@NadareRyu That's nice
@Tyrant from the West Funnily enough, I've found a general style of characterization and narration right at the end of last year that I've really enjoyed writing, but it's gotten to the point where it leaks into other characters.
Basically, Shinjiro's a step back away from
Luke Schwarz. Doesn't overreact, doesn't have such a long-winded internal monologue, isn't a constant overthinker in general, isn't trying to be a ripoff of Arararararagi... He just does his own thing, he's brash, he's supremely self-confident, and speaks his mind.
I'm loving both of them, but Luke's style is starting to creep into that of some of my other characters, particularly ones off-site, and that's messing with them.
Not groovy.
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