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Temperate, leaning towards dry. Outside of the city is wilderness, some woods extending up into hills with a mountain range in the distance. There's a river coming down from the mountains that veers off before actually hitting the Outer Ring of the city.
The wilderness is dotted with small settlements, mostly just a few homes in number, the biggest settlements are the farms. The only people who live outside of the city(for the most part) are farmers, miners, lumberjacks, things like that.

Everden is isolated, There's no contact with other nations or civilizations(Which is to say, the RP will not deal with anything beyond the Outer Ring).
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Duncan Allistair sat on a reclined couch in a workshop littered with metal scraps and tools. The exacting neatness of his clothes was at odds with the disorder that surrounded him, and he distracted himself from it with a hand written, leather bound book he read. A research report from his eldest daughter. It held nothing new or interesting to him. He wore one of his more subdued outfits, powder blue waistcoat and trousers, a yellow cravat. His pale yellow jacket was folded neatly and draped over the back of the couch. He had eschewed a wig for the day, and his shining silver head was bare.

The workshop was a single roomed building that sat not on a foundation, but floating surprisingly still in the middle of the Inner Circle. It hovered as a bridge between the entire tower owned by the Allistair family, and the penthouse suite that Gideon Lockheed rented. The Artificer in question had shared a partnership with Duncan for many years, and this floating arrangement was borne out of convenience for the both of them. It was owned and kept exclusively by Gideon, much to the chagrin of the neater-minded Magus.

Duncan did not put his book down when the door to Gideon's apartment opened, and maintained his attitude of disinterest even as a large lump of clay - A bust, he knew, of Queen Isabella - was hurled through the air and soared past his head.

"She did not like it?" Duncan asked, apparently uncaring. His voice was almost human, but had a slight tinny vibration that belied the fact that it was produced by a set of metal vocal chords.

"A damned insult to my craft!" Gideon was already raging, as if he had skipped to the middle of his rant to save time. He was moving swiftly to where the clay bust had landed to pick it up viciously, untying his uncharacteristically neat hair from its bun as he walked. He slapped the now mostly mishapen lump of clay onto a nearby table and glared at it as if it, and not the woman it represented, had been the one to insult him.

Gideon, as it transpired, had been contracted to create a new face for the Queen, who had long since been completely Technomantic. Her old one was made out of interlocking metal plates. A work of pure genius, but outdated in comparison to the one that Duncan himself sported, which was made out of a single, solid piece of silver that had been enchanted to be malleable as flesh.

"What she says to my face is only half of it, you know," Gideon was quieter now, but still obviously angry. His voice was just as artificial as Duncan's, but it was harder to tell.

"I expect she's telling everyone who will hear that she's waiting on a new face," Duncan said, "But the Artificer she's hired is taking too long."

"I'm sure of it," Gideon was half-heartedly trying to reform the Queen's bust on his table. "This one was accurate to the molecule. I checked. She asks for perfection and I give it."

Duncan turned the page in the journal, still not looking at Gideon. "You gave what she asked for," he said dryly, "But not what she wanted."

Gideon slammed his scalpel down after making a particularly vicious swipe on the bust. "What?"

Finally he put the book down and stood up. He was tall and thin, almost surreal looking. "You don't know people very well. People are vain. Even when they say they aren't. Me, I'm honest about it. I told you I wanted to be better looking. She won't say that, but it's what she expects. Because you did it for me. Accentuate her best features... downplay the bad." He looked over the now thoroughly mangled bust. "And maybe give her some good eyes. I've been meaning to have you make me a new set..."
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It was a street in the odd zone between the Inner Circle and Outer Ring. The sort of place where different people had different ideas over which it belonged to. The poorer who lived there liked to say it was the Inner Circle, to feel like they lived among the affluent. The moderately wealthy admitted that it was the Outer Ring, but didn't talk about it much, as they aspired to move to nicer places further in.

It was normally a fairly active community, with Magi, Artificers, and the Ignorant all common sights. This borderlands district was one of the few places where there was at least some semblance of social equality. It was where most business between the higher and lower castes was done, and basic politeness made the Ignorant here feel like they might have a window into higher society.

This morning, however, this particular street was nearly abandoned. For one thing, it was fairly early. The sun was barely rising, and not even visible in some places thanks to the towering buildings. For another thing, there was blood running down the gutters and into the storm drains.

((WIP, ran out of time. I'm working on the written intro right now. I'm hoping, for one thing, it will give you guys more of a feel for the city of Everden. For another, there's some more of those plot threads sitting around. This post(when it's done) will be the intro to the first plot.))
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Are we making a new thread for this or are you going to post a lot of the stuff on this one?
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I'm going to make a proper thread, I was kind of waiting on a few more characters to trickle in, though.

In the mean time, I am writing more and more.
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I think when the actual thread is up, you'll get more character sheets submitted.
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Definitely interested! Gonna start my character... will have to think a bit since this universe is very interesting.
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Interested! need to think up a character now.

I'm guessing it's implied that consciousnesses transferred into Automata via palladium may be altered or modified. Can an automaton whose consciousness comes from a donor be made to believe that they never had a human body to begin with, that they are an AI even though they're not? Just curious because having a subservient AI might be desirable were it not for the difficulty of making one, so using an existing consciousness as a template might be more feasible. I might make a character like this if it is allowed.
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Yes, that is certainly doable.

You could also take the consciousness of an animal and move it to an automaton, altering it for the better.
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http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/85279-technomancy-magic-and-metal/ooc

Alright, here's an OOC.

Post CSes in the OOC for approval, do not post them in the Character tab until I have said you may.
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A bump for anyone who didn't see.
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