Name:
Sasha Silverfang
Gender:
Male
Age:
25
Nationality:
Silverfang but of latest years from Illum
Appearance:

True to his people, he is tall and fair as an aspen tree but more toned than the rest of his bulky brethren. He stands a full head over most at 7' and tips the scales at twenty stones (280). A blow to the left side of his face took an eye and so he covers it with his hair when at rest.
Bio: [WIP, fragmented at best.]

As a member of the coastal tribes, they were 'protected' by Xanboro for many years as he regained his strength. Unfortunately, as he grew strong, he also grew hungry and Sasha was on the menu for the next offering. It was here that his mother put him on a boat and set south to Illuim for hopes of a better life for her son. It she became the house servant for a blackiron smith and Sasha fell into apprenticeship at only five years old where his natural bulk grew greatly under the blacksmiths tutelage.

For ten years he knew barely any more than the swelter of the forge or exhaustion by his mothers side. When he was fifteen, he was finally finished with his apprenticeship and could now wield the blades he had been forging. However the blades of the Illuimn were far too small for him to use to the best of his ability, even the 'longdeath' great-swords of the people were too light for him. So he gathered up ten times the ore needed for anyone else's sword and set to work on his own. It was a failure, nothing more than a cleaving slab of steel, but it was his and he planned to make it his own.

He traveled to each of the five clans and challenged two warriors to a duel. He lacked the formal training of the other warriors but his overwhelming strength proved to be enough to sunder their great blades and collect the pieces. It took him five years to find ten such individuals willing to accept such a challenge, but after those victories, he returned to his teacher to forge a new blade made from a superior steel. This time he succeeded.

It was a monstrosity, truly fitting his bulk and form. The steel was made from the ten swords of his victories and a full tang of six feet from tip to solid iron ring at the bottom. Now that he was armed with his true sword at twenty, he wanted to go home to free his people from the ways of Xanboro. But he could not do it alone. He would need the help of an army, he needed the Black Order.

As they accept all who come, entry was the easiest part. Getting himself on a mission to the silverfang coast was the hard part. For another five years he has worked his way in the ranks, trying to gain the skill to match his overwhelming strength to one day behead the monstrous snake.

Fighting Style: The way of the 'steel storm' is a polearm based style that involves stepping and spinning about to bring every chord of muscle to bear in blows that can cleave right through three men abreast.
Equipment:

6'long with 2' blade attached to a 4' haft and thirty pounds of steel.

A sample of his simple Ashigaru armor: Breastplate with exposed arms for maximum movement with a hardened skirting around the thighs finished by matching shin guards and bracers.

Skills/Abilities:
Smithing: The ability to repair or make most metallic needs for the black order with the proper tools and supplies.
Strength: He is strong. Not just the usual genetic tone, but daily exercises lifting and curling barrels of water or buckets of rocks over his head. True strength training to make the most of his body.
Other Information:

I THINK! I fixed my CS

@Kojashi28 Two things, First please remove the character from the IC page and place him here on the OOC page. And twos seeing as this is the same character you posted in the Interest Check without making any changes I am going to ask you to tweak the bio to fit into the current world setting that has been made here instead of cookie cutter place in fantasy wold character before I give it a real look through.

@Necrophage We might be able to work with a shape shifter depending on what you want to shift into shoot me a PM and we can work it out.

@knighthawk Alright with that addition I will say Sasha is good. (side note: you just had to edit and add it in, didn't have to fully re-post the character.

@AiyvaGuard your bio is still a wall of text and I haven't read it yet. I'll try to give it a look over after lunch.

knighthawk and his thirty pound polearm. He's strong!

My character should be done now, unless you see any mistakes. If so then I'll fix them when I have time

@AiyvaGuard Alright she looks good, I will accept her now

@Pie Flavor So your cs was a little hard to find with the hider and all, but he mostly looks good. I have a little problem with the age thing, I like to keep all player characters at least 18, but since i didn't say that in the cs section or anywhere in my initial post I can't really enforce it now. Otherwise the character is mostly good, the skulls are interesting and I would like to see a little more on how you came across them, or if that is part of a backstory which you wish to hide for now and reveal later just when you got them and leave details for later. Otherwise I would say your looking good

Name: Tyr The Just

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Nationality: Silverfang

Appearance:

Tyr is a 6'5" brute of a man with a long, flowing beard and a tough, hardened face.

Bio: Tyr the Just is a giant of a man, born and raised in Silverfang He quickly learned the way of combat.
When he turned 16 his coming of age ceremony was a test to see if he was worthy of being called a man.
Following his family's traditions Tyr set off into the wilds unarmed, his test was to see if he could survive a week in the wilderness.
after two weeks had passed his family having given him up for dead, Tyr returned dragging the corpse of a great wolf behind him.

When Tyr reached the age of 20 he went off on a hunting trip, he returned four days later to discover that his entire family had been slaughtered. Examining the corpses Tyr identified the cause of death to have been claws gouging out the eyes and the throat. Enraged with the betrayal of his sovereign Beasts Tyr set off on a quest for revenge. A quest that led him to The Order.

When Tyr first joined The Order he had, difficulties adjusting to social protocol. He quickly learned that smashing mugs was not a good idea, and that nearly killing men in bar fights will end with him in jail. Tyr has been with The Order for four years now and has managed to settle quite nicely into his daily life.

Fighting Style: Tyr is a Berserker who attacks in mad flurries that can rip his enemies apart.

Equipment: Tyr carries two war-axes into battle, and he dons a full helmet and a heavy iron-plated chestguard.

Skills/Abilities:
Bloodlust: When Tyr is fighting a Beast or if he sheds too much blood in battle he loses all restraint and lets instinct take over, resulting in a dizzying blur of hacks, slams and kicks.

Other:
-=Rules=-

knighthawk and his thirty pound polearm. He's strong!

Well its made from ten 3 pound swords, so it adds up.

At least it isn't Guts' sword from Berserk. Which is 400 pounds. That's like a bench press every time you hit something.

I pondered staying true to the picture and using a buster sword, even alluded to it in his history. but the two blacksmiths I have seen make them on youtube clock in at 80 lbs.

@Milowan Well our barbarian berserker looks good for the most part, there are just a few things, first in your second paragraph of the bio you leave to hunt with your family then return to them slaughtered, kinda has them in two places at once. Then there is the "sovereign Beasts" does this mean that one of the three great beasts did this? or did your family worship a lesser beast of some sort? And finally you are missing a little something at the end (check the rules on first page)

@knighthawk Alright with that addition I will say Sasha is good. (side note: you just had to edit and add it in, didn't have to fully re-post the character.

I added strength training to his skillset so I thought it merited a repost.

@Milowan Well our barbarian berserker looks good for the most part, there are just a few things, first in your second paragraph of the bio you leave to hunt with your family then return to them slaughtered, kinda has them in two places at once. Then there is the "sovereign Beasts" does this mean that one of the three great beasts did this? or did your family worship a lesser beast of some sort? And finally you are missing a little something at the end (check the rules on first page)

K did the minor edits on the cs (didn't notice I put "with his family" in there, went on autopilot)
Also the "sovereign Beasts" that I'm referring to also includes the lackeys of the Great Beasts such as small pocket factions that wish to wipe out humanity.

Why is there a CS in the IC?

@Milowan Thanks for clearing that up and making the changes I will say he is good to go now.

@AiyvaGuard Yes I noticed it as well, I have already asked for its removal both in the OOC and PM, I'll let him come back online before I go to the mods and ask for its removal.

Side note. Well we sure do have lots of people from Silverfang so far. damned barbarians taking over the squad :)

@Arthanus Question: once approved we can start posting IC yes?

I was going to say not yet and that I was going to make a post up to set the scene of where we are now, was just going to wait until the cs was removed from the IC. We have almost enough that I feel good starting it, but ill get up a real starting post tomorrow. So knight if you could just hide yours away, we aren't going to be starting anywhere nice like a training field :)

Should we make a new forum? More, cleansed and stuff without Kojashi's IC in the way because its been atleast two days....

I was going to say not yet and that I was going to make a post up to set the scene of where we are now, was just going to wait until the cs was removed from the IC. We have almost enough that I feel good starting it, but ill get up a real starting post tomorrow. So knight if you could just hide yours away, we aren't going to be starting anywhere nice like a training field :)

MiaCulpa.

Will post character when I get home from work.