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You're both more than welcome to put up competing apps with your own takes on the character.


Err, what he said.
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Rade said
You're both more than welcome to put up competing apps with your own takes on the character.


But ya see that's what has me now confused, I'm not going after the Hulk per say but rather rewriting it so an incarnation of the She-Hulk comes BEFORE the Hulk. The Hulk is still technically up for grabs.
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I can't speak for Ersatz on that matter as I'm just a lowly player. However, I don't imagine that would be too much of a problem if you and Matt were to collaborate.
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Yeh, try and talk something out.
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I put up the CS for Hulk in my OP, i haven't put up the sample post yet, but how is it looking so far?
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I'll have a look.
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Yeh, try and talk something out.
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Damned forum^

Please ignore the excess 'try and talk something out's.
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Yeh, try and talk something out.
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ErsatzEmperor said
Yeh, try and talk something out.


ErsatzEmperor said
Yeh, try and talk something out.


ErsatzEmperor said
Yeh, try and talk something out.


Well if you insist......
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mattmanganon said



I don't want to be funny or anything but you've clearly copied a chunk of this from this wiki page...
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TRY AND TALK SOMETHING OUT DAMMIT!

Anyways like I said before, this is the profile I'll submit if Spider-Man DOES NOT GET ACCEPTED. Repeat if my Spider-Man profile from earlier doesn't get the go ahead, I'm submitting this in its place.

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Well this is awkward....I actually started writing up a CS redo on the Hulk that shifts him from a Primary to a (possibly) Secondary character.Basically, I'm planning a "What If...?" set-up where instead of Banner becoming the Hulk, Betty becomes the She-Hulk through the same gamma incident as Bruce. Assuming that's an OK move in this Universes context?


Well... Why don't we do both? How about your She-Hulk comes from an alternate dimension? It happened in the comics... Only that She-Hulk was a slut that shagged anything that could move a mountain, Such as Hercules and Juggernaut. Actually, that would work perfectly with my Hulk. You see, i was planning on him starting out with a Gray Hulk that is completely uncontrollable, but at the end of his first arc, he creates a formula that will mellow the Hulk out and allow him partial control, which is when he becomes green. Perhaps he could get cornered and almost captured, before Shulk jumps in and saves his ass. Then, he uses some of her blood to try and devise the patch for the Hulk Formula? They are found just as he injects himself and turns green...

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I don't want to be funny or anything but you've clearly copied a chunk of this from ...


It was essentially what i was going to put anyway. It just saved me the trouble of writing out the exact same information, only worded slightly differently. I didn't know that copying from the wiki wasn't allowed, you didn't put it in the rules.
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Not just copied, but word for word plagiarism. o.O

Matt, not to be a dick, but it's common sense and writing 101 that you never take someone else's writing and copy it word for word, passing it off as your own.
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mattmanganon said It was essentially what i was going to put anyway. It just saved me the trouble of writing out the exact same information. I didn't know that copying from the wiki wasn't allowed, you didn't put it in the rules.


I'm sorry that I wasn't clear about that earlier. I'm going to amend it however.
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I'm sorry that I wasn't clear about that earlier. I'm going to amend it however.


Ok, also, i did the same with Spider-Woman, since you didn't call me on that, i assumed it was all good, because... Well, i don't see why it matters, it's not like we're going to sell this stuff.

But, you're the boss, i'll edit it now.
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Ok, also, i did the same with Spider-Woman, since you didn't call me on that, i assumed it was all good, because... Well, i don't see why it matters, it's not like we're going to sell this stuff.But, you're the boss, i'll edit it now.


Profit or non-profit, that wasn't your work to copy. It's the same as wikipedia-ing an article and publishing it as a school book report. You are actively claiming another person's hard work as your own with minimum effort.

If you can get those CSes straightened out to a good standard you'll still have a potential place here.
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Profit or non-profit, that wasn't your work to copy. It's the same as wikipedia-ing an article and publishing it as a school book report. You are actively claiming another person's hard work as your own with minimum effort.If you can get those CSes straightened out to a good standard you'll still have a potential place here.


Done. I changed it, re-wrote it, but... a lot of it is the same, because, well, there is only one way to say stuff like "He earned his doctorate in nuclear physics at the California Institute of Technology."
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I'll have another look.
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Player Name: NightRadier (2nd application)

Character: She-Hulk

Aliases/Nicknames: Elizabeth “Betty” Ross

Alignment: Walking the Line

Affiliations/Known Associates: S.H.I.E.L.D., Bruce Banner.

Character Origin:

Betty is the only daughter of Thaddeus “Thunderbolt” Ross and her mother Sharon Ross. While Sharon encouraged Betty’s inquisitiveness and curiosity as child, Thaddeus sought to quell these traits and shape her as one would a soldier. This led to Betty becoming resentful and rebellious against her father as she reached her teens. One night, while out looking for her wayward daughter, Sharon was blindsided by another driver and killed. The death of her mother crippled her emotionally and Thaddeus dealt with the loss of his wife by tightening his grip on his daughter.

Betty graduated from New York University with a BScs and PhD in Science, particularly in atomic and radiation sciences, where upon she began looking for work to try and escape her father once and for all. After some contract work with S.H.I.E.L.D. to garner experience, she was contacted by one Stephen Lang through her father, who required a specialist consultant in gamma radiation for some governmental testing experiments. Betty accepted the job, not knowing that Stephen Lang was a part of the Purifiers, the anti-mutant terrorist organisation and was intending to use gamma radiation to “cure” mutants involuntarily. When she began working for Lang, she met an outspoken, confident fellow consultant, who after a time, she began to fall for, as did he for her.

On the eve of the 1st test of the gamma screener, Lang revealed his intentions with the inclusion of a restrained Epsilon level mutant teenager in the test chamber. Upon learning of this and the fact that the teenager may not even survive the test, Betty immediately tried to end the experiment but the sequence was locked. In a desperate attempt, she tried to free the mutant inside the chamber. She was successful but was knocked to the ground by the mutant as he escaped. As the gamma screener fired and she faced her death, she thought about how Lang could have done this, how she hadn’t asked her companion out on a date, how her father had helped put her in this situation and how she felt about herself at all this, how angry she was……

Betty realised that if this was Heaven, then it was cold, wet and felt very much like grass. She had awoken in a field, with no idea where she was, how she had gotten there and was naked aside from her favourite purple yoga pants. She made her way to the nearest town, “borrowing” a shirt on the way. While in a local diner, she learned from the T.V. news that a large, green skinned creature described as a “hulk”, had destroyed the Lang Labs and fled the scene. All attempts to reason had been met with solid rage and anger. Betty knew that it had been her, changed from her gamma exposure. She had to get away from the diner, the town, the area, from people…

Not much is known exactly in the interim year that Betty disappeared. She has travelled the world, looking to control the “She-Hulk” inside her and hopefully, find a cure. She has learned that anger induces the transformation and that it is possibly a result of supressed anger from her mother’s death and her father’s suffocating control that she never dealt with. She has also learned that, due to her other “incidents” across the world, a group known as the HulkBusters has been set up and is, unbeknownst to her, headed by her estranged father, Thunderbolt, who does not know the creature is actually his daughter (due to the other consultant being knocked unconscious during the commotion in Lang Labs and Lang claiming she perished and that the creature is a mutant menace) and blames it for his daughter’s death. Betty has since returned to the States in a desperate bid to contact the one man who may be able to help her, her fellow consultant……one Dr. Robert Bruce Banner.

Powers and Abilities:
As She-Hulk:

1. Superhuman Strength: According to reports from the Hulkbusters, the She-Hulk has been capable of astronomical feats of power and strength. One operative in a debriefing is quoted in saying “…the angrier She got, the stronger She got!” So far, no official limit on her strength has been assigned, not after the New Mexico incident.
2. Regeneration and Durability: Her endurance and healing has also been significantly increased, with injuries Betty receives being healed as she changes. She can also take a large about of punishment, being hit with rockets, mortars and even an orbital Arc weapon and she has still kept coming
3. Below Average Intelligence: Like an unleashed caged animal, the initial transformation into the She-Hulk was one of uncontrolled rage and anger for Betty. Since then, with subsequent transformations, She-Hulk has begun unconsciously tapping Betty’s knowledge for new skills including the ability to speak coherently and reason to some degree.
4. Other: Resist psychic control, radiation absorption.
As Betty Ross:

1. Military Knowledge: Despite her heart being in the pursuit of scientific knowledge, her father forced her to undergo military and strategic training before she attended college and as a result, this knowledge has benefited her from evading the Hulkbusters and, in some way, the She-Hulk in fighting them.

Weaknesses:

1. The Change: While Betty has tried to restrain her emotions and control them, they can still build in her until the She-Hulk bursts out and in these events, the She-Hulk is filled with uncontrollable rage and can attack anyone and anything in reach.
2. Mental state: Both the mental state of Betty and the She-Hulk are both fragile. The She-Hulk, when in “control” is paranoid of others, brutally aggressive and an isolationist. While one would think these are separate feelings from Betty, the truth is that they are the same and shared with Betty. She too is paranoid, but of herself and what she may do to others if she changes, she is aggressive in her goal to rid herself of the She-Hulk and she feels isolated because she wants to be, so she can’t hurt anyone else.
3. Gas Attack: She-Hulk can be temporarily subdued with intense attacks with chemical weapons such as anesthetic gases but can recover quickly if exposure is uninterrupted.

Equipment:
Stretch pants and tube top: Made of a very elastic material, Betty is conscious of her body while in She-Hulk form and as a result, has taken precautions to keep herself decent.

Why do I want to play this character?:
I think it would be interesting to see how similar events would turn out if a different character was exposed to them. In this case, the role reversal of Betty Ross and Bruce Banner seemed like a good story to mess about with. Also exploring the unique relationship between the Hulk and a different character to Banner has several interesting concepts when a different personality is in play. Finally (and not to sound sexist), the main point of the Hulk’s persona is based on emotion and changing the character to a woman will have an impact on their emotional state.

What do I plan on doing with the character:
I plan on having the She-Hulk experience similar situations as Banner did, but have them play out differently now that there is a different character. This, of course, will affect the rogue gallery. Perhaps the Leader is an old roommate friend of Bettys who was jealous of her looks a la Single White Female, learns she’s the She-Hulk and tries to become like her, turning her into the Leader (or something similar). She is also going to be the one of the powerhouses of the Universe, at least for the time being.

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