@FortunesFaded

yay five characters lets get this started

@CandiBarr

I may make a second character then. Right now however I'm starting my first post so I am ready to go when the IC goes up. And my last group I ws told I "write too much" so I give you a preemptive sorry if my posts ever are too long. hahaha

Name: Andrey Leonidovich Moskvin (or just Andrey Moskvin)

Age: 53 years old

Occupation: Former Soviet lieutenant that experience fighting in Afghanistan and a high-rank member of the Russian Mafia (East Coast American branch)

Nationality: Russian

Appearance:



Place of Residence: Leningrad, Russian SFSR, USSR (formerly) | Philadelphia, USA

Strengths: Leadership, Hand-to-hand combat, stealth, speech, guns, full agility, communication, and a bookworm person (even if he doesn't look like a bookworm)

Weaknesses: Losing the one he love or the one he trust, semi-impatient, he is addicted to cigarette somehow, a bit stubborn person, hot-headed somehow (which is sometimes his weaknesses) and sometimes unassertive.

Belongings: A Makarov pistol (this is his personal pistol when he was a high-rank member in the Russian Mafia of East Coast US branch), 'Communist Manifesto' book, picture of his own family, and his momentos.

Personality: A good natured communist, Andrey is sometimes a hot-headed person but sometimes he isn't. He is well-behaved but domineering man who revealed a brilliant mind for studies such as leadership, how to create a nation, etc. but he shows anger when he gets provoke, he is independent and a hardworking person.

Other: None.

@Comrade Doge Nice CS! Everything's looking good, I'm just wondering if you could perhaps expand upon your character's strengths and weaknesses, and add another weakness or two? Since it looks like Andrey has 5 strengths and 2 weaknesses.

@FortunesFaded
Thank you.

Hmm, what's the maximum-minimum of the strengths and weaknesses? And also, does it include definition for the strengths or weaknesses?

I've edited my app; Fortune, let me know if you want some clarifications so I can edit it. :)

Ah, I apologize, I believe I've been a bit vague when it comes to the strengths and weaknesses.

As far as strengths go, we're on the same page: things like "stealth" and "hand-to-hand combat" are the character's strengths, or what they're good at, what will help them.

As for weaknesses, I'm looking for things which your character isn't good at, or personality traits which may harm his chances of survival, or an addiction, or an injury/disability.

Some examples of other characters' weaknesses:
- Desmond is an alcoholic
- Scout dropped out of high school, and isn't "book smart"
- Sarah is a reserved, closed-off person
- John has PTSD
and so on.

Those are the kinds of things I'm looking for with regards to weaknesses. In Andrey's case, maybe he has an old war wound which makes it difficult to lift heavy objects? Or, you could build off of the 'remembering the war' part and say he has Post Traumatic Stress?

In the end, for every strength you have listed, you need that many weaknesses minus one.

@FortunesFaded

Last thing you need are yo soldiers with PTSD lol

@FortunesFadedAh thank you!

I've edited my strengths and weaknesses..somehow.

@Comrade Doge Accepted!

@FortunesFaded

I'll be out for a bit. Goota go do some manly stuff...and things. So I'll see you all later

Yes! This is my dream come true to establish a commie faction!

Yes! This is my dream come true to establish a commie faction!

Oh dear god XD

Let's get this party started. Let's get this party started!

Let's get this party started. Let's get this party started!

I'm working on the OOC and IC right now! The rest of my day is pretty much booked though, so Im just gonna go out on a limb and say that neither will be posted until tomorrow.

@FortunesFaded

Rabble rabble rabble

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Oh dear god XD

Wanna join? :p