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Hidden 9 yrs ago → 9 yrs ago Post by Ariamis
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@Penultimate_Pi can now post. Dynamo can post after him.
Hidden 9 yrs ago → 9 yrs ago Post by LHG100
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Oh hey not to inject politics into this but uhm.

Yeah sorry that shit is just freaking me out and I had a MIGHTY NEED to spread the word. >.>, sort of ashamed of myself now.

BTW, am I doing okay RP wise?
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I hope this won't come to pass. As for your writing, it's fine, though the DJ persona quirk seems a bit out-of-character from an outside perspective.
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Yeah, I think Koehler is just 'avin a giggle there m8. I mean , in my mind he thinks, "If it's worth doing, IT'S WORTH OVERDOING!"
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@Ariamis

alright I'm fine with half the members in the RP going after the komodo, but @LHG100 is going to have to change his post, I know this isnt a strict arena battle, but he is auto hitting to ridiculous degree. There needs to be more detail of how he approached my Framewerk, and while i find the attacks quite funny, the IC doesnt work if you have already approached, overtook and done that much damage in such a short amount of time with no response.

I think the way it works is that you Attempt to give the komodo a prostate exam, by describing how youre framewerk is starting up the attack and then i react and describe the result based on a reasonable estimation. and vice versa.

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Ah, alright, I was thinking I was making koehler too good at this. I'll change it ASAP.

Erryone, don't reply yet until I change it please, thank you.
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god btw I'm still giggling.

"Well there's your problem, you're full of shit!".

mmmmmMmMmm. so good.
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I still haven't recovered from watching EoE. It's too much. Is there anything more powerful than that film?
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Think I cut it a bit short but it still works. Hope it got gud
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I'm sad to say you are still auto hitting like crazy,@LHG100

@Ariamis I ask you to step in and asses the post, until then I cant continue this RP.

http://forumroleplay.com/roleplay-guides/fight-roleplay/
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Man I knew this would happen.

It's always either the fights are too hard, or way too easy, or are just boring... Alright, second attempt at re-writing it is a go. gimme a bit.
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Dynamo is right, you are auto hitting with your attacks and also making too many of them. Your attacks should be attempted against the Komodo, not actually done.
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Well now I'm thinking I'm just ruining everyone's fun.

Should I leave?

I'm beggining to think I should leave.
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I don't want you to leave. I do like your writing, and how excited you are for this. However, you can dial back on the excitement a bit.
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Well It's getting obvious, even if I am writing alright I'm beginning to ruin everyone else's stuff. I suppose this is a bit out of my league anyway, it's getting difficult to post stuff as detailed and well thought out as everyone else's.

I'll try to hang on a little longer to see if I'm just having a minor bout of dipshittery, if it seems to persist I may kill off Koehler somehow and just lurk.
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@LHG100
This is Casual, not Advanced, so you don't need to worry too much about your writing. I'm not going to be really strict about post quality, and any comments I may make on them is to simply make the whole experience more unified and cohesive.

And the fix to your post is simple; describe the way Roxy came close to the Komodo, how he came up with the plan to fist the poor Frame, maybe with some alternative ideas for attack first juggled around in his head before coming up with that one, and then describe how you revved up your pilebunker, aimed for that tender robo-ass and threw your punch while leaving the result ambiguous.
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"Tender robot ass" - Ariamis.

Tender robot ass. WELP. Now I CAN NOT FAIL. I made someone say that!

That's fucking glorious.
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The only anime movie I know of that can match up to EoE in terms of visual imagery and sheer WTF:ness is Madoka Magica: Rebellion, another movie ending to a tv series. It's to magical girls what EoE is to mecha. And when I say it, I do mean it.

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It is.
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Alright, I think it's bretty gud now. I know I'm happy with it. If it's still 2stupid4u, @Dynamo Frokane, please tell!
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@LHG100 It was a long shot anyway. There was a Tom Cruise action movie from 2012 called "Jack Reacher". My first thought upon seeing it was that of an evil proctologist.
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