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Aro
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Aro
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HylianRose Defender of Hyrule
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@Aro Cue Xander. This is how he appeared in my fic so I assumed it be the easiest way to introduce him. He takes out Levi and starts to attack Derae, trying to subdue her, thinking that she is trying to attack Levi and escape. He then takes her himself to the castle to be imprisoned where Zelda finds her and helps her out, asking for her aid. Ye.
@HylianRoseLet me get this straight before I get a post up. Levi (a member of the Hylian army) and his squad captured Derae (a member of the resistance) and then Levi is attacked by Xander (the prince of Hyrule, the head honcho of the head honchos of the Hylian army) and then proceeds to attack a still handcuffed Derae because he believes from her sitting and handcuffed position she was attempting to attack Levi. So he then tries to subdue an already subdued person and take her to the castle. Have I got that right?
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@AroSort of. I suppose it doesn't make too much sense when you say it like that, but yes. And he doesn't lead the army. In fact, his army consists of his body guards. To be fair, he did think that her unhandcuffed would have led to that... so sure. He's making sure the subdued person is in fact subdued. I never said he was the brightest of the bunch. At least, yet.
However, if you'd prefer we change it, I'm open to it. Actually, lemme look at the actual chapter...
AH! I got it wrong, forgive me. I'll actually just post up a bit of what I had written before. Probably should have done that from the beginning. >.>;
I really look dumb right now don't I? ^-^;
Apologizes.
However, if you'd prefer we change it, I'm open to it. Actually, lemme look at the actual chapter...
AH! I got it wrong, forgive me. I'll actually just post up a bit of what I had written before. Probably should have done that from the beginning. >.>;
I really look dumb right now don't I? ^-^;
Apologizes.
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@HylianRoseLol. It's alright, and no you don't look dumb. Just the way your post was and the little description you gave me made me think my character was a complete idiot. And could I read the fanfic you wrote? If you don't want me to, that's completely fine as well.
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@HylianRose Awesome, thanks!
It's certainly less confusing. I did notice one spot near the end where the sentence had started in third person, but went to first person for just a moment.
Anyway, I've got my post up and followed your fanfic a bit with my own little flair on the character. Hope it's alright.
It's certainly less confusing. I did notice one spot near the end where the sentence had started in third person, but went to first person for just a moment.
Anyway, I've got my post up and followed your fanfic a bit with my own little flair on the character. Hope it's alright.
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@Aro I hope that last one wasn't too strange... .-.
And by strange, I mean badly written. I'm having one of those days...
And by strange, I mean badly written. I'm having one of those days...
@HylianRose Wasn't strange at all. It seemed like a rather well written post to me.
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8 mos ago
@Aro I'm glad. I quite enjoyed reading your post. :)
@HylianRose Thank you, I quite enjoyed writing it. :)
I'd been thinking about how to write it since you posted it last night. I'm quite happy with how it turned out.
I'd been thinking about how to write it since you posted it last night. I'm quite happy with how it turned out.
Just moving this back up a few pages.
@HylianRose So... *Looks around* Are we still doing this? If not... *Pulls out 3DS and begins to play a game* I'll just be over here.
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Sorry, yeah. I still plan on doing this. I've just been trying to focus on other things. I'll be leaving on Saturday for work at a camp and won't return until 5 weeks later. I'll try best I can to get posts out but ye... Time. It's 12 hour a day job and then some.
Also, I'm not exactly sure where to go from where we left it off. I'm sure I can BS something. Anyway. I don't intend to drop this, just haven't felt the inspiration to post the last few days. :\
It'll come to me eventually, I promise. :)
Also, I'm not exactly sure where to go from where we left it off. I'm sure I can BS something. Anyway. I don't intend to drop this, just haven't felt the inspiration to post the last few days. :\
It'll come to me eventually, I promise. :)
That's completely alright, I understand. I was just making sure this was still going on, as I have become quite invested in my iteration of your character so far.
Ummm...as for where to go from here, if I'm remembering the fanfic you wrote, Derae passes out and Xander takes her to Castle Hyrule where she awakens to a maid, I think. Besides just a few more BS posts before we leave the camp we can jump back to that storyline and she could pass out once they start to leave and have Xander ride ahead with her to the Castle. After that you can wake up like in the fanfic, just something I thought up right now.
Ummm...as for where to go from here, if I'm remembering the fanfic you wrote, Derae passes out and Xander takes her to Castle Hyrule where she awakens to a maid, I think. Besides just a few more BS posts before we leave the camp we can jump back to that storyline and she could pass out once they start to leave and have Xander ride ahead with her to the Castle. After that you can wake up like in the fanfic, just something I thought up right now.
Hello?
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8 mos ago
>.>
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Sorry. I actually forgot that I'd planned to keep this going. I will still keep it going but with the plethora of other things happened, it must have slipped my mind somehow that I'd promised to come back to this after work. If I don't get a post out to you tonight, I'll definitely have one to you tomorrow. :)
Sorry again... .-.
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Sorry. I actually forgot that I'd planned to keep this going. I will still keep it going but with the plethora of other things happened, it must have slipped my mind somehow that I'd promised to come back to this after work. If I don't get a post out to you tonight, I'll definitely have one to you tomorrow. :)
Sorry again... .-.
It's alright, I've been gone myself the last couple months so it works out quite well. No rush or anything, just wanted to make sure this was still on or not.
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8 mos ago
@Aro I've been away long enough for it to be pretty fresh and inspired for me. Sometimes it helps me to step back from something and wait a while and then when I come back, I'm into it again. :)
@HylianRose I know exactly what you mean. Kinda like you recharged your batteries.
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