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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Tokki
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Here's my shoddy attempt. Please inform me of any problems!


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@GodOfWar

Same thing I said to gemini about specific locations. Also:

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Is very shaky. The people behind this aren't miracle workers or anything; moreover, an account of what was happening directly before waking up in the building goes pretty harshly against the basis. It's just "living life in a standard way, woke up one day somewhere different", rather than "nearly died and woke up kidnapped".


Understood, I edited my CS accordingly.

BTW; Sorry for invading the GMs realm, I've been very illogical with my writing today. >.>
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(While I don't usually do CS's in this format, I like how Tokki did his/her's. Therefore, I'm mimicking it ^_^; Also, thanks for answering my questions, @Dawn!)

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@DawnI went ahead and pulled the real-world locations.
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Hmm... I might have to drop out of this RP due to time saving reasons and my ambition to start up another RP of my own. I'm sincerely sorry for any inconvenience, and I hope the RP goes smoothly without me.

It was nice while it lasted XD
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Here's my CS! Please notify me if there's anything wrong with it.

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@Tokki, Lex is accepted.

@Rhaevnn Xeno, on Vint, I'd prefer if you removed the last two sentences of his history, just because I don't want codification on how the incident that sparked the RP present in character bios; you guys don't know how it happened, after all~
Once that's removed, he's accepted.

@GodOfWar Aw, well, thanks for stopping by. Have a good one~!

@Illusion, Sophie is good to go.
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edit: Sincere apologies... I've been having trouble deciding on what sort of character to make... After I sleep, it shouldn't be too long before I have one up.
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@Rhaevnn Xeno, on Vint, I'd prefer if you removed the last two sentences of his history, just because I don't want codification on how the incident that sparked the RP present in character bios; you guys don't know how it happened, after all~
Once that's removed, he's accepted.


Taken care of!
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(While I don't usually do CS's in this format, I like how Tokki did his/her's. Therefore, I'm mimicking it ^_^;


Honhon! I'm flattered. ovo Great character btw. Looks like we have a good crew so far.

@Dawn Thanks for the acceptance, I'll move her to the other page. :)

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Honhon! I'm flattered. ovo Great character btw. Looks like we have a good crew so far.


It was just so clean and crisp, I couldn't resist! And thanks, you too! x3
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Alrighty. Once @Yuri, @Mugin, and @MisterMonkeyFace get their apps in, we'll be starting. I'm impressed with how quickly this has progressed.
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*attempts to make CS look fancier*

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Finally got my cs up. I'm sorry about the wait. However I do have a question...

do you want a banana? youtube.com/watch?v=yModCU1O..
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@MisterMonkeyFace OOOOOOOOOOH GOOD FOR YOU. Fucking Bale.

Is "making do" just "he can sit around without going insane", or what?
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Fucking bale?

And I'd stated he uses whatever's around to his benefit. Take for example... Honestly I can't think of any examples at the moment. I can just remove it.
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@MisterMonkeyFace Nothing, nothing~

And sure, if it's unclear as to what it does, I'd rather it not be there. I just wanted some clarification. He's approved, then.
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Louie "The King" Vinston


Gender: Male

Age: 26

Personality: Louie is very analytic in nature. He was raised in a studious environment and has a tendency to brag about what he knows unconsciously. He is very well rounded in many subjects of life. Louie is a very strategic and will only do things that benefit his well being. Louie has a very robotic way of doing things, most consider him very likable, when he is not being a total jerk. He has no tact and doesn't know when to be sensitive to others. Other than his lack of understanding to others feelings Louie is a very outgoing and friendly person, he would be that friend that would always say whats on his mind and be brutally honest but would not be a jerk about it.

Occupation: High School Calculus Teacher

Biography: Louie was born as the only child of two wealthy parents. His birth could be the financial bond of two different people. He was raised as the only child, and the maids in his house would call him the "King" of the castle (his house) because his parents were never their. Despite his upbringing he choose to go to public school to learn how to deal with others. After graduating from high school, he went on to college and didn't know what to do with him self, so he decided to do everything. He dabbled in may different fields staying undecided for a long time, until he finally went with education. Louie found his true passion in teach others while tutoring his fellow peers in different subjects, so he decided to teach math, only because in English there where to many "what if's" and math was either it is right or wrong. He went on to get his degree in education and in higher math so that he could teach high school students.

Skills:
Intelligent: Louie is very smart. He has good math skills, can recite most poetry, and knows basics of most of the sciences. Brain Before Brawn is his motto.
Strategist: He has a way with thinking his way out of every situation. Find escape routes, side doors, and short cuts, to get to the goal is his greatest skill.
Decision Maker: Due to his lack of understanding of others he is not afraid to make the hard decisions that most won't. If someone became a liability to his survival he would not think twice before removing them.
First Aid: He knows basic first aid and some advance methods. For example, stitches, taking care off wounds, dealing with poisons, and broken bones.

Sorry it took so long, I had a lot going on.
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@Mugin

The image is obnoxiously just a tad large, so if you could pop it in a hider, that'd be great~

The sticking point for me is the generality of his profession. Speaking generally, a college professor's going to need a high level of familiarity with the subject they're teaching, unless he's teaching at some trash-tier university which seems odd considering how rich his background is. The PhD in Education won't be enough to justify being able to teach multiple subjects at a college level, and even if I grant you grade-skipping and that he's a genius and whatever, you're pushing the envelope anyway, so I can't fiat him having another degree in an appropriate subject.

So, I'd either recommend turning him into a high school teacher, or adding a decade or two to his age and giving him a second degree in appropriate subject-matter.
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Okay how does it look now and sorry I didn't think it through as well as I thought, didn't mean to cause any issues.
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