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If it's alright with you, I would like any characters added to the RP to go through me, that way I can put them in the Character Tab. I've already added Matthias. Just the same, will you also come up with a Birthplace, Weapons, and Personality for him? Thank you!
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Also, if we every want to add another characters like other Detectives or other criminals, we can use this CS.

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@Invader Len

.... you did not just do that right? You did not just take control of my character and USE her. No way you just did that. You did not just Godmod my character, RIGHT? -_-
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I'm sorry, I thought she was going down to the basement anyways? I didn't know this would upset you so much. You didn't exactly give me a chance to respond in any way with Matthias, you ended the Museum scene immediately. If you would like, I can delete that part of my post? I understand I might have stepped over the line a little bit, but I thought she would be reaching the basement anyways, so it wouldn't matter when Matthias spoke.
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Godmodding, not okay, even if you think you know what the person was going to do. Please delete it. I was actually, going based off the first part of the post, have Ghostess back off and go out to call Matthias. Tara was watching from the roof. She would've seen Matthias walk out if he had did. She would have thought about this before she entered.
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Alright, I will delete it. However, I don't exactly like that alternative. He never walked out of the building in my post, he verse even left the area around the basement stairwell. Whereas Tara left an investigation on a whim, disappeared, and by the time she comes back to the Museum everyone is gone. Matthias never came in his own car, he rode with the chief. It is completely implausible, how would she even have his phone number when they have just met, he's not even a police officer. It doesn't matter if Tara was watching from the roof, unless she has X-ray vision, she doesn't know where Matthias is. His parents and the police don't know where he is. I apologize for god modding, but please, don't yank around my characters and the scenarios like that. Even the whole one-sided exchange Tara had with him, which you gave me no chance to respond to without changing the scene entirely, was a little much, it was unprofessional, given her job, as is walking off and ignoring orders from a superior officer.

But for the subject at hand, I accept my fault and responsibility, but we are clearly going to work more at communication to make this work.

And on another note, can you perhaps tone down the evil empire of the government a bit? I can understand that you want some of them to be corrupt, but selling antiquities to pay off the debt to China? I doubt the money from the antiquities could even fund a states education budget, even if they were in the millions. I can see a low-ranking ambassador or cabinet member doing it for their own gain, but even public service members are people.

That's all. I'll go and delete the segment of that post now. But I won't be able to write anything in its place until we can come to a route that doesn't ruffle either of us.
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@Invader LenMaybe we shouldn't even do this if we don't get along. And just for reference, I had Tara play it as if they had worked together before, that's how she knew his name when it came up in conversation. Just the same, everyone knows his obsession with Ghostess, so if Ramirez walked out alone, that would most likely raise suspicion with her.

As with the phone business, it would be easy for Tara to call the precinct and have them route her to his phone if she lied about it being an emergency, since you claim that he has worked with the precinct for as long as he has. Someone at the precinct would have his phone on file somewhere, so it would be easy to route it.

Just as well, Melissa is not a superior officer, she was just delivering news. The chief, according to you, had left at that moment, and Tara honestly didn't care about Matthias after the chief left, so that is why I made it so one-sided. She doesn't like people getting on her cases. And if we can't do LOGICAL ideas that could possible happen and we had to do everything according to what YOU say though I am the one that had the detective and the thief interest check to begin with, then, as of now, I will no longer be RPing with you. Just as well, too. School starts on Tuesday for me and I will not be on as frequently as I will like. You can continue this RP, but it will be with someone else beside me.

That's all. Thanks for your time. You are an amazing writer and I hope you do well, but we're too different when it comes to writing.
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