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@Eviledd1984
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If I might offer some advice. If you're looking for an Amazon-type girl, I'd recommend an Oni/Ogre or a Minotaur.
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Mhm i am thinking of either a imp or fairy character,Hellhound,Mummy,Ghoul,Dooplganger character.
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@Eviledd1984 Dullahans are pretty cool, but they may be overpowered for this RP.

And a little off-topic, but last night I was having trouble sleeping, and my mind was wandering, as it does when I'm tired and can't sleep. It was then that I thought, "It would be awesome if there was a Five Nights at Freddy's fangame based off Daily Life with Monster Girls!"

I can see it now! Miia is Freddy, Suu and Papi are Bonne and Chica, respectively... Racnerea could be Mangle, Lala would be Balloon Boy... I haven't come up with roles for the other characters, but I feel like I put more thought into this than I should have.
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@SublimationHmmm... tweak the passive radius of her toxin so that it only affects people who are either breathing the same air as her or are stuck in a small, enclosed space with her and you should be good to go. Since she's not as good at shapeshifting as a normal slime, she can occupy an offense role due to something like cephalopodan "liquid muscle" (or so I'd imagine).

If I may make a suggestion, since this appears to be an expansion on or a subspecies of the shoggoth from Monster Girl Encyclopedia, why not just refer to her as such? xD
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@Karl Kadaver Then could i make a Mummy girl then?
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@Karl Kadaver Then could i make a Mummy girl then?


Sure. That'd be pretty cool, actually. Just remember to stick to canon: danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2106124?tags=..
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@Turboshitter Of course give me a moment to post my character.
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@Turboshitter Of course give me a moment to post my character.


... 7 hours isn't a moment, mate xD
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@Turboshitter Sorry just edited my character sheet to my new character.
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@Eviledd1984Okay, so... I wasn't gonna say anything the last time, but honestly, I think now I need to start being brutally honest here. This is nowhere near the level of effort I expect from people in this RP. This is casual yes, but it's high-casual, and even casual RPs demand a certain proficiency regarding spelling and grammar that you have not been demonstrating to me so far. On top of that, the character sheet is about as bare-bones as it can possibly be, and it doesn't tell me much about the character, what little of her there is. You didn't even bother to change your character's name from the first draft, which reflects a sort of hollow pick and mix of mish-mash parts that just tells me this character has no real identity of her own. She's just a template. A name and a vaguely defined set of characteristics to be tweaked and filled in with whatever contents are most appropriate, and that's not the kind of character I want in my RP. I also get the feeling I should be vaguely offended by the "high-functioning autistic" bit, but I'm just going to ignore that because I don't wanna be that PC guy no one likes.

Also, this is nitpicky and beyond petty, but imma indulge it anyway. That picture is arse. Was there really no better zombie girl pics you could magic up from the ether? The picture is about as low-effort as your profile frankly, and I get the distinct impression it came from either deviantart, Gaia Online, or Adventure Quest. None of those are good things.

Basically, if you want your character to be accepted, you're going to have to do a lot better. Show me you're willing to put the time and effort into being mindful of proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation, and into making a fully-fleshed out character with a heart and soul to it that isn't just vacuous and empty like this one (ironic considering she's a zombie, but I hope you see my point).
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@TurboshitterOf course give me a moment or when i have time to change her sheet.

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I swing into this site periodically to see if anything interesting shows up and...well, you had me sold at MON. It's gonna be tough signing up for this since I always lean toward certain personality types and undead things whenever possible, and put them together and I'd end up RPing almost literally Zombina (best girl), but I'll sit down long and hard and think about what other angles I could work from on this.

tl/dr: Consider me interested; I'll get to work on a CS a bit later.
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I swing into this site periodically to see if anything interesting shows up and...well, you had me sold at MON. It's gonna be tough signing up for this since I always lean toward certain personality types and undead things whenever possible, and put them together and I'd end up RPing almost literally Zombina (best girl), but I'll sit down long and hard and think about what other angles I could work from on this.

tl/dr: Consider me interested; I'll get to work on a CS a bit later.


>Zombina best girl

A man after my own heart. Welcome to the RP. You could play as a mummy maybe? xD
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>Zombina best girl

A man after my own heart. Welcome to the RP. You could play as a mummy maybe? xD

>agrees Zombina is best girl
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I forsee a beautiful friendship, good sir. I figured out that I'd go for a dullahan who's good at infiltration and shit; she's actually getting close to done at this point.
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@JustYuiIf If I'm not mistaken, we have infiltration covered. She might be better for shock trooper like Zombina.

The setup as I see it so far:

-Charlie (Sniper)
-Kirino (Infiltrator)
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-Your gal (Assault/Shock trooper)
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I think this should about do it for our shock trooper.
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I think this should about do it for our shock trooper.


Oh man, Noreen is great. Please tell me she brings her scythe (fake or otherwise) around into battle to scare the shit out of her enemies and "just because it looks cool". Anyway, unless I see something weird looking at her sheet the second time around, she's accepted. Post her in the character section!

Also, does she have a last name? If not, may I suggest "Noreen O'Mally'O'Connel'O'Carrol'O'Reilly'O'Brian'O'Sullivan (who is also Italian)"? xD
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Also, does she have a last name? If not, may I suggest "Noreen O'Mally'O'Connel'O'Carrol'O'Reilly'O'Brian'O'Sullivan (who is also Italian)"? xD



I'll post Noreen O'Mally'O'Connel'O'Carrol'O'Reilly'O'Brian'O'Sullivan (who is also Italian) (working name) in the characters section, and edit in a thing about the scythe because A: I hadn't thought of that, and B: she needs a big melee weapon.
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Okay, at the suggestion of JY, how many of us here have access to skype? A skype group would help keep everyone in contact with one another in case someone needs to be reminded to post, and it's a great place to just discuss RP relevant stuff in general.

Also, the first IC post is nearly done. As promised, I'll have it up tomorrow, now that the team is alive and kicking!
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