Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lord Wraith
Raw
GM
Avatar of Lord Wraith

Lord Wraith Actually Three Otters in a Trenchcoat

Member Online

@Lord Wraith You know, since Alexis is basically Fem!Edward Cullen, and Elwood is Jacob Black, all we need is a stand in for Bella Swan and we can have ourselves an incredibly stilted Twilight love triangle!


It's funny because I'm slightly shipping Elwood and Alexis.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Mixtape Ghost N
Raw
Avatar of Mixtape Ghost N

Mixtape Ghost N SOMETIMES EVЕN RICH NIGGAS GET LOST

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

It's funny because I'm slightly shipping Elwood and Alexis.


God damn it, Wraith.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lord Wraith
Raw
GM
Avatar of Lord Wraith

Lord Wraith Actually Three Otters in a Trenchcoat

Member Online

God damn it, Wraith.


Twilight jokes, all the time.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by hagroden
Raw
Avatar of hagroden

hagroden Atomic Angel

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

Is there anything I should work on for my CS, or am I just flat out not accepted?
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Mixtape Ghost N
Raw
Avatar of Mixtape Ghost N

Mixtape Ghost N SOMETIMES EVЕN RICH NIGGAS GET LOST

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

Is there anything I should work on for my CS, or am I just flat out not accepted?


Give it time, home skillet. Wraith has to judge your sheets accordingly.

Though, what I'd do if I were you is give Chris some actually exploitable weaknesses. lol
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lord Wraith
Raw
GM
Avatar of Lord Wraith

Lord Wraith Actually Three Otters in a Trenchcoat

Member Online

| NAME: |
Chris James Dimnic

| NICKNAME(S): |
Ved, or Hop

| ALIAS(ES): |
Ved Bright

| ABILITIES: |
Other than his claims of superhuman rapping capabilities, his truly extraordinary abilities are his manipulation of light. Using other lights within eyesight, he can create orbs of light in varying degrees of intensity (Dim to painfully bright). Later on in life he will discover he can create projectiles or beams of white-hot light that originate from his palms.

| SAMPLE POST: |
Ved

His head bobbed slowly as he pinched his upper lip, closing his eyes and feeling the rhythm of his buddy Ray's newest rhythm, he adjusted his headphones over his ears, positioning them comfortably.
"Yo man, I got this." He murmured as he ran his fingers down to his chin, rubbing slowly as he took in a shallow breath.

"Yeah I know I'm just another nigga tryna rap, but between you an me I got bitches in the back. So set that shit on repeat and kick it to this track, while I'm dropping niggas with my verse that's a fact!"
His hands moved in circles, gesturing and using his hands to say just a much as his mouth. This kind of bullshit had been his life for the last six months, and no matter how creative he got with his lyrics, nobody would drop more than a five in his hat.
"And fuck yo weak raps man that shit act got me pulling hair out my hand on the back now c'mere SMACK, I sick an tired of theses niggas try be acting cool when really you just givin our name to fools because everyone around me now thinks I'm a tool because I used to fuck around with clowns like you! I really don't give a fuck about the next thing you do, as long as you keep it far from here dude.
He took another heavy breath, a faint glowing in his hands concerning him.
"Turn this shit off, I can't spit in these conditions man."
He complained, which wasn't surprising given the leaks in the roof. It hadn't rained in three days yet somehow there was still water droplets hitting the half-full pans. He pulled off the headphones,setting them down and taking a drink from the half-empty pint of Jack.

| NOTES: |
Arnold Palmer, a mix of lemonade and sweet tea.


The abilities need to be expanded upon, the more detail you can provide the better. I should note, the sheet in this condition is rejected as it doesn't include limitations or an exploitable weakness which is requirement for this RP.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by hagroden
Raw
Avatar of hagroden

hagroden Atomic Angel

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

I extended the abilities section, including his strengths and weaknesses, as well as hinting onto some possible character growth.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Tyler
Raw
Avatar of Tyler

Tyler Me. I Am Tyler... / The Elusive Auteur

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

<Snipped quote by Roman>

your fav is problematic


This is so accurate it hurts.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Mixtape Ghost N
Raw
Avatar of Mixtape Ghost N

Mixtape Ghost N SOMETIMES EVЕN RICH NIGGAS GET LOST

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

Other than his claims of superhuman rapping capabilities, h


This alone is extremely overpowered!
2x Laugh Laugh
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by hagroden
Raw
Avatar of hagroden

hagroden Atomic Angel

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lord Wraith
Raw
GM
Avatar of Lord Wraith

Lord Wraith Actually Three Otters in a Trenchcoat

Member Online

@hagroden I'm going to say you can go ahead with your character. Throw him up in the character tab and post in the IC as soon as you can.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by hagroden
Raw
Avatar of hagroden

hagroden Atomic Angel

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

I'll hop in the IC as soon as I'm on my computer
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Optio
Raw
Avatar of Optio

Optio Calamity Incarnate

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

I'm positing tomorrow just to let y'all know :D
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by hagroden
Raw
Avatar of hagroden

hagroden Atomic Angel

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

is this dead so soon?
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by WanderBug
Raw
Avatar of WanderBug

WanderBug

Member Seen 5 mos ago

still here, posting later today
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Enarr
Raw
Avatar of Enarr

Enarr

Member Seen 2 days ago

I doubt it's dead. May be though. Either way, I'm out. Ciao.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Mixtape Ghost N
Raw
Avatar of Mixtape Ghost N

Mixtape Ghost N SOMETIMES EVЕN RICH NIGGAS GET LOST

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

I doubt it's dead. May be though. Either way, I'm out. Ciao.


See ya' later, fucker!
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Tyler
Raw
Avatar of Tyler

Tyler Me. I Am Tyler... / The Elusive Auteur

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

Still here and happy to take it as slow as needed. Though, a time-skip to the party itself might breathe a bit of life into it. I think perhaps the main reason people aren't posting is that they feel they have nothing to post.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Hillan
Raw
Avatar of Hillan

Hillan I'm a writer - Lying's what we do.

Member Seen 19 hrs ago

I guarantee that this isn't dead.

I've had personal issues that have stopped me from posting, and I'm going on a holiday tomorrow that's going to last till next monday, so I won't be able to post until then.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Optio
Raw
Avatar of Optio

Optio Calamity Incarnate

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Ain't dead just slow.
↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet