And you think to yourself, I volunteered for this. Panic ensues as the virtual world of Midgar and its thousands of players discover they are trapped in the game. You are one of the players and you have survived the first week to discover the changes that have occurred: Avatar death means player death, monsters assault the city at the end of the week and levels mean nothing if you can't back them up with actual skill. The death game begins and will only end when the Black Gate is closed.

Hm... I think it's a bit too much like Sword Art Online to really be called something else right now. I suggest you build the differences up a bit more, and maybe add a bit more information as well.

But besides that, I think something like SAO but altered is a good idea. I'm up for it :)

One thing I know I want in the game is magic and instead of floors it would be zones

Sounds nice, but like bunny said, it looks a lot like SAO, I guess having a more In depth concept would make it look different.

For example, the reason on why the player are stuck in the game is not because of the GM but because of a broken script wich cannot be reverted or else the whole game will be wiped out and so the player along with it.

To me floor and zones are pretty much the same. Why not just an open world of fight and tragedies.

Point is? Clear the game, make it home! Hopefully you will survive!

I'm in actualy :)

Alright so any suggestions for how I make this more different to SAO? I AM interested in the fault in game being caused by code, maybe taking the game back when it was in an Npc alpha simulation which is why all players are seen as NPC'S by other NPC's.

I'm interested. Maybe make an intro post, like make a few paragraphs of backstory to flesh out the causes for it, who's been doing what, how players reacted, what happens to the PCs when after death (nothing? become actual NPCs? Become zombies/monsters?). That's all I can really think of.