@Rae Zer
The Characters tab OP explicitly states that only accepted characters are to be posted there. As far as is publicly known, your characters have not been accepted. So, they probably shouldn't have been moved over there yet, especially before any real review for your characters has taken place.

Pardon me if there has been some sort of misunderstanding~

I probably should clarify Thor had been accepted. ^^;

Sorry for the inconvenience. Also, Saber class will be opened should Sock deigns not to app another CS. Rider is not accepted because he seems to be both rider and caster at the same time.

Well if Socks doesn't post up soon I'll go ahead and nab the spot with his/her permission provided the person shows up at all lol.

Rider's been edited.

After all the relevant edits, RIder and the master are accepted. Post the Servant in the Char tab with their class label, and the Master labeled as a Master.

EDIT: Also, Saber class is open should anyone wants to grab him.

I'd like to claim the Saber spot if possible.

After all the relevant edits, RIder and the master are accepted. Post the Servant in the Char tab with their class label, and the Master labeled as a Master.

EDIT: Also, Saber class is open should anyone wants to grab him.

Well then that's nice, I'll go ahead and start on the saber servant.

@Zolgen Makiri, I... don't even know what to say about your Zouken Matou avatar and title. I only must ask if you have watched Fate/Zero.

@Zolgen Makiri, I... don't even know what to say about your Zouken Matou avatar and title. I only must ask if you have watched Fate/Zero.

I dunno, man, I'd be more interested in asking him about his worms. Like, how does he keep them all fed and happy? Can one waifu do all that?

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I dunno, man, I'd be more interested in asking him about his worms. Like, how does he keep them all fed and happy? Can one waifu do all that?

That's the real reason he can't curse anyone. It's not because of Absorption, it's just because he doesn't want his worms to see him cursing and then pick up bad habits like the kids these days.

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That's the real reason he can't curse anyone. It's not because of Absorption, it's just because he doesn't want his worms to see him cursing and then pick up bad habits like the kids these days.

I think we could all do to take him as an example. Truly an upstanding citizen.

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I dunno, man, I'd be more interested in asking him about his worms. Like, how does he keep them all fed and happy? Can one waifu do all that?

One Waifu? What are you talking about? He is five centuries old if I remember correctly so I'm sure he has had several waifus in his life time. Not to mention quite of few of his children/relatives have gone through the worms.

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One Waifu? What are you talking about? He is five centuries old if I remember correctly so I'm sure he has had several waifus in his life time.

What?

He still only has one waifu.

He's still sad his waifu will never again be real.

You know.

Because she's a cup now.

It's sad.

He used to be a shounen hero who wanted to save the world.

Then his waifu became a cup.

It's been downhill since there.

;w;

Master:

Strength: B

Endurance: B

Agility: B

Mana: B

Luck: B

Noble Phantasm: A+



Magic Resistance: B
Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against Magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

Riding: B
The expertise to ride animals and vehicles. Most vehicles can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasm Races such as Monstrous Beasts.



Elf: B
Elves are Northern European creatures with a high aptitude for magic.

Eye of The Mind (True): B

Capable of calm analysis of battle conditions even when in danger and deduce an appropriate course of action after considering all possibilities to escape from a predicament. So long there is even a 1% chance of a comeback, this ability greatly improves the chances of winning.

Runes: C

Is capable of using The Elder Futhark System.



Name: Balmung: Felling of The Sky Demon

Type: Anti-Army

Rank: A+

Range: 1-50

Maximum Number of Targets: 500 people

Description: A two-handed, golden greatsword with a blue jewel embedded in the hilt that boasts a magnificence and enormity possible only for weapons tended to by inhuman hands. It is the holy sword of the Nibelungs, used to slay the dragon, Fafnir. It is a cursed holy blade possessing the attributes of Gram, the demonic blade of its origin, so it will change attributes between holy sword and demonic sword depending on who wields it.

Upon chanting "-- O sword, Let thee be filled.", she holds it above her head, and it begins to glow with an orange light. The jewel stores and preserves magic energy, true Ether, from the Age of Gods, and releasing it causes it to emanate a twilight e twilight swells around the sword and is released as a flash of light, a surging wave with the simple purpose of destruction. Compared to the straight line released by Clarent Blood Arthur, it releases a wave of twilight in a semicircle that is centered around her.

Name: Dáinsleif The Sword of Vengeance

Type: Anti-Unit

Rank: B

Range:2-4

Maximum Number of Targets: 1

Description: This Noble Phantasm takes part of Hagen's Scandinavian counterpart, Hogni. A demonic sword from the Nibelungen. It is a sword that has been in two myths, with both versions showing its frightening nature. Within the Völsunga Saga, it is a sword that was part of Fafnir's collection of treasure, taken by the clan that killed the Northern European hero, Sigurd. It is a cursed Noble Phantasm that contains a powerful curse of "revenge" to be used on its target, and it also drives the fate of its possessor to ruin and causes them to surely die. Within the Skáldskaparmál, it is possessed by the Danish king, Hogni. He became locked in eternal combat with the king of Serkland, Hedinn, due to the sword's curse, which requires it to always kill a man once drawn and does not allow it to return to its sheath until such is accomplished. The sword's stroke would never fail, and the wounds would never heal. While demonic and holy swords carry with them both glory and destruction, Dáinsleif is said to only bring the latter onto its master.

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What?

He still only has one waifu.

He's still sad his waifu will never again be real.

You know.

Because she's a cup now.

It's sad.

He used to be a shounen hero who wanted to save the world.

Then his waifu became a cup.

It's been downhill since there.

;w;

rip in peace zouken's waifu ;-;7

Good thing I'm making a Matou-Einzbern

Character list in char tab has been updated with accepted characters as of now.

Relocated. See the Characters tab for information on Plain, the Doll.

@GreenGoat and @Rosette Christopher, after reading over Dante once more I've decided that what I have written for him is not enough for me. So, I am just stating right here an now that I will be working on revising his history, traits and adding a personality section to his sheet. The base of his history will not change but will go more into depth about his life. The traits will be changed around but his magecraft skills will stay nearly the same.

Hehehe, Zouken is love Zouken is life! :3

And, I edited one of my Noble Phantasms. I felt like it didn't work as well with her as much as Dáinsleif