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@darkmatter No kidding. Interest left right and centre. But we haven't cut it off yet! Hop on in. XD


Cyberpunk tends to be super popular, I gm'd one a few years back that had about 10 IC posts within a day

I'm surprised there haven't been any in-depth ones like this again, until now, or at least that I haven't seen. Pretty excited, looking forward to jumping in.
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@Leb Alright, after discussing with both Mach and Ghost, we have agreed that while the CS itself is really great, the image is a bit on the anime/cartoonish side... VERY borderline. A lot of who your character is stems from the way she looks (which I totally get. I'm one of those people who find pictures and then build a character off of how they appear to me) and with those specifications of her hair (at least) we are going to go ahead and approve this, HOWEVER if you want to take out some time these next few days and do a little image searching and can find something resembling closely (we would also be willing to help in that search -ahem-) what you are going for, you will get major kudos from the co-GMs and I.

This thing took off like a rocket.

If you're still accepting, I'll begin work on a character.


Damn... this is getting a lot more attention than anticipated haha. Yeah go ahead and make a CS, we're still accepting...

On another note... maybe we should think about a limit so this thing doesn't implode on itself... o.0
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@Leb Alright, after discussing with both Mach and Ghost, we have agreed that while the CS itself is really great, the image is a bit on the anime/cartoonish side... VERY borderline. A lot of who your character is stems from the way she looks (which I totally get. I'm one of those people who find pictures and then build a character off of how they appear to me) and with those specifications of her hair (at least) we are going to go ahead and approve this, HOWEVER if you want to take out some time these next few days and do a little image searching and can find something resembling closely (we would also be willing to help in that search -ahem-) what you are going for, you will get major kudos from the co-GMs and I.

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Damn... this is getting a lot more attention than anticipated haha. Yeah go ahead and make a CS, we're still accepting...

On another note... maybe we should think about a limit so this thing doesn't implode on itself... o.0


I've skimmed the sheets but nor read them all fully, in the process of doing so. Based on the character already there, would another criminal character be ill-advised, would people prefer a 'good guy' or maybe just a seemingly unimportant character?
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I've skimmed the sheets but nor read them all fully, in the process of doing so. Based on the character already there, would another criminal character be ill-advised, would people prefer a 'good guy' or maybe just a seemingly unimportant character?


I think that by the way things are going, we could definitely use a 'poster boy' good guy, a sort of lighted beacon to shine on everyone through all the dark and piss Deon off a lot >:D lol but seriously, a good guy could definitely be beneficial to the group.
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I think that by the way things are going, we could definitely use a 'poster boy' good guy, a sort of lighted beacon to shine on everyone through all the dark and piss Deon off a lot >:D lol but seriously, a good guy could definitely be beneficial to the group.


Then I have three follow up questions:

Is the city essentially martial law correct? All security is government controlled?

How hi-tech are augments and such that are freely available to the general populace?

What would the government's opinion of private security contractors/PIs be?
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@Darkmatter via @Ghost Shadow
Is the city essentially martial law correct? All security is government controlled?
Answer: Yep yep!

How hi-tech are augments and such that are freely available to the general populace?
Answer: Cybernetic implants are mass produced and used by just about everyone. Generally work done and come with many advantages but also have a number of side effects (See Science and Tech portion of the OP). More drastic modifications are of course from severe hospital care where the 'upgrades' are deemed 'absolutely necessary'

What would the government's opinion of private security contractors/PIs be?
Answer: Most private security would probably be owned by the ritsy rich who can get away with it. Government doesn't get involved unless they feel threatened
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Ok. Thanks. I have a character in mind so, but it can be adjusted as needs be. I'll get to work on him now.

Edit: Are the restricted districts actually that deadly? I mean, gangs are gangs but are they really shoot on sight downright madness? Or is that just hyperbole? @YoshiSkittlez

I find the description of Flannery's the most offensive but accurate thing I've seen today.

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Edit: Are the restricted districts actually that deadly? I mean, gangs are gangs but are they really shoot on sight downright madness? Or is that just hyperbole? @YoshiSkittlez


Yeah... they're pretty bad... lol but the restricted districts are more like, 'let the 'bad' guys go there so they won't come here' type thing. Nothing is up and running there; no stores or electricity. A literal ghost town with collapsing buildings etc.

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Yeah... they're pretty bad... lol but the restricted districts are more like, 'let the 'bad' guys go there so they won't come here' type thing. Nothing is up and running there; no stores or electricity. A literal ghost town with collapsing buildings etc.


Right ok fair enough on the restricted zones. I don't really get how that'd ever happen in such a city where space is obviously an issue but it's your RP

Having read the character sheets there's definitely more 'good' than 'bad'. Unless I'm categorizing them wrong?

Other than Derrick and Deon there aren't any 'bad' characters? I 100% don't categorise drug addicts as bad or immoral people based on their addiction alone, and certainly not the ones portrayed here!
And even then Deon and Derrick are in a grey area. And there's three law enforcement characters!

The way I see it, there's a lot of mixed up characters and a lot of 'do-gooders and try hards'. When I asked if there was a need for 'bad' characters I mean downright assholes. I had planned to make a genuine piece of shit scumbag, but then you said we needed a beacon of light

I'm just a little confused.
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Name: Alexander Romanov Krei

Nickname: The Roman

Gender: Male

Age: 42

Occupation: Privite Eye (located in Zone Beta but takes cases from Alpha as well)

District: Current office is located in the center of downtown 16

Height: 6'1"

Weight: 220 lbs.

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Personality: Alex a great deal of his early adult life as an officer of the law and as such has seen a great deal during what seems like the long strech of his short life. The life as a cop has hardened him to the point where he lives and breathes for the few cases he deems interesting enough to take on and because of this outlook comes across as callous and cold hearted to everyday problems. Alex seems to have an extreme hatred towards gang related violence and an even greater hatred for crimes against women. On the subject of women, Alex himself is a terrible womanizer which most likely stems from his alcholism. Because of an incident many years prior Alex is left with a good portion of his body as prostetics and as such suffers with the known side-effects.

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Alex "The Roman" Krei came from rather humble beginnings in a world that has become increasingly dismal. Born to a single mother in one of the worse parts of District 16 Krei was born as the personification of the "white knight" personality standing up to bullies and standing up to organized crime (when his life wasn't on the line of course). At the age of eighteen Alex took on the noble job of a New Ancoran Police Officer ready and willing to eliminate all crime within the Beta Zone.

By his mid-twenties still held firm to his attitude and his personal creedo, and it seemed like it could possibly come true within his life time as crime rates within his District were significantly decreasing. With the increase in pay Alex was able to move his mother out of his childhood home and into a nicer apartment in District 12. Fate it seems, had a crueler plan in mind for Alex. While he was working a high end drug trafficing case where pushers were starting to move more and more Lucid Alex made the bust that would end up starting a massive downward spiral of his life. After he brought down a pusher that could only be identified as "Grey" the higher-end bosses finally began taking notice of the upstart cop pushing in on their territory.

It started subtlely at first; punctured tires, muggings on the transit home, threating calls and the like. Alex gave these things little attention as he continued his personal war against these drug lords and those under them. By the time he turned thirty-three the final hammer fell for Alex. One night while he was off duty Alex went to see his mother for one of their weekly dinners when he noticed that everything was wrong. The lights were off, the door was kicked open, the smell of burnt food was wofting from the door. Drawing his gun Alex could feel the knot tightening in his chest as he searched the house for any sign of what might have happened in his mothers home. As he rounded the corner of his mother's bedroom what he came face to face with was nothing more than the single worst thing in his life.

There lay his mother; broken, beaten, shot, stabbed and a thousand other things that he didn't even want to think about at that moment in life. After saying a prayer and calling the coroner to come remove the body Alex quit the Force in lieu of getting his own personal revenge knowing full well that he would be treated like a criminal himself. It took years of hunting under the name of "The Roman" crawling through every crack house, and bringing down every pusher that he could find until one of them finally four words.

"Alpha. They're in Alpha."

Taking a moment to weigh his options Roman called in a few of his contacts at the Department The Roman was able to secure one pass to Zone Alpha for one day only, a pass that he would never get to use. As he prepared to bring war into the Alpha Zone he was met with several men in suits ambushed him and began beating him mercilessly. It was then that the big boss showed himself only calling himself "The Scorpion". The beating lasted hours leaving Alex little more than a bloody pulp; rib cage practically dust, arms shattered, both eyes ruptured to the point that he would never be able to use them again and still Alex stood up and continued walking. For an hour and a half he walked the streets of 17 unable to call out for help until he finally passed out near a main road.

When he woke up again, he was in a hospital in the Alpha Zone and he could see again. Both of his arms were replaced, his ribcage was solid metal, and his eyes had been replaced with cybernetic counterparts. Despite all things he was alive and able to live another day, when he asked the nurses about how he got there all they would say is that a man came by while he was unconcious and left him a card. The card read:

Know your place...next time I won't be generous."

Beneath the message was an ornate image of a scorpion. Now feeling the full weight of the message Alex returned a beaten and broken man to 16 where he made a name for himself as a privite eye where he continues to lick his wounds from his beating. And every day since has been a living hell.

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@darkmatter Hm. I'm relooking at all the characters now. We've got a lot of hard characters, but you're right. Not necessarily bad guys. I misevaluated this mix. There's a lot more good going on than I thought.

I think Elizabeth could potentially be grouped in with Deon and Derrick. She's a scary chick. And I know that one of the characters (not saying who. Spoilers!) may be darker than they appear.

Personally, I could go for another scumbag. Discussing it with the other GMs, but I'd give the go ahead to your piece-of-shit asshole. XD
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@darkmatter Hm. I'm relooking at all the characters now. We've got a lot of hard characters, but you're right. Not necessarily bad guys. I misevaluated this mix. There's a lot more good going on than I thought.

I think Elizabeth could potentially be grouped in with Deon and Derrick. She's a scary chick. And I know that one of the characters (not saying who. Spoilers!) may be darker than they appear.

Personally, I could go for another scumbag. Discussing it with the other GMs, but I'd give the go ahead to your piece-of-shit asshole. XD


Well I don't have a choice now anyway seeing as how @Archangel89 literally just posted a PI character which was my other idea, hence all the questions regarding it I had previously asked.

Scumbag mobman it is.
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@darkmatter Well. Guess that solves that. Fate has spoken. XD

@archangel89 Huh. I like him. Especially that little shoutout to a drug dealer named Grey. One thing, though...
...The Roman? *eyes suspiciously*
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@Leb Mach and I will review your CS here shortly :)

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Not sure who this question is aimed at... maybe me... but does New Ancora even have Colombians? I don't mean that in a racist way, I'm just slightly confusing myself because those who live in New Ancora... well they've been there forever... generations upon generations... no one from the outside comes in and no one from the inside goes out... hmm....


I'm not sure if Mach addressed this question efficiently enough, but even though Devil's Breath is iconic for it's use in Colombia, it does exist elsewhere as a regular narcotic. However, when you research it, any source directly focuses on Colombia, who applies it basically as mind control. Which is pretty scary. Even then, Mach's points are still highlyrics applicable, and with the only thing needed to make it being a flower, I could have it at my apartment window, and due to its lack of renown, noone be the wiser.
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@Mach2

Actually I was quoting Boondock Saints 2, plus I named the guy romanov..I.it kinda made since at the time.
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@darkmatter Well. Guess that solves that. Fate has spoken. XD


Cool cool. Leaving work now, and have a variety of shopping tasks but expect a character over the next 8 hours.
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Thanks a bunch and most likely yes I will be needing help finding a picture to resemble what I want though I dont mind tweaking if an image is slightly off!
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I think a character limit would be wise... Lol. Just my opinion
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Considering the average rate of drop out rates, I don't think a cap is totally necessary unless numbers hit 20
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Considering the average rate of drop out rates, I don't think a cap is totally necessary unless numbers hit 20


True. I'm unfamiliar with the drop-out rates of this site, but I am familiar with drop-out rate of RPs that get too large. It can be confusing, and even become exclusive in a way..

Again, I don't know what I'm talking about when it comes to this site.
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