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Thoroughly enjoyed Lillian's first post, @Dominique . Love the sense of innocence about her. Can't wait to see what happens when all of these awesome contrasting personalities get a chance to mingle!
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^word. I anticipate Klaus will pick mercilessly on Jobe like the shy kid in the back of the classroom, skirt nervously around Ghisronia, and study Lily with a regrettable lack of respect for personal boundaries when her magical abilities become known.
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^word. I anticipate Klaus will pick mercilessly on Jobe like the shy kid in the back of the classroom, skirt nervously around Ghisronia, and study Lily with a regrettable lack of respect for personal boundaries when her magical abilities become known.


Jobe isn't technically shy, he's uncomfortable in the situation. He'd probably react like any big burly kid who is picked on and punch Klaus in the face.

Just so ya know
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Jobe isn't technically shy, he's uncomfortable in the situation. He'd probably react like any big burly kid who is picked on and punch Klaus in the face.

Just so ya know


This should be good, then!

In other news, Jarin terrifies me.
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@Kingfisher That feeling is entirely mutual - I was so grateful Lilly got to pick a spot between Ghis and Jobe ^^ Did you also notice that the entire cast seems to be at least half a foot longer than either of those girl, btw?

@Kierkegaard That would be hilarious, and I have to admit that the part where Klaus prods the mage had me giggling as I read it! This crew is so wonderfully diverse, I absolutely love it!

Oh, btw, @Pirouette, I really love your character and not just for having a certain resemblance to Lagertha (Yay Vikings!). I hope you'll be approved soon - and is your profile picture from the Banner Saga? I never played it, but the animation style looks so familiar!

I think Jarin just might make Lilianna shrink to even smaller proportions =T
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What the hell did Jarin even do to those guards? I'd have understood if he had said 'do it then' and ran away, leaving the healer to her fate, but he just force choked three people instantaneously instead making me wonder why he even bothered letting them kill her.

Why is he capable of force choking anyone instantaneously? I'm always highly questioning of characters capable of eliminating multiple opponents so easily.

I'm not overly worried as it was just an introductory post, but I'm having trouble understanding his actions, did he even pick his money back up? At least then the healer's pointless death would have saved him some coin I guess.
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Is it alright if I assume everyone's seated at the same table? They don't necessarily have to be together, but it makes it a bit easier for my character's entrance.
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Is it alright if I assume everyone's seated at the same table? They don't necessarily have to be together, but it makes it a bit easier for my character's entrance.
@Obscene Symphony

The way I read it, there's just one long table in the room, so yes.

Would be pretty awkward if we were all scattered around. Klaus would immediately announce some sociological findings on the "cool kids table" phenomenon.
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<Snipped quote by Obscene Symphony>@Obscene Symphony

The way I read it, there's just one long table in the room, so yes.

Would be pretty awkward if we were all scattered around. Klaus would immediately announce some sociological findings on the "cool kids table" phenomenon.


I can see the Mean Girls reenactment now.
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I can see the Mean Girls reenactment now.


Mean Girls AU where Klaus is Regina George and Mytchel is the new kid???
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Mean Girls AU where Klaus is Regina George and Mytchel is the new kid???


So shall it be written so shall it be done!

"Those are the bard nerds, that's the mosaic club, those are the mages (they're totally stuck up) and that's the jousting team..."
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Oh, btw, @Pirouette, I really love your character and not just for having a certain resemblance to Lagertha (Yay Vikings!). I hope you'll be approved soon - and is your profile picture from the Banner Saga? I never played it, but the animation style looks so familiar!


Thank you very much!

I have seen a few episodes of Vikings but haven't gotten to her Shieldmadien days, yet.

But you are correct! I love the Banner Saga for its art style mainly.
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I...
I did not intend this post to be this long...
Well what the hell, here goes nothing.
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Och, poor Mytchel, making himself subservient to a bunch of peasants, criminals and social outcasts ;) Great post there, fellow-Starbomb-appreciator! I also wanna say that I think it's amazing 11 out of 11 people have actually posted already! I hope Pirouette gets approved quickly too, I'm just super impressed with all the quality writing and activity sofar ^^
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Och, poor Mytchel, making himself subservient to a bunch of peasants, criminals and social outcasts ;) Great post there, fellow-Starbomb-appreciator! I also wanna say that I think it's amazing 11 out of 11 people have actually posted already! I hope Pirouette gets approved quickly too, I'm just super impressed with all the quality writing and activity sofar ^^


Thank you, and don't worry about him. He'll take his internal breakdowns in stride XD

Is that really everyone? I hadn't noticed. I'm glad this got off to such a good start!
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@Melonhead
I apologize if Jarin seems overpowered in the first post. I didn't think I would have access to a computer for a few more days, so I typed it all up in a rush. My intention was show that he doesn't have a problem sacrificing innocent people for his own purposes, and that he wanted to nip any sign of leverage against him in the bud. This was more an example of him being pushed too far, and I don't intend to have him running around force choking people willy nilly. He does have limits and he prefers to use his powers as supplements to his weapon.
Also, there was a back story to why he was at that farm, why the men were pissed off at him, and why he knew the farmer was a healer, but I didn't want my opening post to turn into a novel.
I'm kind of hoping to develop his character by forcing him to trust his comrades. He's going to be a bit of a pain in the ass in the beginning, but he's still got some humanity deep down.
I'm sorry about that again. >.<
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@Wubwub I don't really like the 'force choking' either. The way you worded it in the CS, it was:

Black magic: Able to contract muscles of other beings to control movement (no more than one or two limbs at a time).


And by limbs I assumed you meant arms or legs, which is fine, not throats of three people getting magically choked out. That's kind of over the top.

@Pirouette Accepted!

Everyone's posts have been great so far, once Pirouette has posted in the IC then I'll post.

I'm also surprised no one made two characters, everyone but me just went with one.
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Thank you!

I will post pretty darn soon then.

I didn't go with two because Ive got a few other RPs.
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I can't really do two without the quality of one character's post turning to absolute crap somewhere down the line. ><''
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