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@MaxxWell, you could make a pencil disappear for us. That'd be fun.

But seriously, I'm going to through him in soon. Just wanted to get Aiden finished up before I lose the idea.
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@Raijinslayer Alek is NEST, right?
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Here's my finished sheet, hope I made him balanced as I tried to give him a lot of weaknesses to make up for his strengths.

Edit:@Mr Allen J Yes, yes he is.

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@Mr Allen JDid you have something planned for Alek, or can I post for him soon?
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@Raijinslayer Okay, I think Aiden is really interesting, but I think you need to tone his power down a lot. Because he has a metric fuckton of abilities, and they're all disproportionately strong compared to their drawbacks. His Western Dragon form is nigh-unstoppable, can shoot white hot flames, and can break even metal. Nobody can really counter that. The Eastern Dragon form is fine, but I'd like to know a bit more about the "hydrokinesis/weather manipulation", you could probably do without it. I also think you should cut the weather manipulation as a passive ability, since that constitutes as a power on it's own.
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@Mr Allen JOkay, I can do that. So I lower the power of his flames in his Halfling form, make his scales weaker(let's say resistant to knives, pistols, and some low powered Assault Rifles, but everything else can damage them and beyond depending on what it is) and lower the toughness of his claws and teeth. Would that make the western more applicable?

Edit: That was more of an overview of the Eastern Form's ability what he can do than an actual power, and I originally though of the weather manipulation as passive, but somehow believed that would be to powerful or something. Does that include the lightning guiding, or is that still active?

Also, what do you think Max's reaction would be if she ever found out who her stalker is, since she probably knows already, as quadcopters aren't exactly silent.
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@Mr Allen JOkay, I can do that. So I lower the power of his flames in his Halfling form, make his scales weaker(let's say resistant to knives, pistols, and some low powered Assault Rifles, but everything else can damage them and beyond depending on what it is) and lower the toughness of his claws and teeth. Would that make the western more applicable?


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@Mr Allen JDid you have something planned for Alek, or can I post for him soon?


Nothing in particular. You can just go ahead and post as him, homie.
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Edit: That was more of an overview of the Eastern Form's ability what he can do than an actual power, and I originally though of the weather manipulation as passive, but somehow believed that would be to powerful or something. Does that include the lightning guiding, or is that still active?


I would actually prefer if you dropped the hydrokinesis/weather manipulation, since, if he can sense emotions, and track characters down, that's veering a bit into ridiculous territory.

Also, what do you think Max's reaction would be if she ever found out who her stalker is, since she probably knows already, as quadcopters aren't exactly silent.


She would not take it well. She'd threaten Aiden, and probably kick him in the dick.

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@Mr Allen JI can get rid of the emotion/ tracking thing, it was kind of a last minute thing added because eastern Dragon's are supposed to be in tune with the energy of the world in most instances. The hydrokinesis and weather manipulation are much more direct relations to the lore, and something I'd rather keep, though I'm open to weakening them if need be.
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@Mr Allen JI can get rid of the emotion/ tracking thing, it was kind of a last minute thing added because eastern Dragon's are supposed to be in tune with the energy of the world in most instances. The hydrokinesis and weather manipulation are much more direct relations to the lore, and something I'd rather keep, though I'm open to weakening them if need be.


I would prefer if you just gave the Eastern form a breathe, - a water breath - or weaken both abilities greatly given his other abilities.
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@Mr Allen J I guess I'll go with a pressurized water breath, but then how strong should it be?

Nevermind, I've made the changes. Will try to make a post soon, but it'll probably be kinda short since I'm getting kicked off the computer at the moment.
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@Mr Allen J I guess I'll go with a pressurized water breath, but then how strong should it be?


If I might interject, I'd say about fire hose strength. Getting hit with a firehose hurts. Badly. It'd be enough to disorient enemies long enough to escape, at least. This form is more evasive, after all.
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@MaxxGood for me, edits have been remade according to this, and I'll put up stuff for his Aztec form once I have a better idea for it. That is going to be the trickier one to do, given the material I have to work with, but I think I can make something interesting out of it.
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@Raijinslayer Much, much, better now. He's accepted.
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You know, i keep reading these powers and thinking damn cool stuff. Bet that would really fucking hurt to be hit by though. How is taxi business these days, maybe accounting?
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Ah who am i kidding. Martin's favorite pass time is flying through the air like the graceful squid.
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Fair warning, I finished this character sheet through mobile so if the picture is too big, or the link doesn't work please let me know.

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I am not Allen, but I think it looks good.
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@Valhalla Neat, she's accepted.

Also, I decided to drop Fiona, and run five characters. Which puts me on par with Maxx...

... I'll have to fix that.
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@Valhalla Neat, she's accepted.

Also, I decided to drop Fiona, and run five characters. Which puts me on par with Maxx...

... I'll have to fix that.


I'll fix it. I'm making a sixth character. Now you're below me, puny mortal.
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