tower shield, its metal a rough, pebbled blue, and at its center lies an eye very much like his own. Its Charm ability is to force any foes who make eye contact with its eye to look directly at it, which wears off if it blinks. The second is a flare gun, black metal with a teak-brown stock, that fires blinding magenta flares. These flares, upon coming into contact with an open source of heat like fire, gas, or hot air, can explode violently.
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