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Update

To those still crafting your CSs please take your time and please not feel rushed. To those that are done and dwelling about I have a few questions that I shall shoot out at this moment. Just an informal thing at the moment to gauge some things. It also gives us a chance to maybe get to know one another all a little better. You are in no way shape or form obligated to answer but if you do I would appreciate it!


  • Would you prefer for the party to already been grouped together for some time or more recently acquainted?
  • Do you often putter about in the OCC of the Rps you are in, or would you prefer if I set up an IRC client?
  • Your current Time Zone.
  • How active can see yourself in the coming future in regards to this RP?
  • What you believe to be the perfect ratio of action to plot development
  • Your comfortable average post length at the advance level.
  • Your Favorite Movie
  • Your Favorite Book

I would prefer if every character is at least acquainted with one another. At the moment they should at least consider each other as comrades, but hasn't taken the steps to form a close bond yet.

I'm more comfortable chatting in the OOC. It sounds like a hassle getting on IRC.

U.S. Central Time for me.

I could spare to post daily if there is some level of activity, but I can at least post once a week.

I prefer a good balance that creates an intriguing narrative. Action is fine, but I'm not here because I want to write about how X character killed X monsters in the most X way possible.

As for post length, that is something to consider isn't it? Having been roleplaying for over a decade, I've come to hold onto the belief that quality defeats quantity. What's the point of writing five paragraphs if it's filled with nothing but useless fluff? It's a mistake I've seen others make so often. I rather write something that flows and is coherent to the character and story even if it's only one paragraph. I refuse to write something like a character uselessly pondering over the meaning of life if all he's being asked if he wants an apple. In any case, the short answer would be I can post three paragraphs minimum if you want me to unless it's a simple dialogue exchange with another character.

My favorite movie is Princess Mononoke.

My favorite book is this biographical book on Napoleon Bonaparte.
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I updated my CS so it's semicomplete now, it's a bit rougher than I'd like thanks to me being a doofus and deleting my entire history earlier.
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Interested. I hope it's not too late?
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@Elysium
You can send in an application as stated I'm not one to judge you upon If you showed up first. I judge you mostly on your CS and if worst comes to worst a writing sample.


As stated previously yes. I have not begun the judging process yet as others are still working on getting character sheets up, so if you want to give it a shot you are more than welcome.

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Sir Gorur of House Gravelbeard


I gain strength by obtaining freedom from my God

Gender: Male

Race: Dwarf


Personality: Unlike most dwarves, Gorur abides by many dwarvern traditions but understands those who either choose not to or follow different ones. Additionally, he is curious about other traditions and will also ask questions about them. He considers his sense of honor to be a major part of him, and is loyal to those who are loyal to him. He does respect rank, although he may grumble periodically about the order of things. He appreciates hard work and will not tolerate those who do not try.

He is talkative and cheerful most of the time, as he does not believe there is a point in silence. Politically, he appears to be something of a libertarian. He is quick to assign people to the friend or foe category, and will treat someone as if he has known them for years despite the time of their relationship.

Appearance: Short, Stout, and muscular, Gorur is the image of a dwarf. He appears to be about fifty, with some mild wrinkles going across his skin. His eyes are a light blue, and when emotional the whites of his eyes will turn gold. Unlike most dwarves, he has a small tan indicating that he has spent some time on the surface. He sports a large beard, and all of his hair is a dark grey.

His house crest is a gold double sided axe with grey beards extending from beneath the blades.

History: House Gravelbeard has historically belonged to the minor nobility within the capitol, using sons as either men-at-arms or minor supervisors of industry. Most Great Houses & Middle Houses are able to have their sons become squires at a young age and train one on one underneath the supervision of a knight. It is considered uncommon but not rare for a minor noble to be knighted for talent, as being a knight is something of skill, not blood.

Gravelbeard realized Gorur's talents in combat quickly, and sent him to military training at a young age. Originally hot-headed, angry, and ready for glory, Gorur learned about teamwork and the importance of respecting others as he trained with his peers. Like the rest, he followed orders to an incredible degree, believing that their military society would lead them to glory. He fought many battles and many friends died while trying to secure the deep roads for greater dwarvern expansion. However he countinued to serve with faith.

His House was eventually bankrupted and sent packing for a fortress on the most extreme outskirts of the kingdom, Lockstead. At this new place, humans and elves and many other creatures lived in a town outside the caverns where the dwarves slept. The area had a wealth of culture and initially Gorur was angry at it. Over time without realizing it he gained friends within the town. He married a halfling, Maruna. He continued to train and fight in minor skirmishes, and was eventually promoted from a man at arms to a knight after showing his skill individually in a difficult one. He was ecstatic. His questioning of dwarvern superiority left and he started to treat his non-dwarvern friends as inferior, including his wife.

Mid-Way through his abusive relationship, losing friends, and being a general ass a siege happened. The baron of the fortress ordered the doors closed to the rest of Lockstead, allowing all those outside to be killed. Gorun was stunned, shocked, and enraged at this action. Everyone could have been saved, but the baron did not care for the lives of the non-dwarvern people of Lockstead. Getting in a heated argument with the baron about this, the lord threatened Maruna and was killed in return.

After leading Lockstead to victory and taking the fortress for Gravelbeard, Gorun sent in a letter of resignation to the kingdom's administration and left with his wife for Sadia, leaving Lockstead in possession of his father, who banished Gorun for being dishonorable.

In Sadia Sir Gorun apprenticed beneath a Mapepo, Sirul, and learned the art of enchanting. After ten year's of peace the Dwarves sent for an assasin to kill Gorun and his wife. Sirul said Gorun was graduated and gave Gorun a pass to the free cities. Since then his wife has been in hiding and Gorun adventuring. Gorun has taken a squire, learned of a growing movement seeking to establish a constitutional monarchy within the dwarvern lands, and had three kids. The squire although not graduated tends to stick more within the free city affairs.

Martial Skills:
It is Dwarvern Tradition for knights to become experts in a short and long weapon, with an expectation of being decent with them all. Usually these weapons are axes and hammers.
Guardian This Dwarvern knight began his service as a man-at-arms of a greater house, often serving in shieldwalls. While many Dwarvern knights born in greater houses end up favoring the lighter round shield for one on one dueling, Gravelbeard learned the tower first and stuck with it even when knighted. Hitting Gorur behind his shield is considered an achievement even among knights. He tends to favor the hatchet for it's speed when using the shield. He prefers to draw fights out when fighting this, to tire his opponents and learn how they fight.
Reacher Gorur uses his halberd as his medium ranged weapon, allowing him to pound through most opponents defense with sheer force then stab or slice them. Useful for breaking through shield walls. He is an expert in this field.
Single Sword Gravelbeard is not an expert with the short-sword, although when fighting without a shield it is his small weapon of choice.
Legendary Conditioning Wearing armor twelve hours a day means swimming with it is normal. It is not uncommon for dwarvern knights to fall asleep on the ground in their well padded helmets. You get used to it.
Descent With Almost Everything Else He has a working knowledge of the mechanics of most weapons

Passive Skills:
Noble He can hold and act in almost all courts in the land, respecting the customs of others while not submitting to them.
Miner He is a dwarf.
Stonesense While not as good as expert miners, Gravelbeard has an incredible sense of direction while underground.
Scholar Studying enchanting forced Gorun to learn reading and enjoy it. While not a professional, he is somewhat well learned.

Magic Skills:
Legendary Enchanter What is known is that his armor can sustain a ridiculous number of blows before failing. I have some pretty clever plans on how to use this, so I'd rather not tell anyone but the OP. If I do a reveal through RP I will add it here.

Inventory:
Belt Mythril Sword, Rope Coil, a few pouches for loose items, a mug sized and seemingly never ending keg.
Back Backpack with a pickaxe and hachet tied to it, containing larger items and a foot long portable hole with engravings.
Other Steel Plate armor with many engravings on the surface, along with a chain-mail hauberk beneath it to close the gaps.
Mount Steel Tower Shield (Featuring Hose Crest), Halberd, and tent. He ain't carrying that.

Other: He loves apple pie almost as much as he loves ale. Remember, he is a dwarf.
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I don't mind either way regarding how well the peeps in the party know eachother. Both offer valid, interesting RP opportunities. I am prone to visiting the OOC on a mildly obsessive basis, and am decidedly less intrigued by IRC. I live in Sweden, and am therefore GMT+1! I see myself being pretty active. Time constraints fluctuate but I should always be able to find time if we go at a pace that suggests quality rather than quantity.

As to the great Action/Plot ratio, I find that a 1:1 relation is generally the best in the long run. Maybe 1:1.25. I will (generally) produce posts that are 3+ paragraphs in length, with some upper limit of character length or something. I try to err on the side of excess, but if I struggle then I would rather cut it shorter than add nonsense prose.

My favorite movie is probably Aliens.
My favorite book(series) is The Lost Fleet. (and ASOIAF)
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@RabidAnubis
A Dwarf!

@Enzayne
A lady! Yay for gender diversity!

Update

To those of you still working on Character Sheets, I'm currently setting the launch of the IC tentatively tomorrow so if you could get a Character sheet up before then that would be awesomesauce. To everyone else I'm liking what I'm seeing so far, so that is good!

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Other: He loves apple pie almost as much as he loves ale. Remember, he is a dwarf.


Other:
Eovaine's favourite food is the apple pie, and he would kill a person to get it if he could.


Other: Apple pies are part of her herbal remedy repertoire. True story.


I wonder what our first internal fight will be about. I mean, half of our characters (minus the golem) seem to have a particular dietary need. Please tell me there isn't an apple shortage. If there is, it would stop the entire squad.
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I wonder what our first internal fight will be about. I mean, half of our characters (minus the golem) seem to have a particular dietary need. Please tell me there isn't an apple shortage. If there is, it would stop the entire squad.


Drat you figured out the Villain's evil plot to use necromancy to kill the world's apple crop! XD Guess I have to go back to the drawing board and write a new plot.
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Apple pie should be the official food of Iron Mountain. Or just this particular group of Iron Mountain.
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I added apple to my characters to please the masses
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-@Hexaflexagon At this rate less gender diversity, more smurfette principle. But at least it's a violent and manipulative smurfette...? x)
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WIP

Appearance:

Picture or written description or a combination of both.
Name/Nickname: Baer

Quote:

Gender: male

Race: beast folk


Personality: A couple of paragraphs so we can get a good grasp.
History: Once again the more paragraphs the nicer.

Martial Skills:
Passive Skills: What mundane things are they good at.
Magic Skills: Magic Y/N and if so what type?
Inventory: What do you have in your pockets
Other: A total mystery

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So... my character is allergic to apples...
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GM, have you decided who has gotten in?
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@RabidAnubis@Enzayne@Torack@Lotta Pumpkins@Flagg@RyanTadashi
I was just going over that right now. Sorry!
Well considering the other applications fell through. All the members of the apple pie brigade have made it in! Yay! You may all post your character sheets to the character tab!

@Weird Tales@Liar
The last two spots are currently open for you two once your CSs are done. Meaning we have reached the magic number of nine total! In the interest of keeping things alive, I'm going to start working on the first IC post but don't worry if you can't get your sheet in on time it will be very easy for you to jump in.

Update

Work on the Intro Post has begun!
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Don't worry, I'm here and working on a character sheet as we speak.

I was a tad busy over the weekend due to real life obligations.
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Good news to wake up to. :3
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Seeing how morally ambiguous everyone is, it's almost like I'm being led to make the token honorable character.
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Seeing how morally ambiguous everyone is, it's almost like I'm being led to make the token honorable character.


Don't worry my character will be lawful neutral.
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