Two issues.
1) your coat pic doesn't work (not that that is really that important)
2) why is one of your abilities have a line through it? Is it because it is developing?

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1) That's weird... It works for me. But here's the link. http://www.whereibuyit.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/Mens-black-leather-trench-coat.jpg
2) Yes, I saw on another superhero roleplay that when a power is developing, you put a line through it so the GMs can see/ condone it if necessary, but it shows that it will come back later in the RP. Is that okay?

Hey guys. I was wondering if I could have a character based off of Vixen? With the same power concepts?

First one. I'll put the second one up in a little bit.

Name:
Flash Jones

Hero/Villain name:
Ignis

Age:
19

Race:
Human

Appearance:

Normal [+]

Uniform [+]

Hood [+]

Coat [+]

Powers:

• Teleportation- Flash has the ability to transport himself from one area of place to another area of place. The problem is that he needs to know where it is that he is going. Which means that he has to have been there before or has to have seen it before. He can teleport with others as well as long as they are touching some part of him when he teleports.
• Smoke Manipulation (Typhokinesis)- Flash has the ability to create, shape, and manipulate smoke. Just like a smoke bomb, he has the ability to create smoke screens so his team can escape. He also has the ability to suffocate someone under that ability as well as poison or blind them. He can solidify the smoke for a short amount of time to create a weapon for himself or he can do blasts of smoke in large packs that allow him to knock over opponents.
• Fire Creation- He has the ability to create fire out of mid-air. This is more of a developing power rather than a full on power like he has above. This will develop into something more later in the RP.

Skills:
Since he grew up with an army father, Flash is great with hand to hand combat as well as being able to use multiple different types of guns. His father also trained him on how to use knives, mostly throwing knives. He is also very intelligent.

Weapons:
A pack of six throwing knives tucked into the inside pocket of his uniform; a .48 caliber pistol on his hip

Gear:
His uniform is not one of the most likely choices for a uniform. He wears a long black, leather trench coat that he enlaced with Kevlar. He tends to where dark black gloves with the fingers cut off that protect his hands from getting burnt if he manages to create fire. He has a leather hood on his coat with a piece of fabric that comes up around his mouth that acts as a gas mask to protect him from inhaling his own smoke.

Personality:
Flash is a fun loving guy, no matter what background he grew up with. He loves to mess around and does not take much seriously. He is the guy who always tries to lighten the mood in awkward situations. He is quite intelligent, but he does not act like it at times. Because he was an army officer’s son, he is more used to taking orders than giving them, but he can be a leader when he needs to. He is very cool under pressure and tends to be able to work problems out quickly. He is assertive and knows what he wants, but is almost never angry or sad. He seems to only show one emotion. Only in dire times does he actually become serious.

Background:
Flash grew up on an army base not too far from the city. His mother was an army nurse while his father was a sergeant. He was woken up every morning by his father and forced into physical training, but he didn’t mind. He just was glad that he got to spend time with his father. He would train with a different regiment every day and, as he got older, he began to practice shooting guns. By the time he was fifteen, he was a sharp shooter. He had his father to thank for that.

Whenever he was not training with the army, he was with his mother, learning about medicine and practicing healing techniques. This was where he figured out that he had powers. He was clearing up an area when a nearby candle tipped over and caused a small fire to start. He tried to stomp it out, but it just grew. He held out his hands to stop it and sucked all the oxygen from the fire, creating smoke in his hands. He then realized that he was different at that moment, but he knew he could never reveal it to anyone.

He figured out that he could transport at sixteen years old. He was in one of the shooting courses, one of the ones where you had to run from one section to the next and not shoot the pedestrian. He had run the course so many times that he knew exactly where he was going. He began running the course and began shooting, but when he snapped his fingers, just for fun, at one of the cardboard targets that he shot, he disappeared and went onto the next area. No one else saw him, but he was now scared of what he was becoming. He feared for shame to his parents and a loss of job for both of them. So, in the middle of the night when he was seventeen, he snuck out of the base with just a backpack and one of his father’s old pistols.

He got his own place, using some money that he had saved up for being a helping nurse in the army, and he began to look for jobs. He got into crime fighting when a young man was being mugged in the street. He used his smoke to give off a screen and helped the man get away. Unfortunately, the muggers saw his face and cornered him in an alleyway a couple weeks later. He beat them easily, with his army training, but then realized that he needed a costume. But he was short on funds at that time. So, he wound up stealing the trench coat and ripping the Kevlar out of one of the bullet proof vests he had brought with him. He has been fighting crime ever since.

Other:
He sometimes smokes when he’s nervous or annoyed or angry even.