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Well, it's good that you're aware of how over the top he is, but I'm not really sure how you're imagining anyone who's a serial mass murderer who if I'm not mistaken literally slaughtered a bunch of orphans 'for the fun of it' and definitely seems to have done that to several villages worth of people could interact with any of the other current players in any way. Unless you were trying to make one of the most one-dimensional hatesinks possible as a villain, in which case that's not what the signups are for since it's for a single crew.


True, I really didn't think of that. I think I'll just stick with Seth. plus, writing for two characters in different locations might get a little confusing. So I'll stick with just Seth if that's ok?
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No clue, we aren't the GM any way.

Alright, post is a go, let me know what you think!
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Yeah, I'm not the GM, just a guy commenting on some of the more common-sense seeming problems of your sheets. For instance if Metal-Metal Fruit guy joined the Marines, you need to think of why he's gonna go be part of a pirate crew instead of wanting to hunt all of us down. I'm presuming the GM's own PC will either have had that figured out as part of the way they gained their devil fruit, or he really will be an enemy we have to fight in the future.
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"As they exploded" Musta been painful. I assume it was just a small error, with it and Caption instead of Captain. I'd be alright with Seth, except for him being captain. The other guy, No way jose. Also, the Naming Convention is a Japanese Onomonatopeia said twice usually.
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So I'm working on a ship's doctor. He smokes. Don't worry, it's medicinal- he wrote a prescription and everything.
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Also, the Naming Convention is a Japanese Onomonatopeia said twice usually.


Well... Sort of. Quite a lot of them are like that, yes. But the main thing is that the Japanese names are a two syllable word (often an onomatopeia) repeated once. Like... Gomu-Gomu no Mi, Hana-Hana no Mi, Goro-Goro no Mi, etc. They all follow that pattern; go ahead, check if you don't believe me. XD

Buuut that's just me being excessively nitpicky. ^^;
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I understand Rin.
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That's ridiculous, no-one understands me. :D
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So I'm working on a ship's doctor. He smokes. Don't worry, it's medicinal- he wrote a prescription and everything.


Now that is a badass fishman! Love it.
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"As they exploded" Musta been painful. I assume it was just a small error, with it and Caption instead of Captain. I'd be alright with Seth, except for him being captain. The other guy, No way jose. Also, the Naming Convention is a Japanese Onomonatopeia said twice usually.


sorry for the mistakes. there's really no reason for it. I'm going to go back and change Seth's back story a little. I also deleted the Nails Character. being two characters might be pushing it. also, I was thinking of changing the fruit to the Tetsu Tetsu no Mi. it's a a Logia-type Devil Fruit that allows the a person to control, create, and transform into metal at will, turning the user into a Metal Human. I've been researching all types of Devil Fruit. I was hoping that I would expand upon it and make it a sort of liquid metal that the blood stream creates. this way the power isn't over powered and had a draw back where the user can't use as much other wise he risks losing a lot of blood. would that be alright? here is the link I found the Tetsu Tetsu no Mi if you're interested: onepiecefanon.wikia.com/wiki/Tetsu_Tet..
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Now that is a badass fishman! Love it.


OR IS IT?!

Ran the full one by the GM via PM.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by PandaBrady
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A metal Logia type would be kinda OP. Um... Maybe Paramecia that turns you to Liquid Metal/Solid Metal, kinda like that Gold Fruit guy.
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I can dig it mister Calamari.
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A metal Logia type would be kinda OP. Um... Maybe Paramecia that turns you to Liquid Metal/Solid Metal, kinda like that Gold Fruit guy.


ok, I'll take out the part about makes the liquid metal like acid and the part that lets him create weapons out of the metal. it will only make him into a liquid metal state and create a sort of armor around him when its solid. would that work?
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Yep, sounds more Paramecia than Logia, and Logia can get OP, especially in a RP environment.
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Yep, sounds more Paramecia than Logia, and Logia can get OP, especially in a RP environment.


alright, I edited the character sheet. did you want me to post the character in the characters page or wait a while?
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go ahead
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Sadly, I will be withdrawing from this roleplay as it turned out different than I expected. Have fun y'all.


Sorry it wasn't what you expected. Perhaps it will be later. Then maybe you could jump in then.
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Aw man, that means Kara's the only girl on the crew now. D:
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So was Nami for a time.
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