Melonhead vs. DjAtomika-
1-Characters:
Melonhead. You have a way of making the angst of your characters, the oppressive grittiness of their world come to life. There is a mortality with your characters that makes draws the reader into the characters world. Score: 3.9
DJ. Your characters are truly action characters. When I read one of your fights I can translate the character on to the big screen. There is a larger than life, pulp hero quality to them that I enjoy. Even the grittiness of your characters remind me of movies. 3.8
2-Introduction.
Melonhead. It was short but you did a lot to bring the character and the setting to life. 3.75
DJ. Nice. Short but like your opponent, you do pack a good bit in the intro post. I would like to see a little more, because I know both of you are capable of writing that way. 3.75
3-Action
Melonhead. You have come a long way from when you angrily entered the arena and spiuted your first rant. In all seriousness your writing has become a pleasure to watch evolve. You have a keen eye and you blend your actions/reactions with your opponents in a skillful way that slowly separates you from the average text fighter. 3.90
DJ. You have learned well. You can write good action and are getting better at seeing how your character can respond and react in a logical and meaningful way that allows you to write and compliment your opponent masterfully. 3.9
4-Attack/Conflict
Melonhead. You are a masterful tactician and while I see openings for you to attack your opponent, you don’t always take those moves, allowing the fight to become a wonderfully engaging read that allows strategies and tension to develop. 3.80
DJ. You have come a long ways from the first time I fought you. You still make a few mistakes but you are fundamentally sound and are a very good fighter. You are a tough out for anyone. 3.75
5-Defense/Resolution
Both of you are good defensively, both of you do make mistakes but not enough to separate you drastically. I think that if there is a weakness it probably is here, not enough to mark anyone better than the other. Both 3.75.
6. Creativity
WOW. This is probably the best part of both of your writing. You are both exceptionally imaginative writers. Both. 4.0
@Melonhead: 23.1/24.0
@DJAtomika: 22.95/24.0
Winner: Melonhead.
@Rilla Melon is the winner post the results please.
