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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by YoshiSkittlez
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@Darkmatter You have a valid point and for that I commend you. Deon could use a little competition anyway :P I eagerly await your CS!

@Archangel89 You! Yes... yes yes yes a thousand times yes! Approved! I'm putting him in the character thread now! <3

@Leb Did you see the image I url-linked in my previous response to you?

I'm gonna be posting an official intro for Deon (Kate's will be next) since that intro didn't really count for much. Plus it seems like a lot of people are headed to The Spit so, yeah, gonna give ya'll a good show :D
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@YoshiSkittlezAh yes, I did, except it wouldn't load for me but Mach sent me the pic and I will gladly be using it once I alter the picture to fit the color
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Here's mine.

Edit: I made some small changes. Not much though.

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Alright guys, I only woke up to pee then decided I had to get in a Deon solo post ^.^ I'm headed back to bed so I can concentrate more on looking over your CS @Blubaron45. I also work tonight, so in my absence @Ghost Shadow and @Mach2 are in charge and will handle things while I'm gone. When I return, a solo Kate post :)
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@blubaron45 Ooookay, I'm terribad at critiquing, especially this late at night (it's 2am over here), so bear with me.

You can definitely write. No issues there. But the character isn't sitting right with me. We've got a secret order of cyberpunk monks. Injections that make your character exceptionally athletic, with no side effects. And the end result is an innercity ninja with a secret vendetta of taking out the men who killed his people.

There's a lot of sorta-cliche anime vibes going on. Accompanied with a picture that's also incredibly anime in style. Final verdict rests with Yoshi or Ghost, of course, but I'm leery.

Take everything I say with a grain of salt. I think it may have come off more harsh than intended. I get salty when I'm tired.
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Ignore my editing post. I made a mistake, and have no way to delete it.
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Yo GMs. Is the application process set as above?

I have a sorta unique idea for a CS, it'll tick all the appropriate boxes for info and such, and I can even format it like the template but the tone and perspective wouldn't be traditional. Is that ok?
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@blubaron45
Take everything I say with a grain of salt. I think it may have come off more harsh than intended.


Not at all, it's not everyday you see a hitman, intercity-ninja with a passion for vengeance roaming from one building to the next in the black night and even less so to have him be greeted amiably - by anyone, really. The side effects were something that escaped my mind as well and I can easily make amends to him in general most definitely (or make a new character entirely if that's the case, it did not take me very long). Thank you for your analytical sentiment.
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I would just like to know when we have the go-ahead to post again. I know that quite a few players have not posted, but I don't imagine we'll all be sharing the same experience/conversation. Of course, I don't want to monopolize posts either.. pardon my enthusiasm.
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@Blubaron45 I have to agree with Mach on this one. It isn't at all a bad character, he just doesn't fit the lore of New Ancora. I get more of a 'superhero/vigilante' feel from him and that's just a BIT too far-fetched for this rp. You can either make edits and tone him down (which will take some work) or you are free to create a new character, it is your decision. Just... less 'anime-ish' please.

@Darkmatter I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you mean. Like, change the format of the CS sheet? As long as the required information is there, I'm not at all against you adding different things. If Ghost Shadow were playing an actual human, you would see an entire wardrobe section in there lol :D

@Lev You have a lot of good points, and I think for right now I'm just going to make a 'make sure 3 characters have posted since you've posted' rule just because there are so many of us. I say characters and not players because there are some of us with 2 characters that do very different things :P Does that help?
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@Blubaron45 I have to agree with Mach on this one. It isn't at all a bad character, he just doesn't fit the lore of New Ancora. I get more of a 'superhero/vigilante' feel from him and that's just a BIT too far-fetched for this rp. You can either make edits and tone him down (which will take some work) or you are free to create a new character, it is your decision. Just... less 'anime-ish' please.

@Darkmatter I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you mean. Like, change the format of the CS sheet? As long as the required information is there, I'm not at all against you adding different things. If Ghost Shadow were playing an actual human, you would see an entire wardrobe section in there lol :D

@Lev You have a lot of good points, and I think for right now I'm just going to make a 'make sure 3 characters have posted since you've posted' rule just because there are so many of us. I say characters and not players because there are some of us with 2 characters that do very different things :P Does that help?


All the info will be there. You can judge for yourself when it's up.
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an updated look on Ada Fix

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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by YoshiSkittlez
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@Leb It has been updated. I love photoshop, it looks great!
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Will post tonight...the only question is how lol
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@YoshiSkittlezthanks for the picture! And yes, Photoshop is amazing.
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Will post tonight...the only question is how lol


Very carefully lol
IDK, there's a lot of things a cyborg PI could be doing. Working a case, getting a beer, getting his arms recalibrated... etc.
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Kat is prepped to launch a siege on the Spit, so if you want to get your character in there, let me know so I'll wait.
EDIT:
I've now decided that my goal in this game is to hold a raid on every named location in this city.
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@sypherkhode822 Talking to a few people through PMs and off-site, I know there's definitely at least a couple more planning to enter the Spit.

If you're intending for a massive raid or something, forewarning, just be careful to avoid godmoddng, please. :)
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@YoshiSkittlez As much as I'd like to - I think I will abstain from this RP seeing that it is full. Best wishes!
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I'm debating ending up at the Spit but that seems to be everyone's thought....hmm back to the drawing board
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