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Hehehe I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, Viva and the doc have potential to be really good friends in the future... but these are early days and trying times. HEHEE

I thought Viva's cold anger here was a nice contrast to the rage-y shouty russian swearing of earlier. Before, that was a hi-stress hi-activitity emergancy situation. It was also her (and the rest of them) against an enemy stranger.

THIS TIME however, it was during the cool down from that. And what Viva would consider a personal betrayal. That sent her from raging hot- to raging cold. And personally i find the cold all the scarier. :D

But yeah, give her some time to cool down (or warm up in this case) and she'll be on friendly terms with the Doc again. Noah though? Not so much. LOL
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Hey Hen, I wonder should I start Loire and Noah's "romance" now -Im doing a slight time skip now as well- I wonder how we will develop Viva and Loire's friendship too and build towards her escape ... we still have somet ime though so theres no rush
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Hmmm well its still early days, so the romance could still be fourishing- or it could be one of those (suddenly they're banging in the storagecloset and howd they get there?) Dive right in romances.

Either way that's your call as they are your characters, but I'm game for it! And yeah, Viva's got the good doctor in her good book so their friendship will have progressed as par for the course.

As a funny anicdote, you could have Loire mention that it took like until the next day before Viva asked for his name... i still don't think she's gotten his yet. LOL
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Hmmm well its still early days, so the romance could still be fourishing- or it could be one of those (suddenly they're banging in the storagecloset and howd they get there?) Dive right in romances.


Given Noah's unpredictable and risky nature, I think it would be sudden as opposed to flourishing. They are attracted to eachother (at least Loire is attracted to Noah, Noah is /probably/ just taking advantage) its not a "feelings" thing, its more chemistry/physical. -TO THE STORAGE CLOSET ... AWAAAAAAAAY!!!!-

As a funny anicdote, you could have Loire mention that it took like until the next day before Viva asked for his name... i still don't think she's gotten his yet. LOL


Hahah yeah I'll do that!!!
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Would you mind Viva going out onto the station during refuelling on her own? I'm gonna have a LoireXNoah moment while shes on-shore so to speak and she can catch them later on (whenever you like, I'd like them to have a moment totally alone first though xP)

Also, you can wake Val up any time you like :)

Also also, I'm leaving my post sort of open-ended, so Viva can go straight to refuel, or she can chill with Loire for a bit first if you'd like.

Its super duper late so sorry its a bit incoherent, I'll edit if you like just yknow, yell at me wherever I fucked up x'D
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Your post looks great to me. Poor Loire, Viva didn't mean to give him the cold shoulder for so long, she was just so angery at Noah he just caught the backlash of that.

If Viva's gonna pop out for refueling, do we want her to get attacked by some crimminal underlines? Maybe not the guys that are chasing them but just some lowlifes that have heard through the grapevine that a ship of their class is carying a treasure trove of Nth?

If thats the case, then it shouldn't be anyting more than she can handle, cause she's on her own and we dont need to do another Kidnapping LOL. Just a lil something to show just how deep in the shit Noah's got them.

And then maybe Valko can wake up? I'll need to refresh his character in my mind too, its been so long LOL just a re-read should do for that. He barely got to be himself before he keeled over hahaha. Do we want a groggy awakening, or do we want to find him rummaging through the fridge? LOL
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Hahaha its up to you how Val awakes. If he wakes up while the doc is there he could do the groggy routine, but if he wakes up when Noah and Loire are fucking they can just find him later like "Whoa we have chocolate?!" (lol jk he doesnt have that much, Viva ate what remains of his stash XP)

Maybe an addict could lash out at her when they see her leave the ship, if it was a dealer or smuggler/whateverer they'd probably be armed and in a gang, whereas if an addict got the jump on her she'd get significantly roughed up (since shes caught off guard) but it wouldn't be anything she couldn't handle herself!! its up to you though!!!!!!
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Hahaha fantastic!

okay i think i'm gonna go with the "rummaging through the kitchen" for Valko, cause groggy is just boriing and we want to dive right into his character after all this time. He'll still be a bit groggy, and dopey cause of the pain-meds, but having him up and attem will make Viva feel so much better and get the Doc all stressed out (stomache Wounds should HEAL before you start using them again idiot!)

And for Viva I think i'll go with a junkie like you said, but a ravaged junkie. Someone going through withdrawls. So they are vicious, desperate, and not as strong as they could have been with their wasted system. They'll get the jump on Viva but wont overpower her. Sound good?

Annnywho, I think i'm gonna hold off on doing that post for a bit so YOUUUUU can get some sleep you crazy potato you. I'm gonna go veg my brain out with some fun youtube videos in the meantime ;P
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Haha fiiiiiiiine I'll go to bed, also I agree 50000%

and just a heads up regarding and shipping stuff, its all fade to black, I know thats the rules of the site and all that but I want to just make it 5000% clear incase anyones lurking in this thread.

No duuurty stuff will be posted, this isn't tha tkind of RP, I'm not that kind of player Im a good potato!

Hehhe crazy potato x'D I lol'd
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Super long post is super long! But hey! Post!

Also lovely thankyous for the lovely mention. You are too sweet potato ;P <3

In other news, i have a new keyboard for my tablet. Its super fancy and nice, and has all kinds of quick key buttons that do nifty functions really fast... except for the fact that i hit all those buttons on accident! Its got me yo-yo-ing back and forth and will even CLOSE ME OUT of my tablet screen (some kind of quick lock button. But it is RIGHT next to the tiny backspace button!!!). So that is a work in progress. New things. Gotta get used to the new things. >8[
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Hey we all gotta start somewhere right! I got gel nails for my grad (everyones looking at the scroll I have to hold in photos so the nails gotta be en pointe amirite!) anyhow, I usually keep my nails trimmed so I can play bass and shit without them breaking but I got fancy long ones and they are a bitch to type with (super pretty though but goshdarnit they are impractical) I'm getting used to them though but when Im on my phone its a total mess.

GOOD LUCK WITH THE NEW KEYBOARD, just keep practicing!! Like these nails, you'll get used to it and get a bit better at it!
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Hehee i have done the long nail thing too, that's always super fun. I once knew a lady who typed with just the tips of her nails, they were so long her fingers couldn't touch the keys! It was amazing.

And YAY PoST! But AWWWW you did a timeskip!

I had been kinda hoping that Noah was lurking in there with the doc, that way he and viva could be all snarky with eachother while still showing how she'd warmed up to the doc. Annnnnd i could have gotten to see some of the preliminary flirting before they got wisked away to the metaphorical broomcloset LOL (all the while Viva's being unsuccessfully mugged LOLx2)

But this way is good too, that way we can just dive into the action again. Viva'll come in all roughed up, catch the two guys with their 'pants down' lol and run into a groggy Valko rummaging through the kitchen!

Ohhhh and did you mention a while back that you wanted your stowaway to sneek into the Lucidae with them? Cause i think that would be fun. Really add to the chaos of the situation (and then maybe Val and Viva would have somebody to flirt with maybe? Hahahaa, Noah'd be pisssssed i bet!)
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OKAY! I'M ALIVE! Thanks for putting up with my purpetual coming and going spuddy! I'll be working on that post now Post HASTE!

Edit: okay yeah posting isnt go tonight. But tomorrow i hve the entire day free! You are first on my list my frenchiest fry! POSTS TOMORROW!!!
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AND POST! AT LAST! Hope you like it @Spud!
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AND POST! AT LAST! Hope you like it @Spud!


I really liked it, hope you liked my post. Shit's getting real lol x'D
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And Posted! Woo Val is a bit of an energetic when he's all doped up, drunk off his add on morphine and all LOL. He's kinda stolen the limelight here, cause well, he hasnt had his time to shine yet and he did just wake up- gotta fill the space with the force of his personality. His very giddy personality right now. Lol

Gotta annoy his sister right off the bat. Hehee! He caught right on to the fact that this new guy just got back from a roll in the hay, but he's pegged the wrong culprit! Wonder how Liore will react to this (not quite totally) off the wall accusation!

And poor Noah, captian gets ignored again. Val's gotta get settled first, and then she'll let him know ALL of what happened. She's still pissed at him so she'll love the opportunity to tear him a new one as well as inform him of the bad news at the same time. I wonder if she'll give Val some time to sober up before the interrogation starts, or if she'll jump while he's still dopy and off balance.

Oh and, since viva let the would be mugger get away... what do you say he comes back with some friends maybe? if a junky can find them on this rock then somebody with more than two braincells is bound to be out there ready to cause trouble for our intrepidly illigal crew.
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Can't type for shit on my phone but a reply will come your way tomorrow hopefully

Also a proper ooc respose too coz I love our chats
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And Posted! Woo Val is a bit of an energetic when he's all doped up, drunk off his add on morphine and all LOL. He's kinda stolen the limelight here, cause well, he hasnt had his time to shine yet and he did just wake up- gotta fill the space with the force of his personality. His very giddy personality right now. Lol

Gotta annoy his sister right off the bat. Hehee! He caught right on to the fact that this new guy just got back from a roll in the hay, but he's pegged the wrong culprit! Wonder how Liore will react to this (not quite totally) off the wall accusation!

And poor Noah, captian gets ignored again. Val's gotta get settled first, and then she'll let him know ALL of what happened. She's still pissed at him so she'll love the opportunity to tear him a new one as well as inform him of the bad news at the same time. I wonder if she'll give Val some time to sober up before the interrogation starts, or if she'll jump while he's still dopy and off balance.

Oh and, since viva let the would be mugger get away... what do you say he comes back with some friends maybe? if a junky can find them on this rock then somebody with more than two braincells is bound to be out there ready to cause trouble for our intrepidly illigal crew.


Vals entrance was perfect, a great intro to his character FINALLY bout time that lazy arse woke up! hahaha

Hah, Loire is caught off guard but given how shy and reserved he is, it's likely any accusation would make him look guilty as fuck no matter how wild it is. Val's probablymore likely to catch on with whats going on between Loire and Noah, I think Viva probably thinks Loire is too gentle and innocent (and possibly even virginal since he just appears to be the dorky, reserved, keeps to himself type doctor) to have sex, much less with bad-boy Noah. It's a fatal attraction on Loire's part.

MAAAAN I want Viva to quiz Noah about why no one was there when Valko woke up and how the doctor wasn't there when Noah decided to up Val's dose!!!! I played it out in my head (but it will probs play out differently with you at the helm writing the post ;P)

Viva: How come no one was there when Val woke up? How come the doctor just let you drug him up like that? Answer me Noah!
Noah: Doc had a migraine, pretty bad one, he's prone to them apparently, I didn't know, I told him to go sleep it off and I'd keep an eye on Val.
Viva: Oh and you did a good job at that. Bravo Noah, bravo.
Noah: It's not my fault your idiot brother decided to rise back from the dead the second I needed to go take a leak, goddamn. He's not dead Vee, he's gonna be fine, calm the fuck down.

When really if Noah told the truth it would go like.

Viva: How come no one was there when Val woke up? How come the doctor just let you drug him up like that? Answer me Noah!
Noah: I was fucking the doctor.
Viva: (I honestly can't write a response because I don't know what she'd do haha!!!)

I can't wait for Vee to interrogate Val ... might get Loire to answer Noah's cliffhanger question while the twins are occupied with arguing!!!

Oh and, since viva let the would be mugger get away... what do you say he comes back with some friends maybe? if a junky can find them on this rock then somebody with more than two braincells is bound to be out there ready to cause trouble for our intrepidly illigal crew.


Hmm, perhaps, maybe they could threaten the doctor, which would force Viva to feel more protective of him, and then at the same time it would also drive Loire closer to Noah as well (I can see Noah pouring on the "I was so scared I'd lose you, even though we just met a few weeks ago, I feel like we have this connection" shit and Loire falling for it).

Then they can blast off the port and kick out the intruders and hopefully get away for a bit (until they are hailed for inspection before they can FINALLY make their drop off). In between all that, Val recovers, Vee and Val get that call from home, and Viva and Noah lock horns and she finds out about the secret affair between Noah and Loire (then we can work towards escapes!!!)

WOW WE HAVE A JAM PACKED PLOT COMING UP!!!! We haven't even seen the SIRIUS and yet this rp is bursting at the seams with action!

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Mwahahahaa!

No interrogations just yet, well not the one you expected.

The way I'm thinking we need two new villians on our case.

We Deff need the lil gang/druglord of SpacePort 241. They can bardge in and threaten the doc and the cargo. Noah and Viva will have to work together to keep things from devolving into another firefight which would be really hard to do cause she is TOTALLY for having somebody just take this all off their hands if nobody gets hurt. And maybe Valko can unexpectedly save the day while being still totally blitzed out of his mind! LOL And Noah still gets his manipulative twist to things.

But we ALSO need whoever it is that Noah pissed off to the point that they'd not be shy about saying Hey There is a fortune of Nth being transported in a ship of this class wouldn't it be a shame if somebody took it. I'm thinking that the job Noah got them wasn't actually theirs. Like this is a third party drug lord that's stepped in on some other Druglords toes and has had them SNIPE this cargo from somebody else. Seems like something he'd be up for that would get them in a whole mess of trouble.

So thats at least two new characters ish i think. Maybe three if we want to include whomever our Contract is with, the dude we are dropping all this hell-drug off at Paradiso. Oooh maybe we can have some kind of standoff big fight there where the people chasing them, our crew, and the drop off folks all meet up on Paradiso?

And we still need to have the Inspection, and the PhoneHome, Loire and Noah get discovered Banging, And Viva plans a mutinany/escape. MWAHAHAHAA this thing just gets better and better the more we write it!
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Mwahahahaa!


It was worth the wait tbh.

We Deff need the lil gang/druglord of SpacePort 241. They can bardge in and threaten the doc and the cargo. Noah and Viva will have to work together to keep things from devolving into another firefight which would be really hard to do cause she is TOTALLY for having somebody just take this all off their hands if nobody gets hurt. And maybe Valko can unexpectedly save the day while being still totally blitzed out of his mind! LOL And Noah still gets his manipulative twist to things.


This is like!!!

I can picture one villain having an eye-patch, can he have an eye patch?

Also, hero Valko, baked off his tits on morphine. I like this also!.

But we ALSO need whoever it is that Noah pissed off to the point that they'd not be shy about saying Hey There is a fortune of Nth being transported in a ship of this class wouldn't it be a shame if somebody took it. I'm thinking that the job Noah got them wasn't actually theirs. Like this is a third party drug lord that's stepped in on some other Druglords toes and has had them SNIPE this cargo from somebody else. Seems like something he'd be up for that would get them in a whole mess of trouble.

So thats at least two new characters ish i think. Maybe three if we want to include whomever our Contract is with, the dude we are dropping all this hell-drug off at Paradiso. Oooh maybe we can have some kind of standoff big fight there where the people chasing them, our crew, and the drop off folks all meet up on Paradiso?


Yeah, totally, eyepatch guy, dude needs an eyepatch!!! He can have some lackeys on the space port but we can run into Patches himself on Paradiso at the drop off!

And we still need to have the Inspection, and the PhoneHome, Loire and Noah get discovered Banging, And Viva plans a mutinany/escape. MWAHAHAHAA this thing just gets better and better the more we write it!


Yes. Much excitement on the way because theres never a dull day on the Lucidae.

Loire and Noah get discovered Banging


Maybe by Valko but not Viva ;P Noah will tell her when he thinks it will hurt her most and keep her in her place, whether she believes him or not is another thing, but of course if she asks the doctor afterwards, he'll have no choice but to confirm that Noah's actually telling the truth for once!!!
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